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[Abysss]

Well I was thinking of a kind of store with guy sensei as the store keep where you could earn buffs and charm but lose them as well. (costs 500gold. Can only be done once a day)

(If you don't have enough money)You walk in and search your pockets. Guy frowns and says to come back when you have more money.


You walk in to see Might Guy and Rock Lee awaiting your arrival. Guy asks you if your ready for our youth training. You.....

A. Nod and proceed with your training
B. Looking at Guy's ridiculous training methods, you slowly walk away

(If you choose A)

Guy and Lee smile at you and give you a thumbs up, you can see a little glitter in their smile, Guy then asks if you want to .......

A. Train your body to be ask youthful as ever
B. Work on your handsome manly(womanly if you are a girl) features.

(if you choose A one of two things can happen)
 A. Your strength training with Guy and Lee has paid off! You leave with more youth in you than you came in with.  (attack and defense increase by 5 for 35 rounds)
 B. Guys ridiculous trainig is too much for you and you pull a muscle! You leave with a libm in your stide. (Attack and defense decrease by 5 for 30 rounds)

(if you choose B 1 of 2 things can happen)

A. Guy and Lee bring you to TenTen who is works on your features. You look as Handsome (beautiful if oyu are a girl) as ever! You gain 2 Charm!

B.Seeing as TenTen in not in today, Guy and Lee work on your features and you end up looking just like them! You walk out a little uglier...... You lose 2 charm!



What do you think?

[coolboy0286]

choices are too simplistic, and the outcomes are too predictable (lose 5 for 30 rounds or gain 5 for 30 rounds, gain 2 charm or lose 2 charm) other than that i think its great.

[Abysss]

I am no good with consequnces and out comes >.>, I like to make the story , hopefuly if this is considered Neji can make eviler yte halarious out comes with Guy and Lee>

[coolboy0286]

lets see, i will try to use my idiot brain to change this shop
You walk in to see Might Guy and Rock Lee awaiting your arrival. Guy asks you if your ready for our youth/body training. You.....

1. Nod and proceed with your training
2. Looking at Guy's ridiculous training methods, you slowly walk away

(If you choose 1)

Guy and Lee smile at you and give you a thumbs up, you can see a little glitter in their smile, Guy then asks if you want to .......

A. Train your body to be as strong as ever
B. Train your defenses to be as best as it can be
C. Work on your handsome manly(womanly if you are a girl) features.

(if you choose A)
A1. (60%) Your strength training with Guy and Lee has paid off! You leave with more youth in you than you came in with, but at the cost of some time  (attack increase by 5 for 25 rounds, lose 1 forest fight)
A2. (25%) Guys ridiculous training is too much for you and you pulled a muscle! You leave with a limb in your side. You feel sad for wasting all that time. (Attack and defense decrease by 5 for 15 rounds, lose 1 forest fight)
A3. (15%) While Guy was training you, Lee accidentally hit you with Konoha Senpuu while he was training on the other side of the center, knocking you out. (Lose 75% hp, lose 3 forest fights)

(if you choose B)
B1. (70%) You train as hard as you can and have polished your defensive skills, but defending so much have taken its toll on you. (defense increased by 5 for 25 rounds, lose 85% health)
B2. (30%) While you were training with Guy, he suddently put too much power into his attack and broke your defense, hitting you straight in the face, you then decides to stop and signs for the waste of time. (lose 95% health, 50% if sensei is after Guy, lose 1 forest fight)

(if you choose C)
C1.(70%) Guy and Lee bring you to TenTen who works on your features. You look as Handsome (beautiful if oyu are a girl) as ever! (Gain 1 - 3 charm, lose 1 forest fight)
C2.(30%) Seeing as TenTen in not in today, Guy and Lee work on your features and you end up looking just like them! (50% you gain 1-2 charm and 50% you lose 1-2 charm, lose 1 forest fight)

(if you choose 2)
2a. (25%) As you walk out, people laugh at you for not becoming better looking while you had the chance. (Lose 1 - 5 charm)
2b. (75%) You walk out despite the fact that you could have become better looking.

[Neji]

The last sounds better, but I won't do this as a shop.

also, there might be some things balanced as they do more harm than give out.

the charm option is too much charming
you gain too much guaranteed.

Also, the "2" is not defined up, I can't see where it comes from.

[coolboy0286]

so basically raise up the amount of gain to make it more helpful than destructive? lol

[Neji]

Read my post again.

[Abysss]

The last sounds better, but I won't do this as a shop.

also, there might be some things balanced as they do more harm than give out.

the charm option is too much charming
you gain too much guaranteed.

Also, the "2" is not defined up, I can't see where it comes from.

aw man and i thought i had a good i idea

[Abysss]

the charm option is too much charming
you gain too much guaranteed.

Too much charm guaranteed? But the handsome manly feature thing is guys trsade make , besides Dynamic Entry >.>

[SolAlwyn]

The last sounds better, but I won't do this as a shop.

also, there might be some things balanced as they do more harm than give out.

the charm option is too much charming
you gain too much guaranteed.

Also, the "2" is not defined up, I can't see where it comes from.

1. Nod and proceed with your training
2. Looking at Guy's ridiculous training methods, you slowly walk away

..............

(if you choose 2)
2a. (25%) As you walk out, people laugh at you for not becoming better looking while you had the chance. (Lose 1 - 5 charm)
2b. (75%) You walk out despite the fact that you could have become better looking.

You could, just drop the charm option.  Also if this would become an event, then it could be based off of finding Lee's dojo.

[NaraLong]

charm doesn't do much :s
the only thing you can really do with it is marry tenten...and get a decent buff

[Abysss]

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You could, just drop the charm option.  Also if this would become an event, then it could be based off of finding Lee's dojo.
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Yeah i could be changed to an event like that

[Shiro-chan]

I like the sound of it, it'd be a nice change to see that in the forest. Although, the charm should be less. Neji, are you doing this, because if not, I'd like to take a shot at it.

[Baluski]

I like the sound of it, it'd be a nice change to see that in the forest. Although, the charm should be less. Neji, are you doing this, because if not, I'd like to take a shot at it.

I'd say go ahead, send a copy of the finished product to Neji in 5 buisness days or less and you'll recieve 10 "awesome" points.

[Shiro-chan]

I may not be nearly as old and busy as Neji (With all due repsect; I only mean to say I'm young), but there is no way I'll be able to manage that. Especially when I have to get surgery and my parents are getting a divorce xD. But, I'll start as soon as possible.