Okay i wrote a poem and i wanted to know what everyone thinks of it
I am dark.
I will linger in your heart.
Cross your heart.
I hope you die.
I'll stick a needle in your eye.
When you wake up, what do you see?
Look into the dark; you will see me.
You will see but crimson red,
With a face, but no head.
You will fufill my every need.
I am full of quenching greed.
Hear that whisper in the dark?
It could make the dead dogs bark.
Hear me stomping up the stairs?
As you scream and pull your hair.
Hear those awful, screaming sounds?
It's made the living all fall down.
That monster in the closet; Is it just a lie?
Some people swear they've heard a horrifying cry.
True, the monster is not real.
I'm in that closet, deep and dark.
I'll want to make you scream.
This is too real to be a dream.
You'll suffer until your time has come,
Then you will be mine.
You'll hear me walking up the stairs,
And through your bedroom door.
You'll see my shadow through the dark.
Your joy will be no more.
Hold your teddy close and near,
The only thing that you endear.
Only to realize, when you turn around,
Your smile will soon wear into a frown.
Don't you see that I'm everywhere?
I listen to you on the phone.
Anything that you posess,
I've made my own.
I seep into your walls,
And deeply into your mind.
Can't you see that I hold you in my everlasting bind?
You reach for the light; try not to make a sound.
I disappear behind you; you don't dare to look around.
I can sense the movement of your eyes shifting about.
Are you scared of my existence?
I have no doubt.
I'm what's in your head,
When you try to sleep in bed.
I hear that desperate wish of death.
It'll take too long before you take your last breath.
Your life will be in desperate sorrow.
I'll be here when you wake tomorrow.
Don't wait for it to pass today,
Because it's just going to stay that way.
You wake up, and you scream.
Then realize it's just a dream.
You look up, and you see me there,
This horrid face you cannot bear.
I wait for you.
I'm deep inside.
I'm in your soul.
I'm that terrifying whisper in your ear.
Who am I?
I am fear.
