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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #690 on: November 20, 2007, 01:02:26 AM »
it could be widen, but then the word "and" would be needed <<
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #691 on: November 20, 2007, 09:28:17 AM »
fixed. :twisted:
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #692 on: November 21, 2007, 12:19:52 AM »
Then you see some sort of device, Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx seems to use for its plans. Some levers and buttons are used to operate this device. And one is labelled in big red letters: DO NOT PRESS. This must be the self-destruct button! You start circling around Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx and slowly advance to his machine, ready to set this to an end. Aiming for a heavy blow, Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx loses its balance and this is the perfect moment for you to push the button.

The two "its" should be "his"
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #693 on: November 21, 2007, 12:41:04 AM »
Well, "its" is general and if I recall the event talks about some creature, so gender isn't mentioned. Of course, you'd know their gender if you knew them in-game, but I think it's meant to be that way. Or it IS a typo <<
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #694 on: November 21, 2007, 09:12:30 AM »
no typo, it formerly was "the creature", and I think it's ok to be genderless and not too associated with the event=)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #695 on: November 21, 2007, 08:20:20 PM »
There are different rings. Each ring emphasizes a different aspect. Your true love should get the appropriate ring that fits to your relationsship. Else, the chance of refusal is quite high, so pay attention to your spouse-to-be and the future of you both."

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #696 on: November 22, 2007, 09:53:27 AM »
fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #697 on: December 03, 2007, 02:00:50 PM »
Minor:

You have encountered Hanzaki's Kobun which lunges at you with Stabbing Knive!

Should either be Knife (singular) or Knives (plural).
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #698 on: December 04, 2007, 11:22:24 AM »
I think, You have encountered Hanzaki's Kobun which lunge at you with Stabbing Knives!, would be the correct text.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #699 on: December 04, 2007, 08:46:33 PM »
right.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #700 on: December 19, 2007, 01:16:05 AM »
Travelling the world can be a dangerous occupation.

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #701 on: December 19, 2007, 01:18:51 AM »
I think both forms can be used
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #702 on: December 19, 2007, 02:24:57 AM »
Quote from: Chaoskin on December 19, 2007, 01:18:51 AM
I think both forms can be used

If I am not mistaken, yes you are correct  :D.

Sorry for that guys.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #703 on: December 20, 2007, 01:25:42 AM »
At the training for increasing attack with Hachimon, it says "Juuken Training".
Shouldn't it be "Goken Training"?
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #704 on: December 20, 2007, 10:07:40 PM »
my wrong.
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