A young woman walked into the leaf village. Her name is Inuzuka Zenhira, however the red marks on her cheeks are a dead give away. Her nin-dog, Kana, followed closely behind her. "It looks like we've arived home Kana," Zenhira said. "It seems we are," the nin-dog replied. "It seemed to take longer to get to Iwagakure from here than it did coming back." "Perhaps, but it has been a long time since we've seen the village, we were in a hurry to get here," the woman replied. The two decided to pay the Hokage a visit.
((And that, my friends, is how you RP non-one liners ))
Oh, I'll show you, Maria, how I got a 5.5 on my Florida Writes. >____>
A girl, no more then 10 years old scurried down a rocky path, her
strawberry red and ivory ninja shoes* pounding against the pebbles on the path. She was rushing to get home, she witnessed a terrifing thing a few moments ago, a little boy, her age, killed by two theives in the deep forest a few miles from her home. She tripped and fell sideways onto her right arm, a few sharp tan colored pebbles punctured her skin,
blood oozing slowly out of the wound, staining her
ocean blue,
strawberry red and ivory white shirt. She cringed as she stood up, seeming as if she ingured one of her ankles as well, "
Home... I have to get home..." She mumbled to herself as she limped slowly down the path again, her left hand pressed tightly against the wound on her arm, continueing her path to home.
*Dun know the real name or whatever, go with it. xD