Shinobi Legends Forum - Shinobi Legends Game Site

Please login or register.

Login with username, password and session length
Advanced search  

News:

Please report outages in the thread "messages/server outages", Thanks.

Author Topic: Nobunaga's Tomb  (Read 1038 times)

anbumiko

  • Guest
Nobunaga's Tomb
« on: October 24, 2006, 04:32:44 AM »

mission:: sensei tells you that their has been some incidents involving a temple in the deepest parts of the forest. In which shinobi's have been reported missing for quite some time now. you must go and check the place out, and so you scurry on your way to the deepest depths of the forest.

at the forest: you walk upon the Temple and there you see many bodies of those that you've known, but then you spot something in the shadows and froms the cressed walls. a warrior statue walks towards you forming a sword ready to fight.

stone warrior: hp 120
                    dmg: formed stone blade -20
                   [good outcome]- it misses a few times

gains: 500

continuation: you step over the stoned rubble and you walk to a corridor and stop at a deserted room covered in sand and the only thing you see is a giant tomb
right in the middle.

[a] do you walk upon the tomb and see whats inside
b step back and walk away
 
answer [a] as you walk to the tomb the ground starts to shake and there pops out a hell beast with furious red glowing eyes and chained up arms
you hesitate and fight it.

orochi hell beast: hp 150
                     dmg: Hell's breath -20
                     chain wipe -10
                     saber claws -10
gain: exp 1000

you walk to the tomb and it has inscryptions" you must put in 3 gems in the slots on the tomb and blood to open this tomb..."

[a] put 3 gems in and cut your wrist for the blood (-20 hp)
leave

[a] you open the tomb and there you see a spirit and it vanishes but then as you walk alittle closer you spot 5000 gold and 5 gems.
 


the spirits last words were" you have saved my spirit and now i can rest along with those that bodies lie here as well
« Last Edit: October 24, 2006, 04:55:56 AM by anbumiko »
Logged

Gyu~ru~ru

  • Site Staff (Moderator)
  • Hero Member
  • ****
  • Karma: +327/-317
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 2479
    • View Profile
Re: Nobunaga's Tomb
« Reply #1 on: October 24, 2006, 07:07:26 AM »

Sorry dear but...

Simple event + good exp + a lot of gold + a lot of gems = bad.

The event is too straight forward. You will most likely get the same outcome over & over again. In the end, people will start clicking blindly through it without reading after getting the event a few times.
Logged

SharinganNaruto

  • Guest
Re: Nobunaga's Tomb
« Reply #2 on: October 24, 2006, 07:20:33 AM »

Yeah the rewards are too good. I mean if they didn't give out good stuff all the time. Also,  There could sometimes be bad outcomes, and the rewards have to be smaller. Because like how Gyu~ru~ru says people, will just click through it without reading it.
Logged

anbumiko

  • Guest
Re: Nobunaga's Tomb
« Reply #3 on: October 24, 2006, 05:48:05 PM »

Sorry dear but...

Simple event + good exp + a lot of gold + a lot of gems = bad.

The event is too straight forward. You will most likely get the same outcome over & over again. In the end, people will start clicking blindly through it without reading after getting the event a few times.

ok hun, i will modify it
Logged

Shukaku

  • Hero Member
  • *****
  • Karma: +155/-150
  • Offline Offline
  • Posts: 2788
  • How can my feet smell if they don't have a nose??
    • View Profile
Re: Nobunaga's Tomb
« Reply #4 on: October 24, 2006, 05:56:29 PM »

good idea but still need some changes  ;)
Logged
I'm back to SL !

anbumiko

  • Guest
Re: Nobunaga's Tomb
« Reply #5 on: October 28, 2006, 07:18:05 AM »

Sorry dear but...

Simple event + good exp + a lot of gold + a lot of gems = bad.

The event is too straight forward. You will most likely get the same outcome over & over again. In the end, people will start clicking blindly through it without reading after getting the event a few times.

i want your ideas plz ^^
Logged
 

Page created in 0.049 seconds with 21 queries.