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[ShinobiIceSlayer]

Baa-san's Curry, colour page/

She continues, "To do colorsh, here'sh what you need to do. Firsht, you ushe a ` mark (found right above the tab key) followed by 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, !, @, #, $, %, ^, &, ), q or Q. They are not written into shtone, you know, and may change at any time later on...."

Where the red ` is, it came up with characters and symbols.
Appears to be some sort of error more than a 'Text Issue' but here seemed the right place to post it.

[ShinobiIceSlayer]

Reminder PM when you join a clan.

a:4:{i:0;s:437:"Did you remember to read the description of the clan of your choice before applying? Note that some clans may have requirements that you have to fulfill before you can become a member. If you are not accepted into the clan of your choice anytime soon, it may be because you have not fulfilled these requirements. For your convenience, the description of the clan you are applying to is reproduced below.

%s <%s>

%s";i:1;s:19:"Shimagakure no Sato";i:2;s:3:"島";i:3;s:757:

[hiro]

Aha, I saw that earlier when I applied an hour before you. >>;;

And I'm not seeing the Baa-san's one. >_>

Lady of the Lake:

Then, she fixes her gaze intently upon you and remarks,
"I've seen worst faces in my life, but those were all goblins. Stare no longer upon my waters, you horrid thing.".
She vanishes into the depths of the water and a swarm of biting faeries rush out of the trees to chase you away!

=> worse

[Camel]

You travel through the forest, when you hear something behind you, all of a sudden you find you are surrounded by three Shinobi, but they look different to any you have seen before in the way they dress and carry swords on their backs. You see in front of you two dark skinned Shinobi, a male and female, with a fair skinned female behind you.
The darker female runs at you shouting, "Tell us everything you know about Uchiha Sasuke!"
As she appoarches you the Male tries to stop her. "Wait a mintue Karui! You can't just charge up to them! You might make them angry, they could kill us, or maybe we could start a war with their village!"
The two start to argue when the fair female silences them, them askes you, "Do you have any knowledge of Uchiha Sasuke? We're are here on a mission from the Raikage to gather infoformation on said subject."
You notice their forehead protectors have what appear to be clouds on them, and wonder, could these be Shinobi from mysterous land of Kumogakure?

appoarches => approaches

mintue => minute

infofomation => information

them askes => they ask

mysterous => mysterious

[hiro]

Just saw in someone's bio:

"Born as Yamoto of the Forest" for Mokuton KG.

Should be Yamato

[Neji]

Fixed in Team Samui.

And about the "born as" -> I might think he put that in himself, misleading others.
I can't find "Yamoto" anywhere as text.

Name the player so I can check =)

[hiro]

RaifudoMakashi:

Born as Gai of the Lotus
Born as Yamoto of the Forest
Born as Grand Master of the Uchiha Ichizoku

[Jinsei]

In newday.php (on new days)

"You strap your Fists to your back and head out for some adventure."
(Obvious grammar issues)

Possibly:

"You prepare your Fists for the day and head out for some adventure."
(This text can work with any weapon)

[hiro]

Personally, I always loved the strapping fists line. >>;;

[Neji]

@Hiro

fixed, darn color codes prevented me to search proporly

@fists

yes *cough*
I liked  that "bug" too, so I left it in. I can easily alter that, though it's somewhat nice.
I believe there was a picture made by a player with strapped-fists-on-your-back which I really liked.

2 years ago, or maybe 3. =)
Sheesh, we are getting old, 5 years o.O or is ist 6 already?

[darkshinobi]

I tried boxing the part that was errored, yet, to re-iterate:

Hyuugan just killed someone in the fair fields of "Nin Dwelling," aka a ninja dwelling.

I'm pretty sure that Ninja Dwellings don't have fair fields....>_>


This is a halloween text error.

I looked around, and I've found it in other bios, so it's not just Hyuugan's; his was just the first I noticed in.


Disclaimer: I know this is stupid, yet I do not own the name Hyuugan in any way, or any other name or object on that page, except the name Darkshinobi. I know it's stupid to add this, but I've seen people sued---and beaten---for less.

[Neji]

Won't fix, it's something with the Voodoo stuff I had to do to make Halloween bloody as-is 

Though thanks for the notice.

[Shikki]

Something Special!
You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

Wedgie Man back away from you slowly and you think you must have frightened somehow. Just then he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You around screaming, and frantically try to fling them off, in the process you loss one item.

You lose one ...

Probably:

Wedgie Man backs away from you slowly, and you think you must have frightened him somehow. Just then, he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You run around screaming, frantically trying to fling them off, and in the process you lose one item.

You lose one item.



Or, get rid of the "You lose one item." since it's redundant.

[ShinobiIceSlayer]

I beleive for that case, the You lose one ... is meant to say what you lost.

[Ryo]

Soo.. I was just checking my account info I discovered this:

You are Account Number:

It should be:

Your Account Number:

:3

Edit: Actually.. now I can see it either way.