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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #585 on: July 31, 2007, 02:13:01 AM »
Creature's death messages fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #586 on: July 31, 2007, 04:08:52 AM »
Not so tought without your sharingan now are you?
You have defeated Elite Sasuke!

Tough. And shouldn't you capitalize Sharingan? >.>
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #587 on: July 31, 2007, 05:35:58 PM »
Quote from: doomstar on July 30, 2007, 11:26:21 PM
How did it managed to move around with all these weight?

managed should be manage

For heavily armored soldier

Also, it should probably be he or she depending on the picture, no? And these should be that: How did he/she manage to move around with all that weight?
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #588 on: August 01, 2007, 12:17:19 AM »
Sasuke - fixed

As for the heavily armored soldier, besides being used as a pronoun for things or animals, isn't "it" can also be used for something or someone that you are unsure of its gender? But I changed it  to he anyway.
« Last Edit: August 01, 2007, 01:44:14 AM by Gyu~ru~ru »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #589 on: August 01, 2007, 01:17:20 AM »
Viewing Friend's Location on Friends List--


2Ichiraku`0's Ramen

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Slaying Chouji in the Forest--


Wow, I never notice he was this good-looking.

(noticed)

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Slaying First Hokage / Second Hokage in the Forest--


Where did all those water came from?

(that)

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Slaying Inari in the Forest--


did you point that at me?

(Capitalize letter D)


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Slaying Giant Hawk in the Forest--


A hawk this size exist?!

(exists)

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Slaying Shikaku in the Forest--


It really tickles when his shadow was moving up my body.

(tickled)
« Last Edit: August 01, 2007, 08:14:27 PM by Fiyona »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #590 on: August 01, 2007, 02:14:31 AM »
Slaying Sand Shinobi

The sand ninjas that I knew weren't this weak.
You have defeated Sand Shinobi!


The Sand ninjas...?
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #591 on: August 01, 2007, 12:55:38 PM »
Death Messages Fixed.
« Last Edit: August 01, 2007, 12:59:24 PM by Gyu~ru~ru »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #592 on: August 01, 2007, 02:56:29 PM »
In Lilah's Water Country Cityhouse--

Death Defiant Parkzy stands guard at the coffers, prepared with her 草薙の剣 Kusanagi-no-tsurugi.

(Parkzy is most definately of the male gender.. ._.)

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Defeating Heavily Armored Soldier in Forest--

How did he manage to move around with all these weight?

(that)

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Defearting Menma in Forest--

Ops...I think I broke his ocarina.

(Oops)

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Defeating Zaku in Forest--

Doesn't it hurt when they inserted those air tubes into his arms?

(Didn't)

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Defeating Yuuhi Kurenai in Forest--

What sexy ninja... such a shame...

(What a sexy ninja..)

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Defeating Temari in Forest--

So that's how she fan off the heat of the desert

(fanned)

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Defeating Hisame in Forest--

Not even a chain can hold me still. You stupid rope of water didn't stand a chance.

(Your)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #593 on: August 01, 2007, 08:59:25 PM »
dwellings + friendlist fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #594 on: August 02, 2007, 01:27:46 AM »
Death Messages fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #595 on: August 04, 2007, 02:41:48 AM »
Hikaru tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 7 points of damage!
You feel vulnerable again function.
End of Round:
Hikaru's Hitpoints (Level 1): DEAD

(I don't even know what that sentence means, it makes no sense to me. Vulnerable again function? Ehh?)


Death Message-- Hikaru
Was that suppose to hurt me?

(supposed)


Death Message-- Second Hokage
Where did all that water came from?

(come)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #596 on: August 04, 2007, 01:01:08 PM »
Death Messages Fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #597 on: August 04, 2007, 10:30:06 PM »
Sorry.. one day I'll stop reading the game, I promise...


Death Message-- Golem Soldier
Did some kind of spirit just flew out of it?!

(fly)
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Death Message-- Tobio
yeah, yeah, come back again

(Capitalize Y, needs period at end)
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Death Message-- Hyuuga Hiashi
You saw right through him

(needs period at end)
« Last Edit: August 04, 2007, 11:22:07 PM by Fiyona »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #598 on: August 05, 2007, 12:43:44 PM »
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Death Message-- Golem Soldier
Did some kind of spirit just flew out of it?!
I don't think there's anything wrong with the message.

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Quote
Death Message-- Tobio
yeah, yeah, come back again

This is an old creature created by someone else. Thus, not my mistake. No one saw the mistake until now?! [Fixed]
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Death Message-- Hyuuga Hiashi
You saw right through him
Not one of my creation either. [Fixed]
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #599 on: August 05, 2007, 04:33:04 PM »
It's kind of hard to explain gramatically why it's fly instead of flew.. especially since I haven't had an english class in 3 years. It's just one of those things that I just know. Flew does not sound right at all to me. Also, I double checked the sentence with Microsoft Word just now, and they also say that the word should be fly.

As for the old forest creatures, I'm pretty sure there are a few more that have missing punctuation and capitalization, but it just seems too minor to drag myself all the way over to the forums to post everytime. If no one else has posted the mistakes, then it probably doesn't matter to them either, or they are mindless clickers, like I am guilty of being a great deal of the time..

But yeah.. I'm not trying to nit-pick.. just here to help..
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