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[Ace]

Malignant Sasori laughs and says to Pǿisǿnǿus KBoogi,"I recommend you go back to the academy"

There is no period or exclamation mark at the end in the second sentence.

[ShinoAburame]

You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

The Wedgie Man walks up to you, he seems to be afraid of you. "Hey, made you'd like to share some... things... I have obtained in my travels?"

Wedgie Man shows you his goods, and askes if you would like to do some dealing with him. So after much agruement you finally walk away, though something doesn't quite feel right.

For some reason you you realise you have 800 less gold then when you first saw the Wedgie Man.


Askes should be asks, and realise should be realize.

[Gyu~ru~ru]

Cane has earned the title Chuunin for having slain Orochimaru 5 mal!

Didn't it used to be times? Did someone mess with the translation? D=

[Neji]

@Shino
fixed, however realise is also possible. (british english)

@gyu
translation thingy, it's German, and he had German as language.

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

If we're doing changes with the "realises" to "realizes"...then there are A LOT more to be made (or as far as I've seen). I think it should just be left in British English.

[Gyu~ru~ru]

Something Special!

You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

Wedgie Man backs away from you slowly and you think you must have frightened him somehow. Just then he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You run around screaming, and frantically try to fling them off, in the process you loss one item.

You lose one ... <- doesn't say what I lost.

[Gi]

http://wiki.shinobilegends.com/index.php/Ninja_Central



Ninja Central
From ShinobiWiki

Original Ninja Central

Ninja Central is a general place that does not take part in the anime/manga.
Konoha Gakure in SL

Ninja Central is the capital city of SL. It is a place where no races reside, but holds many important buildings and places such as the Hall of Fame. Konoha is usually full of talkative high rankers, talking about well...nothing. Ninja Central is a fun and important place that is a must-visit for most characters.

[Raifudo Oppa]

valentines event spelling:
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Something Special!
You are approached by a figure cloaked in red - you can't even see the face under a very long hood.

As you grow suspicios, you hear a voice like golden honey flowing down a waterfall of milk:

"Will you be my valentine?"

Puzzled, you realize he/she/it wants an answer.

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Suspicious?

[Neji]

my bad.  not enough sleep =)

[Demon Bandit Taumaster]

http://wiki.shinobilegends.com/index.php/Ninja_Central



Ninja Central
From ShinobiWiki

Original Ninja Central

Ninja Central is a general place that does not take part in the anime/manga.
Konoha Gakure in SL


Ninja Central is the capital city of SL. It is a place where no races reside, but holds many important buildings and places such as the Hall of Fame. Konoha is usually full of talkative high rankers, talking about well...nothing. Ninja Central is a fun and important place that is a must-visit for most characters.

Fixed.

[Doshi]

As an Mist ninja, you are keenly aware of your surroundings at all times; very little ever catches you by surprise and have lightning reflexes.


An should be changed to a.

Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

This problem occurs in all Races, as far as I know..

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You stand on the forest floor. Konohagakure rises about you, appearing to be one with the forest. Ancient frail-looking buildings appear to grow from the forest floor, the tree limbs, and on the very treetops. The faces of the Hokages are high above these homes of the leaf nin. Bright motes of fire swirl around you as you move about.

I might be wrong, but I believe that about should be changed to above.

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You stand on the hidden entrance of this village. Otogakure rises about you, appearing to be one with the surrounding. You sneak in silently... as all visitors do so in this forbidden Sound village..

Same issue as before(If I was right): ...about should be changed to above.

[Gyu~ru~ru]

Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

Yes, you are wrong. It's a single sentance, so "you" should not be repeated twice.

I might be wrong, but I believe that about should be changed to above.

Above: All around or on all sides. Above would mean that the city rises over your head...

Same thing about Otogakure.

You are correct about one thing thou, the "an <race> ninja".

[hiro]

Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

Yes, you are wrong. It's a single sentance, so "you" should not be repeated twice.

In the sentence, "Little" acts as the noun, so "you," as a direct object within the predicate, needs to be repeated.

[Gyu~ru~ru]

We are learning English =D

[Ite]

This is an overview of the Gardens(example):

Looking around the Gardens you see... Academy Student Example,Hunter Nin Example,Genin Example,Chuunin Example

This text issue always occurs in the gardens (the section in which it shows who else is there).

The Issue: between each comma and a name, there should be a space.