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[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "That can't be you... you should be a illustrious figure in the world..."

should be 'an'

Also:
illustrous should be illustrious

[Chaoskin]

Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "Cheer up... poor you... the world is mean, I feel like give her a beating!"

I think its susposed to be giving

[Satake]

Someone Disguise As Noroimusha

Should be "disguised".

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

Kimimaro says: "Good. Training will help you use your Shikotsumyaku powers more effectively. A strong bone can thrust right through an opponent, but it is unlikely you can do that. Yet working on your Shikotsumyaku powers will make your bones stronger. Are your ready to train?"

That should be a comma

[Chaoskin]

Are you fixing text issues anymore?

Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "That can't be you... you should be a illustrous figure in the world..."

Its still wrong

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

And illustrious is wrong too.

[ReiseiKosame]

...The Bride Of The VampireLord Baluski anishes somehow, turning into dust and, like the morning mist, dissipating into the woods.... You have not seen the last of her, you are sure of that... but for now, you live...

It should be vanishes. :3

[Mihamaru]

In the Help Me, I'm Lost! section

Legend of Naruto started out small, but with time it has collected many new things to explore.

To a newcomer, it can be a little bit daunting.

To help new players, the Central staff created Eibwen, the imp. He's the little blue guy who told you to buy weapons when you first joined, and helped you choose a race. But what happens next, where should you go, and what are all the doors, alleys, and shops for?

[Neji]

fixed

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

Kimimaro says: "Good. Training will help you use your Shikotsumyaku powers more effectively. A strong bone can thrust right through an opponent, but it is unlikely you can do that. Yet working on your Shikotsumyaku powers will make your bones stronger. Are your ready to train?" 

That should be a comma.

[Neji]

done

[ReiseiKosame]

The handsome Jounin continues to walk with you through the city. "A long time ago, we have been paid a visit by Orochimaru. With him he brought his right hand, Kabuto. He searched in a nearby cave and found a radioactive crystal. The crystal proofed to be very powerful. This crystal was taken by Orochimaru, and it gave Kabuto supernatural powers. It is pertinent that someone destroys him soon... So, will you help us, and eradicate our problem?" One small girl walks over to you, and places a necklace around your neck.

Shouldn't it be proved? :3

[Mihamaru]

The new Kiba skin says "Legend of Naruto".

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

I used Nijuu Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu and it said the following upon activation:


You disappear into the surroundings and creates an illusion around the area.
That should be 'create.'

[Neji]

done