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Fiyona

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #525 on: June 15, 2007, 11:53:56 PM »
PERVY PEEPING ON HINATA


You try to take a deeper look... well, everything might happen now.

(Wouldnt "anything" make more sense here?)



Instead, she offers you a friendly smile... like a childhoodfriend would. Your jealousy if wiped away... the only thing left is a GREAT warm feeling in your heart.

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LeafToad

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« Reply #526 on: June 16, 2007, 06:57:14 AM »
In the forest, at the start of the Sasuke fight(not sure if it is just for suicidally or not), he says "I will avenge my parents". It should be clan, as he always says that... Not meaning to nit-pick. >>

No, I don't have a direct quote, sorry.
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« Reply #527 on: June 16, 2007, 09:59:28 AM »
=) we'll keep that in mind

@fiyona
fixed.
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« Reply #528 on: June 16, 2007, 10:08:34 AM »
Sasuke shouts: "I will avenge my parents..."!

I think the exclamation point should be inside the quotation marks.
Maybe like this:
Sasuke shouts: "I will avenge my parents!"
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« Reply #529 on: June 16, 2007, 11:31:14 AM »
ok.  :eek:
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« Reply #530 on: June 19, 2007, 04:19:19 AM »
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« Reply #531 on: June 19, 2007, 05:43:03 PM »
Quote from: opop on June 19, 2007, 04:19:19 AM
Its the Dark Horse  one

http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p16/ramenboy88/untitled-13.jpg

There's no grammatical or spelling errors, please only post here when it's an actual problem. =)
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opop

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« Reply #532 on: June 19, 2007, 06:12:19 PM »
Sorry i meant isn't it supposed to be Ba-sans curry
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« Reply #533 on: June 19, 2007, 06:15:45 PM »
Ah, that explains it. Yes, yes it is. *smacks his forehead*
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opop

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« Reply #534 on: June 19, 2007, 06:29:02 PM »
Doesn't know if he is being sarcastic. *Runs far away while watching  Obey the Moderator
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« Reply #535 on: June 19, 2007, 08:04:17 PM »
fixed
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« Reply #536 on: June 20, 2007, 04:31:16 PM »
You ask him: 'And what is your name?'... and it takes a few moments... then he says: 'Thank your asking! I am the Gama-Sennin from the Myouboku Mountain! You ponder about him... and realize you have heard of him before: 'You are no Gama-Sennin (frog hermit)! You are the legendary Ero-Sennin!!!'

Shouldn't it be?:

You ask him: 'And what is your name?'... and it takes a few moments... then he says: 'Thank your asking! I am the Gama-Sennin from the Myouboku Mountain!' You ponder about him... and realize you have heard of him before: 'You are no Gama-Sennin (frog hermit)! You are the legendary Ero-Sennin!!!'
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« Reply #537 on: June 20, 2007, 08:21:13 PM »
colours fixed, thanks.
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RAIKIRI

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« Reply #538 on: June 22, 2007, 04:43:30 AM »
Erm, im not sure since i didnt get this event but in Kotomi's post, shouldnt "Thank your asking" be Thank you for asking?

Also,

But with you being so focussed on caring for your safety it is no problem for this shadow to appear behind you and send you to the vale of dreams.

Shouldn't it be Focused and a comma after safety?
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opop

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« Reply #539 on: June 23, 2007, 08:40:52 PM »
Quote from: RAIKIRI on June 22, 2007, 04:43:30 AM
Erm, im not sure since i didnt get this event but in Kotomi's post, shouldnt "Thank your asking" be Thank you for asking?

Also,

But with you being so focussed on caring for your safety it is no problem for this shadow to appear behind you and send you to the vale of dreams.

Shouldn't it be Focused and a comma after safety?
Something Special!
Baa-san's Curry
"Well... letsh shee what I know about Genin itachiclone," she says...

Name: Genin itachiclone
Race: Leaf
Level: 5
Hitpoints: 63
Gold: 0
Weapon: Genin's All-out War Wakizashi
Armor: Tabi Boots and Socks
Attack: 20
Defense: 10

Genin itachiclone ish alsho much uglier shan you!

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W00tee Scribe Opop ish alsho ash ugly ash you are.
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