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LeafToad

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #390 on: April 19, 2007, 11:37:44 PM »

This may just be semantics, but:

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Sannin eyecue stands with prepared Longbow of the Daimyo guard at the coffers.

Shouldn't that read:

Sannin eyecue stands guard at the coffers, prepared with his/her Longbow of the Daimyo.

Instead of his/her, just "their". I sometimes get tired of the his/her thing and it lessens the mood of the text.
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RAIKIRI

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« Reply #391 on: April 21, 2007, 01:46:24 AM »

"When I am known I am nothing
When Im unknown I am something what am I."

I am something, what am i?
or
...I am something.

What am I?


or just get rid of the what am i, most riddles i encountered dont have them
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« Reply #392 on: April 21, 2007, 08:04:32 AM »

fixed.
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« Reply #393 on: April 24, 2007, 10:54:48 PM »

When defeating someone with a bounty on their head:

"When you turn around, Dag Durnick is standing there. "*edited out name* had a bounty of 2000 on th' head", he says as he tosses you a leather purse which clinks with the sounds of your new fortune."

Your Sensei.
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« Reply #394 on: April 26, 2007, 05:12:08 PM »

You don't have enough gold with you to pay for the food. Merick refuses to feed your creature and advises you to look for somewhere else to let your Pakkun graze for free, such as in the Forest.



it makes no sense
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« Reply #395 on: April 26, 2007, 05:15:57 PM »

You don't have enough gold with you to pay for the food. Merick refuses to feed your creature and advises you to look for somewhere else to let your Pakkun graze for free, such as in the Forest.



it makes no sense

To one who has a firm grasp on the english language, it does. Next!
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« Reply #396 on: April 29, 2007, 07:43:44 AM »

Baa-san's Curry
You duck out of the tavern, and wander into the thick foliage around you. That strange mist revisits you, making your mind buzz. The mist clears, and you find yourself again where you were before the mist first covered you.
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« Reply #397 on: April 29, 2007, 09:53:31 AM »

done
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« Reply #398 on: April 29, 2007, 12:30:37 PM »

"Uh, um. How much?" you ask.

Sakura thumps your ribs with her finger for a sec. "For you... 415 gold pieces for a complete heal!!" She says as it bends over and pulls a clay vial from a stack of them in the corner. . "I also have some, erm... 'bargain' potions available," she says as she gestures at a pile of dusty, cracked vials. "They'll heal a certain percent of your damage."
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« Reply #399 on: April 29, 2007, 01:03:27 PM »

fixed
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SharinganNaruto

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« Reply #400 on: May 01, 2007, 06:16:06 AM »

Well I didn't know where else to put this but, the Horrible Blob thing is still in the Hall Of Fame. Yea, it should be Missing Nin I believe.
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« Reply #401 on: May 01, 2007, 12:11:25 PM »

Where exactly in the HOF, which section.
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LeafToad

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« Reply #402 on: May 01, 2007, 11:02:47 PM »

When giving up your membership to the Akatsuki...

Itachi nods, and rolls up your shirt sleeve. He tears a tattoo that had been put on their from you initiation, and tosses your 0 gems to you. He also takes all of the souls that you have, and uses them to spare you the pain of death.

there and your
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protofusion

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« Reply #403 on: May 01, 2007, 11:19:33 PM »

in the personal info it says




home city       fire country





dosent that seem wrong due to the fact that a city cant be a country

   
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« Reply #404 on: May 02, 2007, 10:02:29 AM »

all fixed.
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