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Title: Text Issues
Post by: 0 on July 09, 2006, 11:27:34 PM
I think we need a place to put misspelled text so here.

"That beastie be one o' me finest!" says the dwarf with pride.

Creature: Katsuya
Description: This giant blue and white slu[color=red:2beae5ad95]g[/color:2beae5ad95] can talk oddly.
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Post by: Lebis on July 10, 2006, 12:05:03 AM
That's how you spell slug....


Now... Here's a mistake..

Oh no! Seems you attracted a guardian dog!
You try to play 'sit' with him, but apparently he is not eager to do so... yet wants to take a bit of your enormous ... <- To me, it doesn't mak
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Post by: Neji on July 10, 2006, 12:29:35 AM
fixed & fixed =)

the red marking by risuku is good, please mark it always like this ^^

the first one was a typo from Ann, the second from me as I hate only one thing about module-making...all the texts :D I can create good texts without moduleco
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Post by: Xaos on July 10, 2006, 05:07:19 PM
[quote:b621cd0315]
Ichiraku's Ramen
Something Special!
A very drunk Tsunade stumbles into you as you make your way across the crowded room.

[color=red:b621cd0315]S[/color:b621cd0315]he is carrying a nearly full glass of ale. As [color=red:b621cd0315
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Post by: Neji on July 10, 2006, 06:51:29 PM
thx, fixed too =)
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Post by: Lebis on July 10, 2006, 08:28:22 PM
Well, if Seth is supposed to be Lee when that happens for the girls... You might want to fix that..

I just thought that Seth was a random name. So why not keep Violet for the guys? >>
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Post by: Xaos on July 10, 2006, 08:41:21 PM
Because the color of the name is violet. Also I guessed it was Tenten because the other version of this random has Tenten as then name and not violet.
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Post by: Lebis on July 10, 2006, 10:39:32 PM
The colour of the name Seth is yellow for me.
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Post by: Xaos on July 10, 2006, 11:07:39 PM
What happened (I think) was that who ever coded the rnadom in put Violet for the color of the name and also as the name itself. Like if this happened in the random for women then it would have said Yellow instead of Seth.
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Post by: Neji on July 10, 2006, 11:19:11 PM
[quote:a4c3983f14="Lebis"]The colour of the name Seth is yellow for me.[/quote:a4c3983f14]

sure

and also Lee should be in there now, I copied over a fixed version =)


violet+seth were the default names of them, but a major rewrite made them conf
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Post by: Xaos on July 10, 2006, 11:26:27 PM
I think there's something wrong with the Text when you use the clone atk for Ninjutsu btw. I has the same message as LOTGD skeletons. I don't remember it off the top of my head though.
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Post by: Neji on July 11, 2006, 12:02:06 AM
yes....as there were things changed :-/

did I mention that the current system ist *§$IUHF$* ^^

all buff messages need replacement...hm.

I'll see what I can do.
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Post by: 0 on July 11, 2006, 12:07:18 AM
Haha, yeah you mentioned that.

Anything I can help with? I was thinking about redoing the Whole text after you slay orochimaru.

I was gonna kill him, copy & oaste then edit...
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Post by: Baluski on July 11, 2006, 02:19:01 AM
If you're changing Violets you may want to look into the Fountain in Water Country when you toss a coin in and when the when you run from the Old Man with a stick in the forest. I think there may have been another, I don't remember.
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Post by: 0 on July 11, 2006, 03:28:58 AM
When listening to Lee the Bard.

[b:4b3eff4164]Seth[/b:4b3eff4164] seems to sit up and prepare himself for something impressive. He then burps loudly in your face. "Was that entertaining enough?"
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Post by: Lebis on July 11, 2006, 04:05:29 AM
That's weird. I've never gotten that before...

(You're picture is really deep Baluski.)
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Post by: 0 on July 11, 2006, 10:58:40 AM
Instant Ramen (3)
Soldier Pill (8)
Instant Ramen (4)
Chouji's Soldier pill (1)

I just saw this in town.

I have two groups of Ramen. Aren't they supposed to be combined?
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Post by: Baluski on July 11, 2006, 04:35:44 PM
Same for me, I have 2 sets of 2 ramen.

And I want Chouji's soldier pill, sounds like a great item.
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Post by: 0 on July 11, 2006, 05:15:09 PM
i love chouji's soldier pill is amaizing!!!!
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Post by: Neji on July 11, 2006, 06:07:23 PM
^^ fixed
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Post by: 0 on July 12, 2006, 03:12:13 PM
"Twas in December or June,
When my lady did swoon.
When her hair did fall off,
And her glasses were lost.
When she did scream,
In a manner most obscene.
While pointing at me,
And saying [color=red:2d5bcbc00f]�[/color:2d5bcbc00f]Eeeeee! Eeeee
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Post by: Neji on July 12, 2006, 03:41:54 PM
? erm, I don't know that text.... where...?
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Post by: 0 on July 12, 2006, 04:03:10 PM
sorry i didn't want to give it away. it is a riddle.
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Post by: 0 on July 12, 2006, 06:09:37 PM
hey at the Ninja Academy from level 12 to level 13 You have encountered Hyu[color=red:bf66060357]u[/color:bf66060357]ga Hiashi which lunges at you with Jyuuken!
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Post by: Neji on July 12, 2006, 06:51:43 PM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyuga_Clan

as you cannot put non-latin letters in here, the "u" with the line above is a prolonged "u". So usually you use an "u" to indicate a prolonged letter in japanese.

I.e. Hyuuga Ichi
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Post by: 0 on July 12, 2006, 06:54:49 PM
o ok, neji :)
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Post by: Lebis on July 22, 2006, 01:30:59 PM
I found another Seth thing. This time, it was for the fountain.

Pulling a coin from your pouch, you utter a small wish and toss it in.

The coin hits the water and you wonder if [u:28668d6a87]Seth[/u:28668d6a87] will be desperately in love with you,
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Post by: Neji on July 22, 2006, 01:45:59 PM
fixed.
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Post by: Lebis on July 23, 2006, 03:31:23 PM
In the Mission head quarters...

As you approach, a small brown dog with a leaf headprotector and blue jumpsuit at his feet raises [u:c1d64a22ee]her[/u:c1d64a22ee] head and looks at you, it's Pakkun. Sensing that you belong, he lays down and goes back t
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Post by: Neji on July 23, 2006, 10:58:12 PM
fixed.
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Post by: Xaos on July 24, 2006, 07:27:28 PM
[quote:d5221e181b]After a few minutes you are surrounded by ANBU members.

"Greetings! Your good work has spread around, honorable warrior. It's good to see someone like you around here. Bad guys always lurk around here in the deep woods."

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Post by: Lebis on July 24, 2006, 07:33:38 PM
Also, I'd like to note that while in the Weapon and Armous shops of Fire (and maybe the others) it says MightyE's Weapons at the top of my browser tab. And for The armous shop, it says Pegasus Armour for the tab. Also, in the armour shop, where it usually
Title: Hrmm
Post by: Xaos on July 26, 2006, 08:06:00 PM
~ ~ ~ Fight ~ ~ ~Hrmm guess some things didn't make it over.
You have encountered Hyuuga Hinata which lunges at you with Byakugan!
After the fight:
Hopefully [color=red:96acb3017b]he[/color:96acb3017b] didn't see your bunny pants...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 03, 2006, 03:28:18 PM
fixed ^^ :good:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on August 28, 2006, 09:09:23 AM
Creature: Neko
Description: A feline cat, bread (bred?) with agile (agility?) from the gods. She gets stronger as you do.
Cost: 777 gold, 75 gems



Merick offers you 7333 gold and 73 gems for your Pakkun.


My message: >.> ... <.<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 28, 2006, 10:53:40 AM
yes, one of Ann's leftovers (the very few text ones)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: dude no.1 on August 28, 2006, 09:28:14 PM
in the new player primer

Death is a natural part of any game that contains some kind of combat. In Legend of the Green Dragon, being dead is only a temporary condition. When you die, you'll lose any money that you had on hand (money in the bank is safe!), and some of the experience you've accumulated. While you're dead, you can explore the land of the shades and the graveyard. In the graveyard, you'll find Ramius the Overlord of Death. He has certain things that he would like you to do for him, and in return, he may grant you special powers or favors. The graveyard is one of those areas that you can't get to from the main Square. In fact, while you're dead, you can't go to the village square at all!

Unless you can convince Ramius to resurrect you, you'll remain dead until the next game day. There are 3 game days each real day. These occur when the clock in the village square reaches midnight.

i thought it was shinigami :?:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 28, 2006, 09:44:21 PM
true, I'll check this.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Sriracha on August 29, 2006, 12:22:47 AM
Erm, I already fixed this with a new one yet cannot find how to put this into PHP file. Sorry Neji. ^_^;;;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 29, 2006, 12:03:57 PM
Erm, I already fixed this with a new one yet cannot find how to put this into PHP file. Sorry Neji. ^_^;;;

^^ if it's the naruto faq and the file I sent you... look over it... just put your  text into
output("");
and use the colour codes there. the rest of the functions are not of interest to your =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on August 31, 2006, 01:57:36 AM
After Shukaku passes out due to meeting the maximum amount or rounds.

Where Shukaku once stood, sand now begins to sin(k)? into the ground.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 31, 2006, 10:27:22 AM
Another leftover ^^ thanks.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on September 01, 2006, 11:37:09 AM
You Stumble Upon a Grassy Field


You give Pakkun a snack, he tells you he's ready to contuine.

Should be "continue"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on September 11, 2006, 01:42:50 AM
The Academy. <.<

Bluspring's Warrior Training
Your pride prevents you from using extra abilities during the fight!
~ ~ ~ Fight ~ ~ ~
You have encountered Shizune which lunges at you with Pois(o?)ned Needles!


>.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 11, 2006, 10:25:07 AM
fixed, also the headlines.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Sriracha on September 28, 2006, 02:55:41 AM
The Uchiha Clan has a minimum Dragonkill limit of 1, and you don't pass it.

I was on my chunnin account. I believe I should've passed. Well I did pass, at least I'm an applicant right now, but still bothers me that words deny me. >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on September 28, 2006, 04:49:12 AM
Also.. In Mystie's it gives the description:

Blah, blah, blah, blah. Hey hey! I Mystie. And welcome to my Sweets Shoppe!"

Should it be, I'm Mystie?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on September 29, 2006, 02:13:15 AM
"Shattered around you lie the remainings of once mighty items, destroyed by the power of the dragon's flames. It seems 2 items have been destroyed. "

Maybe change it to...Orochimaru's hatred?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on September 29, 2006, 04:12:46 AM
Or Orochimaru's Evil(dark, black) aura?

I prefer Dark or black. >.>
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Post by: Baluski on September 29, 2006, 05:17:22 AM
Or Orochimaru's Evil(dark, black) aura?

I prefer Dark or black. >.>

How about Malevolent Aura?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 29, 2006, 09:54:09 AM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: emoney on October 04, 2006, 03:15:15 AM
and in the battle arena should'nt it say Sodaime Hokage Bunshin instead of Shodaime Hokage Bunshin
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 04, 2006, 07:23:54 AM
Sodaime? I don't know him.

I think it is "First One" (hokage) which is Shoudaime (to be precise)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 07, 2006, 06:12:36 PM
DeadInside Event

And so he starts his liturgy about his almighty evilness and after a while... you hear voices shouting from the entrance of the cave. A struggling fight seems to be going on and it is coming closer. Soldiers wearing black leather and with animal skins around there (their) shoulders are fleeing.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 07, 2006, 06:17:17 PM
fixed.
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Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 08, 2006, 05:38:32 AM
Buff

Shinigami`$' Blessed Weapon
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Post by: Neji on October 08, 2006, 10:39:30 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 08, 2006, 04:59:37 PM
While trying to write a story in the public library in Fire Country...

Here, you can write in your content. I highly suggest, that you confirm your spelling and grammer(grammar) before hand. Since we hold true to copyrights, and will not be able to edit your story.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 08, 2006, 06:38:57 PM
fixed
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Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 09, 2006, 02:57:45 PM
Buff

Shinigami`$' Blessed Weapon

Now it's Shinigami' Blessed Weapon. Isn't it suppost to be Shinigami's Blessed Weapon?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 09, 2006, 04:19:51 PM
good point.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 12, 2006, 01:55:44 AM
Akimichi Choza(this is also for all the other senseis) has heard of your prowess(progress) as a warrior, and heard of rumors that you think you are so much more powerful than he that you don't even need to fight him to prove anything. His ego is understandably bruised, and so he has come to find you. Akimichi Choza demands an immediate battle from you, and your own pride prevents you from refusing the demand.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on October 12, 2006, 04:18:21 AM
Prowess is a word...

1.) Exceptional valor, bravery, or ability, esp. in combat or battle.
2.) Exceptional or superior ability, skill, or strength: his prowess as a public speaker.
3.) A valiant or daring deed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 12, 2006, 12:23:52 PM
Oh, nevermind then. I didn't think I would need to look it up since it seemed like progress...
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Post by: emoney on October 14, 2006, 04:00:29 AM
in the rice field country battle arena it says Zone Main. is'nt it suppose to be Main Zone
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Post by: SnowLeoHitori on October 14, 2006, 05:59:35 AM
Itachi looks you over, and smiles at your Ring of Life. Looks over his glasses and stares deep into your body.

Urmm... I didn't know Itachi wears glasses >.> ...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: klaymank on October 14, 2006, 06:02:15 AM
nither did i
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Post by: Neji on October 14, 2006, 10:32:20 AM
in the rice field country battle arena it says Zone Main. is'nt it suppose to be Main Zone

it is, but I was lazy and wrote "Zone x" ... and in the main zone, x=main...in zone 1, x=1

and so on =)

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: klaymank on October 14, 2006, 05:24:20 PM
Im gonna Be Honest I Dont read the special events so i wouldnt know if their are any text issues
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 14, 2006, 05:53:52 PM
klaymank, thanks for your comments who don't belong here... this is your personal issue if you look into it or not.


You would not bother posting into a support forum "hey guys, great you offer support here, but I don't own anything from you, see you!"

Please... every minute taken away by reading & posting at useless entries in work areas reduce work time on something more important by 1.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on October 18, 2006, 01:01:07 AM
What The Mess!

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One of the town ninja is strolling about the garden and walks up to remind you that the garden is a place for roleplaying (romantic especially) and peaceful conversation, and to confine out-of-character comments to the other areas of the game.

In the Gazebo you are asked about the romantic part.You answer that you can't act romanticly in the guardens.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 18, 2006, 10:11:13 AM
Here is the exact sentence:

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"It is ok to get romantic in an adult manner in the Gardens.",

Please, read the FULL sentence before posting it as an error.

There is a huge difference in kissing a girl softly on the cheek and initiating a tongue twister.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 18, 2006, 10:11:34 AM
The Orochimaru pauses, breathing heavily before continuing, "I will tell you a secret. ..... and be as powerful as me and inherit my mind." Breath comes shorter and shallower for the Orochimaru.

Shouldn't it be either The Great Orochimaru or just Orochimaru? The Orochimaru sounds weird =.=
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 18, 2006, 10:40:12 PM
You gasp as the sight of Black Apples and reach for one. Sichae pulls out a plunger and jams it onto your head.
"So, you choose the apple that is the color of your heart..." You snicker a bit.
Sichae pull(s?) out her sword and cuts off the plunger, as well as a bit of hair... "You think it is funny? I can see your ugly heart...a monstrosity..."
You begin to sweat, you can feel shivers run up and down your spine. A Black Apple is thrown into your mouth. You take a big bite out of it. Your skin turns black for a bit.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 18, 2006, 11:24:16 PM
fixed.
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Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on October 19, 2006, 02:02:06 AM
I wasen't sure what it ment.
Thnx for clearing it up.
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Post by: ShadowNinja on October 19, 2006, 02:16:11 AM
Itachi *spoiler* forges a gem. With a burst of light, Leon hands you a single gem.

it should be Itachi hands you a single gem
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on October 19, 2006, 03:42:12 AM
*Pokes Oliver's forehead.*

You still haven't fixed the part where it say "Hi, hi, I Mystie!" In the Sweet's Shoppe.

I'm Mystie is what it should be.
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Post by: Neji on October 19, 2006, 08:53:56 AM
*Pokes Oliver's forehead.*

You still haven't fixed the part where it say "Hi, hi, I Mystie!" In the Sweet's Shoppe.

I'm Mystie is what it should be.

did you mention it somewhere?

@shadowninja
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 19, 2006, 08:57:12 AM
Also.. In Mystie's it gives the description:

Blah, blah, blah, blah. Hey hey! I Mystie. And welcome to my Sweets Shoppe!"

Should it be, I'm Mystie?

Page 4
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 19, 2006, 09:01:46 AM
ok, sorry then.
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 19, 2006, 07:21:06 PM
While going to Baa-sans Curry, One of the options is to "Talk to the Baa-san. The "the" should be taken out in my opinion, unless I'm missing something...

Also, while searching up myself at the Curry place, there's a 7 after it tells you if someone is uglier or more beautiful than you... For example : Anbu LeafToad7 ish alsho ash ugly ash you are.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 19, 2006, 07:25:54 PM
Thanks, fixed.
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Post by: emoney on October 20, 2006, 02:31:51 AM
general: another character of YOU blah blah blah blah

but should it not be YOURS?
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Post by: Neji on October 20, 2006, 08:33:39 AM
general....what?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: emoney on October 21, 2006, 01:54:00 AM
general....what?

oh my bad its in the gazebo place. i did'nt get to copy exactly what it said but its somerthing the gardener asks you.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 21, 2006, 03:18:31 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 26, 2006, 01:38:49 AM
Something Special!

You Stumble Upon a Grassy Field


Kyuubi sits for a few momment(moments) to regenerate.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 26, 2006, 09:40:33 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on October 28, 2006, 02:11:50 AM
At the gazebo
General: Insulting someone does always cause only a temporary punishment.
I have no idea what this is suppose to say :?:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on October 28, 2006, 02:25:56 AM
i know what it means but i cant explain well. im not naturally english or american  :P
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Post by: emoney on October 28, 2006, 03:25:35 AM
its asking you if insulting someone can only get you a TEMPORARY punishment.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 28, 2006, 10:13:24 AM
 :D

is the English bad or the thinking too weird?

plain English: "if you call somebody names, you are only banned temporarily all the time"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on October 28, 2006, 01:11:03 PM
ho ok. sorry then. i said i didnt wanted to offend anyone  :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 28, 2006, 10:29:11 PM
Where do you recall growing up?

Fire country, where the Leaf shinobi are from theres a little town called Konoha.

It doesn't make sense to me with the "theres"

Maybe: "Fire country, where the Leaf shinobi are from, in a little town called Konoha."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 29, 2006, 10:38:39 AM
Races will be replaced by another system in the not-too-far future ;)

please bear it for now
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on October 29, 2006, 11:10:32 PM
I caught this before I logged on
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Academy Student stryfe has been slain in the forest by Tanzou.
Tanzou laughs at Academy Student stryfe, "You actually tried to win? Not even your Ground Nails did help against my Short Sword!"  
shouldn't it be any  help.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on October 31, 2006, 12:03:44 AM
The Outhouse:
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In typical caste style, there is a privileged outhouse, and an underprivileged outhouse. The choice is yours!
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You pay your 5 gold to the Toilet Gnome for the privilege of using the paid outhouse.
This is the cleanest outhouse in the land!
The Toilet Paper Gnome tells you if you need anything, just ask.
He politely turns his back to you and finishes cleaning the wash stand.

I think "caste" should be "woodland".
Caste really means class or type of class.

Should "pay" be made into "give"?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: emoney on October 31, 2006, 02:50:45 AM
in the forum under Discussion it says Changes to Discuss

should'nt it say Chances to discuss?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinobi on October 31, 2006, 03:10:57 AM
I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be like that.To discuss the changes in the game.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 31, 2006, 04:28:09 PM
The Outhouse:
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In typical caste style, there is a privileged outhouse, and an underprivileged outhouse. The choice is yours!
Quote
You pay your 5 gold to the Toilet Gnome for the privilege of using the paid outhouse.
This is the cleanest outhouse in the land!
The Toilet Paper Gnome tells you if you need anything, just ask.
He politely turns his back to you and finishes cleaning the wash stand.

I think "caste" should be "woodland".
Caste really means class or type of class.

Should "pay" be made into "give"?



caste is caste.... and it should be that.

"pay your xx to" is the same as "give xxx to"

it is also about language levels...

"how r u" == "how are you" == "how are you feeling today" == "dear friend, good to see you, how are you feeling on this beautiful day"

are different language levels but have the same meaning.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on October 31, 2006, 11:36:23 PM
In Rai Ninjutsu while using Ikazuchi no Kiba, you get this:


Kabuto suffers 45 damage from the lightning stike(Strike)!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on November 01, 2006, 01:32:32 AM
i think ive found a error:
You have encountered Naruto which lunges at you with Kage Bushin no Jutsu!

it should be bunshin i think.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 01, 2006, 09:29:24 AM
fixed & fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: emoney on November 03, 2006, 01:53:44 AM
in Saucy's Kitchen it says after you eat that brain food thingy that you look at it with Disgust

should'nt it day with Discust
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on November 03, 2006, 01:54:53 AM
lol i think its disgust .
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 03, 2006, 03:19:00 AM
Disgust is right.. Discust isn't a word.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 03, 2006, 09:21:31 AM
in Saucy's Kitchen it says after you eat that brain food thingy that you look at it with Disgust

should'nt it day with Discust


No, Disgust is the noun of "to disgust".

You might want to look up the stuff in a dictionary before you post :(
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on November 04, 2006, 02:49:34 PM
LOL

You have encountered Yamanaka Ino which lunges at you with long hairs & sexiness!

 think that should be hair.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 04, 2006, 03:05:54 PM
LOL

You have encountered Yamanaka Ino which lunges at you with long hairs & sexiness!

 think that should be hair.

hm, I don't know.

Is it "She has long hair" or "She has long hairs (as a weapon 'wielding' in her hand)"

it is not about her general hairs, but like when she cut off her hair against Sakura, was it that her *hairs* help her, or her *hair*?

As not native speaker, somebody with proper education in his native language might have *now* the chance to speak up (before I ask my old English teacher)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on November 04, 2006, 03:16:09 PM
hair sounds alot better ok.
At leat to me it does >>.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on November 04, 2006, 03:40:42 PM
Hairs is preferable.

Hair would be the thing you wear on your head, and brush every morning, or every hour like I do (too long, gets knotted easily).

But that's beside the point. As Oliver said, it would be as if she's wielding it and not head butting people to attack with her hair. When it's on your head, it's like a whole, but without an A, and is replaced with her. Yet when she cut it off, it's like wielding hairs.

At least I think that's how it goes. >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on November 05, 2006, 12:55:02 AM
Just leave it :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on November 05, 2006, 03:58:14 AM
Or just do Hair(s)

^.^

(I'm going to sticky this seeing how it's becoming the "Post text errors here" thread.)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on November 06, 2006, 10:20:51 PM
Level: 9
Start of round:
Genin ByakuganLion's Hitpoints: 95
YOUR Hitpoints: 118
You hit Genin ByakuganLion for 5 points of damage!
Genin ByakuganLion tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 1 points of damage!
Next round:
You hit Genin ByakuganLion for 33 points of damage!
Genin ByakuganLion tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 12 points of damage!
Next round:
You hit Genin ByakuganLion for 12 points of damage!
Genin ByakuganLion tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 4 points of damage!
Next round:
You hit Genin ByakuganLion for 24 points of damage!
You hit Genin ByakuganLion for 1 points of damage!
Genin ByakuganLion tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 4 points of damage!

You have destroyed a person... strangely, it makes you more evil.

You have destroyed a person... strangely, it makes you more chaotic.

You have defeated Genin ByakuganLion!
You receive 624 gold!
***Because of the simplistic nature of this fight, you are penalized 124 experience!
You receive 1116 experience!


Now Notice...It says it makes you more evil and more chaotic. Don't know if that's just left in there from the update and never changed, or if it's supposed to be like that. Just pointing it out.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on November 06, 2006, 10:27:43 PM
I'm pretty sure it's supose to be like that.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 06, 2006, 10:48:30 PM
Xaos hit the spot.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on November 06, 2006, 10:57:53 PM
Ok, just making sure it wasn't a mess-up =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 09, 2006, 10:36:41 PM
Neji, I hope you know where this is from, because I don't wanna spoil the thing, and I'd appreciate it if no one else said what it was... I just find the sentence weird looking.

Original text:
"are the last words you hear before your heart stops to pound... "

I'd say "are the last words you hear before your heart stops pounding... "

Just a thought.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 09, 2006, 10:56:20 PM
LOL

You have encountered Yamanaka Ino which lunges at you with long hairs & sexiness!

 think that should be hair.

On this note, you should add in the revised creature list I sent you, Oliver. <.< >.>

And Hairs is correct.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on November 10, 2006, 12:05:24 AM
I'd like to point out that the level four master in the academy, Shizune, I believe, weilds Poisened Needles.

Pois-o-ned. >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 10, 2006, 01:33:08 AM
@ leaftoad
where is the sentence?

@lebis
my bad
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 14, 2006, 02:40:07 AM
Once you ask your sensei for a special mission your sensai points you gruffly or something like that.....
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 14, 2006, 09:08:00 AM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 16, 2006, 07:10:01 PM
From "The Strategy Hut" in Konoha: "There is a dragon, and when you are ready, it will be too. Patience."

There is someone known as Orochimaru,

he
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 16, 2006, 07:18:58 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on November 17, 2006, 01:19:13 AM
Friend Count
You have 1 logged-in friends.

Should it be?
You have 1 logged-in friend(s).
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 17, 2006, 07:03:26 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on November 17, 2006, 05:15:08 PM
The apple shop:

"Which would you like my dearie, they each cost 904 gold...?"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 17, 2006, 05:25:41 PM
"Kage cursedweirdo is critically wounded and drops down consciousless falls down unconscious... yet it seems nobody wake woke up... excellent... you can continue on your plundertour plunder tour... "
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 17, 2006, 06:20:43 PM
thx, fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on November 17, 2006, 11:30:17 PM
You gain a level in Suiton Ninjutsu. All in all, you have 17 skillpoints with this specialty and 18 all in all!

Should be:

You gain a level in Suiton Ninjutsu. You have 17 skillpoints with this specialty and 18 in all!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 17, 2006, 11:35:33 PM
as far as I was tought in school: "all in all" <--> "summing all up" <--> "in total"

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: DeAtHdEmOn on November 17, 2006, 11:38:45 PM
It just sounds wierd.
I've never seen a sentence like that...(Except here)

The friend(s) is not fixed :(.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 19, 2006, 06:05:12 PM
You stand in a small area... not knowing which way is up. You are surrounded in darkness, as the pit of your stomach falls out... Just when you feel that you are about to slip into death, the Talisman around your neck begins to light up...

Yet, it begins to cough and sputter. You frown, as you your soul is slowly ripped away by Ramius. <<< shouldn't that be Shinigami ?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 19, 2006, 10:05:15 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 21, 2006, 11:42:19 AM
In the gazebo
General: Insulting someone does always cause only a temporary punishment.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 21, 2006, 04:20:26 PM
ok, thanks for highlighting. where is the error?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 21, 2006, 06:10:30 PM
ok, thanks for highlighting. where is the error?

General: Insulting another member can, and will, cause a temporary punishment.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 21, 2006, 06:14:55 PM
it's a gazebo question:

General: Insulting someone does always cause only a temporary punishment.


and you click "wrong"

because I CAN and WILL permanently ban people who constantly insult others =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 22, 2006, 04:15:01 AM
Makes no since..... how about?

At all times insulting someone will only result in temporary punishment
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on November 22, 2006, 07:01:15 AM
I liked Baluski's revision more myself, but that's just because I have this abnormal sopfistication with grammar.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 22, 2006, 11:48:54 PM
Isn't it just one of those tricky ones.

Saying that if someone insults, they can only be temporarily banned, and not permanently banned.

But Neji has the power to permanently ban someone, and can take it more far than a temporary ban...

So of course, it would be a false statement.

"General: Insulting someone will only cause a temporary punishment."

More understandable and is the same as what it was previously.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 23, 2006, 02:52:12 AM
Yes stick with that, the does is what kills me.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 23, 2006, 09:56:58 AM
It is supposed so be a tricky statement, exactly.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on November 24, 2006, 02:25:00 AM
Don't ask why I always catch the slightest rext errors.. .___.;

But in the weapon shop (Hokage ranked?) there's a Wodden Kunai? (Level four weapon)

What the hell does wodden mean? >>

I keep thinking it's supposed to be like.. wooden or something.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 24, 2006, 04:15:16 AM
Was trying to send a message to someone when...

This user cannot receive any more mail, he has too many mails in his/her inbox. Please wait until he/she has freed some space.

Something minor, but it was weird, cause I was sending a message to a female of the game.

This user cannot receive any more mail, he/she has too many mails in his/her inbox. Please wait until he/she has freed some space.

I guess "his/her inbox" could be changed to "their inbox" along with the other, sounds a little better. >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 24, 2006, 07:55:08 AM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on November 25, 2006, 09:39:04 AM
I used a specialty elixir in a forest fight... This seems like a text issue or am I missing something? >.>

You drink from the elixir and...
You gain a level in Suna Ninjutsu. All in all, you have 15 skillpoints with this specialty and 16 all in all!

Nothing happens.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on November 25, 2006, 04:16:21 PM
Yea, that confused me while I was making that item ><

Everytime I tried fixing it it would still appear...
(You DO gain the level though ^.^)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 25, 2006, 04:48:47 PM
Is it a big thing? :) we can live with that now. There is a new version of the item system out, but I don't  trust it until be can thorougly test it (good reason to)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 27, 2006, 03:08:40 AM
When you go to listeen to lee the bard you hear a tale of Cedric and his unclean beer. You don't really gain anything from the tale but you do happen to notice a few gold on the floor.

Shouldn't be a few pieces of gold or some gold.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 27, 2006, 02:33:51 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 27, 2006, 04:26:48 PM
When you go to listeen to lee the bard you hear a tale of Cedric and his unclean beer. You don't really gain anything from the tale but you do happen to notice a few gold on the floor.

And if you didn't catch that part, Ichiraku.

Also, there's the MightyE's Weaponry one that should probably be Shizunes.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 27, 2006, 05:42:07 PM
I thought about leaving Cedric in ;) but I guess I'll kill that sentence.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: kboogi on December 01, 2006, 07:40:51 PM
The body of Shôku Lôrd KBoogi was found in the woods, stripped of all gold and with dark symbols drawn upon it.


*sighs*
Why does the poor little shoku has to be called "it"
 :?:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 01, 2006, 07:41:41 PM
"it" refers to "the body" where "symbols are drawn upon".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on December 01, 2006, 10:52:59 PM
An error for the Neko mount.

Neko flips into battle, hissing at Yashamaru.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 7 points of damage.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 12 points of damage.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 8 points of damage.

Neko's claws cut <enemy> for <x> points of damage.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 02, 2006, 12:11:50 AM
An error for the Neko mount.

Neko flips into battle, hissing at Yashamaru.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 7 points of damage.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 12 points of damage.
 Neko claw cuts Yashamaru for 8 points of damage.

Neko's claws cut <enemy> for <x> points of damage.

Mounts will soon be deleted. =) I'll let it in for now.

edit: Ignore the killed comment, I won't answer here.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: asdfjkl on December 02, 2006, 10:19:16 PM
are we getting our gems back if mounts are deleted?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 02, 2006, 10:25:04 PM
mind my edit, I don't answer questions off topic, this thread is not the correct one.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: emoney on December 05, 2006, 03:42:13 AM
You've flirted with the following people.
If you send least 15 flirt points, a person can propose to you.

should'nt it be,
You've flirted with the following people.
If you send at least 15 flirt points, a person can propose to you.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 05, 2006, 11:05:48 AM
fixed, thanks, but please add a section there...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on December 05, 2006, 11:27:14 AM
Gather 'round and I'll tell you a tale
most terrible and dark
of amazon women and her naughty talk
and how they beat up this bard!

You realize he's right, Cedrik's beer really is nasty. That's why most patrons prefer his ale. Though you don't really gain anything from the tale from Lee, you do happen to notice a few gold pieces on the ground!

What do amazons and Cedrick have in common that they were placed in the same event?  :-?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on December 10, 2006, 01:00:12 AM
~Tattoo Removal~

Sakura looks at you, "Let's get this over with. You've already wasted a lot of my time." She pulls out a device that looks like a cheese grater and presses it to your skin. In a fury of movement, you pass out from the pain. You wake up later and find that your %s tattoo is missing, yet in its place is a large scar.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

%s tattoo? >>

If I do recall... I got the tiger removed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 10, 2006, 11:18:16 AM
fixed, %s is a substitute for a string
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Griever on December 10, 2006, 09:16:42 PM
Taken from the Item Merchant in the Forest.

You can click on an item to sell it instantly to the merchant. The quantitiy is shown behind, i.e. x2 means you have 2 items to sell.

Isn't it quantity?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 11, 2006, 06:31:34 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Sacrifar on December 13, 2006, 12:08:17 PM

"Suuna Ninjutsu

Suna Shuriken (1)
Suna no Yoroi (3)..."


Suna should be one letter 'u' only.. :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 13, 2006, 04:50:19 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on December 14, 2006, 09:37:53 AM
Something Special!
You cautiously run over to the source of the screaming and you find a little boy, stuck in a well. You look down and hear the little boy call out for help. Smiling, you chuck a few rocks down, bludgeoning the kid. After you throw a rather large rock, no sound is heard. You dust of your hands and walk off into the woods.
 Shouldn't it be off?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 14, 2006, 10:49:46 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on December 14, 2006, 11:00:13 AM
Quote
Exodus begins to get angered at the very sight of you. Exodus' fury begins to rattle his chains. "Do not try to fool me, for you shall pay the dearest of prices."

Exodus tosses out a chain that binds you. He throws you from the depths of the hole and you slam into a tree. "Maybe I should wait until after I kill the dragon, before I go back."

...kill Orochimaru, before I go back.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 14, 2006, 01:38:23 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on December 15, 2006, 07:20:12 PM
When you mine for gems:
You found the mother lode Shouldn't it be load?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on December 15, 2006, 07:26:45 PM
When you mine for gems:
You found the mother lode Shouldn't it be load?

Nope.

lode /loʊd/ Pronunciation Key - Show Spelled Pronunciation[lohd] Pronunciation Key - Show IPA Pronunciation
–noun
1. a veinlike deposit, usually metalliferous. 
2. any body of ore set off from adjacent rock formations. 
3. a rich supply or source. 
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: anbumiko on December 16, 2006, 06:12:40 AM
for some of the events ex*giving my wife the necklace it still shows white font"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 16, 2006, 11:05:20 AM
for some of the events ex*giving my wife the necklace it still shows white font"

ok, and now we try to produce sentences others might understand
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on December 16, 2006, 02:42:00 PM
He's saying there are still some events/things that show a white font still after you changed the codes...

For example: Giving a necklace to his wife, shows up in a white font.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 16, 2006, 02:44:44 PM
Ah, ok.

And now, I would like to know which template is in use...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: anbumiko on December 17, 2006, 05:02:03 AM
anbu
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 17, 2006, 09:38:27 AM
Ok, now, give me the  exact location and where it did happen exactly, I have seen all fonts normal.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on December 18, 2006, 12:21:57 AM
After leaving the Akatsuki on an alt given to me by my friend...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Leon nods, and rolls up your shirt sleeve. He tears a tattoo that had been put on their from you initiation, and tosses your 21 gems to you. He shakes his head, noticing you have no souls left over... the removal of the tattoo destroys your fragile body.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Who the hell is Leon? >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on December 18, 2006, 01:50:45 AM
Suna Ninjutsu


Growing up, you always loved playing with sand ... so you studied sand ninjutsu, giving you the power protect yourself and destroy others with sand.

Growing up, you always loved playing with sand ... so you studied sand ninjutsu, giving you the power to protect yourself and destroy others with sand.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 18, 2006, 03:06:53 PM
fixed & fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on December 18, 2006, 10:20:47 PM
Great Snownin KyuubNaruto was killed and eaten as  for challenging Mr. Black, companion of Lady Erwin.
Does the as need to be in there>.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 18, 2006, 11:39:01 PM
Great Snownin KyuubNaruto was killed and eaten as  for challenging Mr. Black, companion of Lady Erwin.
Does the as need to be in there>.>

to be honest, it felt right ;)

due to my translator, the phrase "as for" is only used as "as for somebody/something" ... which means "which concerns sb/sth"...

any other feelings from native speakers with some language proficiency?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on December 18, 2006, 11:54:41 PM
any other feelings from native speakers with some language proficiency?

It can be either way really... it's just how some people interpret it. I say "as for" myself sometimes. ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 19, 2006, 12:01:42 AM
and how do you feel about  the original sentence I used there?

Quote
Great Snownin KyuubNaruto was killed and eaten as  for challenging Mr. Black, companion of Lady Erwin.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on December 19, 2006, 12:13:52 AM
and how do you feel about  the original sentence I used there?

Quote
Great Snownin KyuubNaruto was killed and eaten as  for challenging Mr. Black, companion of Lady Erwin.

It fits well... "as" means related to, out of its many meanings. So "as for" can mean 'related to', and he was killed related to(or because) challenging Mr.Black.

Yet again... it doesn't have to be in there... but it can. ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on December 21, 2006, 06:36:12 PM
I always thought it sounded fine...

But why I'm typing another message is because of the Lady on the Lake.

She was mean to me and called me ugly though.. >>

Then, she fixes her gaze intently upon you and remarks,
"I've seen worstworse faces in my life, but those were all goblins. Stare no longer upon my waters, you horrid thing.".
She vanishes into the depths of the water and a swarm of biting faeries rush out of the trees to chase you away!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 21, 2006, 06:38:58 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on December 22, 2006, 01:50:08 AM
ummm, is this right
----------
Ssnowpalacen Jutsu: attack organs (18)
All those s's cant be healthy
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on December 22, 2006, 02:52:46 AM
Shousen Jutsu?

House is filtered to Snowplace because of the Christmas thingie. >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Yata on December 22, 2006, 08:55:11 PM
Got this from attacking with Gama:

The big frog extends his tounge, latches onto Female Ninja and slams him into the ground for 8 points of damage.

Should be spelled tongue, and switch him to her.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on December 22, 2006, 08:57:26 PM
I doubt the "him" will be changed.



edit: well, i just got owned :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 22, 2006, 09:22:59 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Dev on January 01, 2007, 02:22:00 AM
When your master comes to you on a new day and fights you for having too much experience:

Shizune has heard of your prowess as a warrior, and heard of rumors that you think you are so much more powerful than he that you don't even need to fight him to prove anything. His ego is understandably bruised, and so he has come to find you. Shizune demands an immediate battle from you, and your own pride prevents you from refusing the demand.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on January 01, 2007, 03:13:56 AM
Thats right man :?:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on January 01, 2007, 03:32:48 AM
eurm sin harvest...shizune is a "she" :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SinHarvest on January 01, 2007, 03:40:14 AM
OH!, I thought he meant grammer wise :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 01, 2007, 02:55:54 PM
When your master comes to you on a new day and fights you for having too much experience:

Shizune has heard of your prowess as a warrior, and heard of rumors that you think you are so much more powerful than he that you don't even need to fight him to prove anything. His ego is understandably bruised, and so he has come to find you. Shizune demands an immediate battle from you, and your own pride prevents you from refusing the demand.



I am aware of that. Yet there is a problem =) I can't alter it without changing the core code.

*hm* I will replace it with some neutral text, no gender displayed anywhere.
Title: Cedrik is still in shinobi legends...
Post by: SramShadow on January 05, 2007, 11:24:30 AM
i got this event when Lee the bard sings:

Lee clears his throat and begins:

Gather 'round and I'll tell you a tale
most terrible and dark
of amazon women and her naughty talk
and how they beat up this bard!

You realize he's right,** Cedrik's** beer really is nasty. That's why most patrons prefer his ale. Though you don't really gain anything from the tale from Lee, you do happen to notice a few gold pieces on the ground!


isnt supposed to be Ichiraku?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 05, 2007, 09:27:30 PM
true.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on January 12, 2007, 09:28:23 PM
Shattered around you lie the remainings of a once mighty item, destroyed by the malevolent aura of Orochimaru. It seems 4 items have been destroyed.

Shattered around you lie the remains of a once mighty item destroyed by the malevolent aura of Orochimaru. It seems 4 items have been destroyed.

No comma. <<;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 12, 2007, 09:36:29 PM
 :twisted: fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on January 12, 2007, 10:53:56 PM
I don't like it when you use that face, Oliver. >>

You probably left the comma in it. <<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 13, 2007, 09:14:01 AM
I don't like it when you use that face, Oliver. >>

You probably left the comma in it. <<

(http://shinobilegends.com/devil.gif)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 15, 2007, 09:04:43 PM
erm i dunno if this is only me but when you use `0 at the bottom, your text looks green. When you press enter it shows up as grey.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 15, 2007, 09:53:45 PM
`0 is no color. it resets to the last color which was used there.

if you use `0 in an uncolored text, this will happen.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 15, 2007, 10:16:00 PM
but i rarely use green... anyways the top of the sensei page where you ask him for a mission says Dag Durnick's table.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 15, 2007, 10:34:35 PM
Okay, I fixed that.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 16, 2007, 02:14:41 AM
how bout this: when you go to the loveshack in the gardens and buy a drink, it says cedric slides..blah blah blah to you.

shouldnt it be ichiraku or gai?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 16, 2007, 10:32:10 PM
Right... but the drinks are somewhat of a problem -_- you don't see the code that's underneath... quite some... garbage ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 17, 2007, 10:55:47 PM
Ichiraku the innkeep  stands behind his counter, chatting with someone. You can't quite make out what he is saying, but it's something

innkeeper i presume.

also the title trhingy when y ou sneak into th e inn has `2 and `0.

some minor things. :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on January 24, 2007, 07:15:13 AM
Something Special!
Knowing that the water could yield deadly results, you decide to take your chances. Kneeling down at the edge of the stream, you take a long hard draught from the cold stream. You feel a warmth growing out from your chest...
It is followed by a dreadful clammy cold. You stagger and claw at your breast as you feel what you imagine to be the hand of the reaper placing its unbreakable grip on your heart.

You collapse by the edge of the stream, only just now noticing that the stones you observed before were actually the bleached skulls of other adventurers as unfortunate as you.

Darkness creeps in around the edges of your vision as you lay staring up through the trees. Your breath comes shallower and less and less frequently as warm sunshine splashes on your face, in sharp contrast to the void taking residence in your heart.

As you exhale your last breath, you distantly hear a tiny giggle. You find the strength to open your eyes, and find yourself staring at a tiny fairy who, flying just above your face is inadvertantly sprinkling its fairy dust all over you, granting you the power to crawl once again to your feet. The lurch to your feet startles the tiny creature, and before you have a chance to thank it, it flits off.

Shouldn't it be drought and inadvertently?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on January 24, 2007, 05:05:14 PM
Draught is correct, but inadvertently needs to be changed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 24, 2007, 10:47:53 PM
Fixed ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 25, 2007, 02:06:37 AM
when you travel to wind, the top says wind country, city of men. What's that mean?

Also, when you look someone up at Baa-sans, in the results it says he insted of she.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 25, 2007, 07:36:30 PM
both fixed, thanks  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on January 28, 2007, 03:05:06 AM
The Gardens


You walk through a gate and on to one of the many winding paths that makes its way through the well-tended gardens. From the flowerbeds that bloom even in darkest winter, to the hedges whose shadows promise forbidden secrets, these gardens provide a refuge for those seeking out Orochimaru and his gang; a place where they can forget their troubles for a while and just relax.

One of the town ninja is strolling about the garden and walks up to remind you that the garden is a place for roleplaying (romantic especially) and peaceful conversation, and to confine out-of-character comments to the other areas of the game.

For those who do unappropriateinappropriate roleplay here or start to fight or generally disturb: Ban.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on January 28, 2007, 03:51:53 AM
Shouldn't "roleplay" be "roleplaying"..Just a thought..:P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 28, 2007, 08:10:40 AM
^^ my fault, "un" and "in" are hard to distinguish when you are German and write English.
Because, in German it would be "unpassend" and in English "inappropriate".
There are many "un"'s who go "in"'s in English. (or "im's)

I think the "roleplaying" should be ok too (can't judge really, both feels ok) so I changed it.



Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Sriracha on January 30, 2007, 12:12:38 AM
Would lowering the max characters in messages help reduce server stress?

...Because I noticed that not many people really look at all 4036 characters of their messages. People always delete the excess baggage if they're in the red zone anyway. (Red Zone = Over Limit)

If it did put some stress maybe just reset it to like 3500?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 30, 2007, 12:50:03 AM
the 13th armor for acads is Ninja Disquise

disguise?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: sushigewd2.0 on January 30, 2007, 12:51:13 AM
If people are confused about minor spelling mistakes........... no offense but they arent too bright.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on January 30, 2007, 12:38:31 PM
If people are confused about minor spelling mistakes........... no offense but they arent too bright.
Well that's you and please don't post here unless you found a text error ok?
Guess you're not too bright yourself? ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 30, 2007, 05:40:01 PM
thanks, fixed  :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on January 31, 2007, 01:59:05 AM
X has somehow survived the deadly strokes of Oliver, protector of Lady Erwin.

Oliver or mr.Black?


Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on January 31, 2007, 04:15:01 AM
Oliver is the owner of Mr.Black & Lady Erwin =p
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 31, 2007, 08:39:24 AM
Former  :smt022

Inevitable things happen.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 01, 2007, 12:12:43 AM
O.O never mind then...

Erm how about this : ______ made it out of the Abandoned Castle  alive! in ____ moves!

Oro's hideout?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 01, 2007, 06:37:29 PM
Where did you encounter it?

in the news it was always Oro's hideout
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on February 01, 2007, 06:52:45 PM
Where did you encounter it?

In one's bio.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 01, 2007, 08:25:04 PM
hand me over a name ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on February 01, 2007, 08:56:31 PM
Raikiri, check under the 28th I believe.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 01, 2007, 09:32:35 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 04, 2007, 09:29:55 PM
...sneaks behind you and a kunai touches your rips slightly...

I dont want to spoil the event so i hope this is enough.

Ribs?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 05, 2007, 07:41:32 PM
my wrong. fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on February 06, 2007, 06:51:38 AM
*Thwaps Oliver on the head.* You said you fixed it before too.

Sometimes I think you say 'fixed' to make us happy. Tsk, tsk. Naughty, naughty.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 06, 2007, 06:38:24 PM
Yes, I am naughty.
100%

 :twisted: so what

 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on February 06, 2007, 06:53:40 PM
No *wonder* you didn't give me a hard time when I told you to put your title Naughty. >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 06, 2007, 07:37:35 PM
 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on February 14, 2007, 11:06:38 AM
Something Special!
Dragons wait for no man.
You continue on your way down the trail without another thought.

I thought it was Orochimaru?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2007, 01:51:33 PM
^^ fixed, thanks.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on February 14, 2007, 02:13:32 PM
"I'll be damned!!" he blusters, "You got it! No lunch for me I guess..."
"Oh very well. Here's your stupid prize."

He looks deep in your eyes, then whacks you hard across the side of your head. And gives you a sip of the infamos Akimichi brew. When you come to, you feel a little bit smarter.

You gain a level in Suna Ninjutsu. All in all, you have 13 skillpoints with this specialty and 14 all in all!



Because of donations made, the gods grant you 10 percent discount on the healing costs.




i think it should be imfamous
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2007, 03:33:17 PM
I think it should be infamous ;)

At least it is in the dictionary like this.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on February 14, 2007, 04:09:30 PM
The bomb has injured your opponent!
Your opponent takes 3 damage from the bomb.
Your opponent takes 5 damage from the bomb.
Your opponent has recovered from the bomb injurey

That's when you use a flash bomb...
Shouldn't it be Injury? And also, when you use a shuriken, when the buff ends, it only says "You".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2007, 04:22:46 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on February 14, 2007, 05:28:50 PM
Something Special!

As you were about to bent over to pick up the mysterious scale, a creature with the head of a dragon, the antlers of a deer, the skin and scales of a fish, the hooves of an ox and tail of a lion suddenly appears out of nowhere and attacks you! It's the legendary creature that only comes from it's lair during Chinese New Year, the creature known as Kirin!

bend
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2007, 07:15:07 PM
That slipped through. Sorry.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on February 14, 2007, 07:23:08 PM
It still only says "You" when your shuriken salvo ends >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2007, 08:06:52 PM
Elaborate.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on February 14, 2007, 09:01:18 PM
I tried to fix it, but I couldn't find the place for the text. Basically, this is what it says when it runs out.

Your enemy takes 3 damage from your shuriken!
Your enemy takes 1 damage from your shuriken!
The Gods shield you from your foe.
Lethal Kaori hits you for 7 points of damage!
You
End of Round:
Lethal Kaori's Hitpoints: 278
YOUR Hitpoints: 820
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 14, 2007, 11:00:06 PM
I m not sure this fits here but i didnt want to create a new topic just for this.

when you do pink (`r) the system automatically changes r to are. Pink is now an invalid color. Also when you try to color the "r" seperately (for ex. `!R`@aikiri) the r also changes to are. The rresult is something like this : are aikiri.

J. C. Petersen  looks at you carefully, "One extra forest fight each game day will cost you 100 points

tsunade?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 15, 2007, 08:12:47 AM
I thought I fixed the "r" problem. edit: yes, I did, it works.


Fixed the text change.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 16, 2007, 12:26:01 AM
reallly???? but it doesnt for me at all. 

<beg>Anbu Captain RAIKIRI converses, "`are attack"

i typed `r attack

is it only me?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on February 16, 2007, 01:33:09 AM
Works for me when I capitalize the R.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 16, 2007, 01:54:31 AM
aha captalize... lemme try

nope, same result. is it only me? i still get `are.

I tried in water by the way.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 16, 2007, 12:38:26 PM
aha captalize... lemme try

nope, same result. is it only me? i still get `are.

I tried in water by the way.

strange though, I tested it at the grotto, no big deal.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on February 16, 2007, 12:51:07 PM
Well.. it DOES filter it because it's an abbreviation for 'are' right?

Just why y = why, no?

Should you just remove the 'are' thingie out or something?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 16, 2007, 02:06:15 PM
`r should not be filtered.

r should be.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on February 16, 2007, 04:21:40 PM
Elaborate.


Wow. Can't believe you said that. :P

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Samantha on February 16, 2007, 05:38:35 PM
Mando snaps his forked tongue around Gouzu & Meizu!
Mando coils around Gouzu & Meizu, crushing him for 7 points of damage.
Mando coils around Gouzu & Meizu, crushing him for 3 points of damage.
Mando decids he doesn't want to fight anymore and leaves.

Mando decides

Also in the Battle arena:
Diedara Bunshin Level 25

Deidara Bunshin Level 25

Neither one is anything big, sort of nitpicking.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 16, 2007, 06:01:59 PM
fixed  ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on February 16, 2007, 09:27:19 PM
`r should not be filtered.

r should be.


Then why is it doing it ONLY when it's lowercased? For me at least.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 17, 2007, 01:04:24 AM
its not only me... i asked my friend sounga to try it and same result happened, `r turned into `are and so did `R
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 17, 2007, 08:29:07 AM
`r will be replaced, make it `rmyword ... and it won't.

The next game update should fix this.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on February 21, 2007, 02:33:11 AM
alright then thanks.

I'm not sure if this is text but it seems like it. When you clikc withdraw from your cityhouse, either the first one dosent count or one of them dosnet show because i apparently get 4 withdrawls and only 3 work. on the fourth i get no gold yet it tells me i have one more withdrawal.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on February 26, 2007, 02:29:38 AM
Quote
You know though that upon telling Tenten, sonny be bound  to find you more charming.

Is it supposed to say that?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 27, 2007, 10:19:33 AM
Quote
You know though that upon telling Tenten, sonny be bound  to find you more charming.

Is it supposed to say that?

could you give me where the sentence is from?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on February 27, 2007, 02:01:17 PM
Quote
You know though that upon telling Tenten, sonny be bound  to find you more charming.

Is it supposed to say that?

could you give me where the sentence is from?

When there's an old beggar and you have a choice to give a gem, a gold piece or all of your gold.

I think that line is when you give him a gem.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 27, 2007, 02:04:59 PM
Ah ok, I replaced that one.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on March 03, 2007, 03:01:13 AM
"You step into Oliver's Jewelry Store and are greeted by a elederly man in spectacles. Oliver folds his hands on a small bench and his eyes twinkle."

~You step into Oliver's Jewelry Store and are greeted by an elderly man in spectacles. Oliver folds his hands on a small bench and his eyes twinkle.~
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 03, 2007, 02:08:01 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 03, 2007, 05:17:21 PM
when i gazed at hinata it said that she cast a chanting jutsu on me yet the buff is called
elvish haunting charm
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 03, 2007, 06:35:13 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 06, 2007, 12:25:31 AM
Ichiraku's ramen, it says Ichiraku the barkeep

Barkeeper?

Also, when you buy sake in there, the top title bar thing of the window says `2I`5chiraku no `Rame`2n

(something like that, not sure about colors)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 06, 2007, 09:19:37 AM
Quote
Ichiraku the innkeep stands behind his counter, chatting with someone

<--- this? if not, clarify the location =)

the other one is fixed =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on March 06, 2007, 07:07:47 PM
Quote
You see a really huge Stone where many names seem to be carved it... quite a few spectators have gathered there.

Shouldn't it be "in it"? It's at the Gardens.

Quote
After a few moments you are able to take a look. Names seem to be written in large, friendly letters ... they glow magically... someone whispers: "So these are the names of great heroes... who helped to create this entire realm... the higher the more they achieved...".

Shouldn't the be a "," between "higher" and "the"?
That's at the Stone of Legends.

Quote
A vast temple folds out in front of you. A grand tapestry lines the floor, depicting a heroic battle against the Dragon Queen. A surge of power overwhelms you and you collapse to the ground.

And should it be Dragon Queen? Since this is a Naruto game after all...I think it should be changed to "Kyuubi"...But that's just my thoughts.
That's at the Temple of Shadow and Light.

Quote
In the background you see a mountain side with 4 faces carved into the rock.

Shouldn't it be 5? >.>
Fire Country main.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 06, 2007, 08:49:51 PM
All done =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on March 06, 2007, 09:08:50 PM
You will need a new picture for konoha gakure  :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 06, 2007, 09:12:58 PM
 :cry:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 06, 2007, 10:22:30 PM
this is exactly what the page says

[text]
You drink from the elixir and...
You gain a level in Taijutsu. All in all, you have 10 skillpoints with this specialty and 11 all in all!



Nothing happens.
[/text]





and for some reason my webpage tab says legend of the green dragon
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 07, 2007, 12:26:42 AM
Quote
Ichiraku the innkeep stands behind his counter, chatting with someone

<--- this? if not, clarify the location =)

the other one is fixed =)

that and on the sidebar thing, when you click "talk to ichiraku the innkeep"

EDIT:

This shady person comes to talk to you and offers y ou a potion for 125 gp while touring the inn

Whne you click pay 125, and gives you a charm potion, it says, this is one of Cedric's charm potions.

Ichiraku?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on March 07, 2007, 02:41:08 AM
In the title bar while in Rice Field Country, it says "Rice Field Country City"
and I was wondering if the "City" could be edited out...

It's a tiny annoyance, but it sort of contradicts itself.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 07, 2007, 09:38:07 AM
this is exactly what the page says

[text]
You drink from the elixir and...
You gain a level in Taijutsu. All in all, you have 10 skillpoints with this specialty and 11 all in all!



Nothing happens.
[/text]

any specific location?

the "nothing happens" will vanish, it's already scheduled for update.



and for some reason my webpage tab says legend of the green dragon
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 07, 2007, 02:39:59 PM
i was in the forest of either water country or rice field country
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 07, 2007, 08:16:40 PM
and you did what in the forest? was it during the drinking?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 07, 2007, 11:31:24 PM
i was in the forest and i didnt know i had it so i drank it and it went to that screen
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 08, 2007, 12:38:21 AM


In the Faq's under number four

4. Does that have something to do with the titles that people have?
But of course!
Indeed, every time you kill the dragon, you return to level one. If you kill the dragon enough times, you get a new title. So low level players with titles have had opportunities to embiggen themselves. (see Hall of Fame)


orochimaru?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 11, 2007, 01:08:54 AM
i was on the mission to search the caverns to find a ninja and when i started fighting the ninja it says

"you have encountered Minotaur which lunges at you with Bone Club!"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 11, 2007, 09:32:05 AM
hm, another half-translated one by Ann...

I think I got all text parts. =) thanks.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on March 12, 2007, 08:51:22 PM
Speaking of Ann, she's still appears in the Kissing Booth in the Gardens.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 12, 2007, 09:10:20 PM
removed ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 13, 2007, 01:25:44 PM
when i became a lvl 15 i clicked challenge master and this came up



you stroll into the battle grounds. Younger warriors huddle together and point as you pass by. You know this place well. Bluspring hails you, and you grasp her hand firmly. There is nothing left for you here but memories. You remain a moment longer, and look at the warriors in training before you turn to return to the village.



whos bluespring?





then i killed orochimaru and it said this


A small female shinobi walks over to you and begins to extract a black energy from you via some weird and stunning jutsu. As your spirit is drained, the small faerie returns to the gardens.



Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 13, 2007, 03:59:19 PM
all fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on March 14, 2007, 04:07:45 AM
When travelling, "Continue on Path" -> "Dragons wait for no man. You continue on your way down the trail without another thought."

Oro.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Arkatsson on March 15, 2007, 01:20:53 AM
The weapons are not shinobi like in some cases.


UNICORN blood forged scimatars?

There are more cases but I've forgotten.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 15, 2007, 02:29:22 AM
i at the curious looking rock and it says this


    
—Veterans Lounge—
Back to the Lounge

   
      
   
      
   
You step closer the Great Fire where many heroes sit around...

You listen to them a few hours... and they tell you many tales of their adventures and their travels. As the time passes on, many grow quiet.

Suddenly, one of them stands upright and looks into every man's and woman's eyes...

"But despite all of our adventures, we all know, who the Greatest Of All is... it is...

Treacherous ShadowWind!


... and nobody else! This warrior supported the realm with most effort.".

You hear murmur arising... but after a few seconds apparently all agree with a short nod.




shouldent it be return to the rock
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 15, 2007, 08:29:28 AM
@Arkatson
I'll replace that

@protofusion
no, the rock will be named lounge after your first oro kill =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on March 17, 2007, 01:26:33 AM

Because of donations made, the gods grant you 10 percent discount on the healing costs.
The Travelling Medical Nin


Now you're fully healed, my Heroine.

Because of donations made, the gods grant you 10 percent discount on the healing costs.

~~~~~

The Travelling Traveling Medical Nin
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 17, 2007, 01:30:43 AM
After you kill oro, it still says th;at y ou slayed the dragon.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on March 17, 2007, 09:37:14 AM
After killing oro, this showed up...

"Because you succeeded in killing Orochimaru, you are awarded 25 donation points.
Shattered around you lie the remains of once mighty items destroyed by the power of the dragon's flames. It seems 6 items have been destroyed."

Orochimaru's flames?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 17, 2007, 01:18:32 PM

The Travelling Traveling Medical Nin

it is also running not runing ... sometimes you double the letter ... and as far as I know, Travelling is one of them ;)

try the dictionary to prove me wrong =)

Quote
After killing oro, this showed up...

"Because you succeeded in killing Orochimaru, you are awarded 25 donation points.
Shattered around you lie the remains of once mighty items destroyed by the power of the dragon's flames. It seems 6 items have been destroyed."

Orochimaru's flames?

Fixed, as well as the "dragon's treasure" thingy.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 17, 2007, 08:43:34 PM
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/traveling
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/travelling

this is really wierd because this dictiionary website has both versions of the word yet my text dictionary contains traveling.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on March 17, 2007, 09:08:58 PM
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/traveling
http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/travelling

this is really wierd because this dictiionary website has both versions of the word yet my text dictionary contains traveling.
That's because you are using an English dictionary most likely. People from different areas across the world spell certain words differently. I think it's a minor thing that we can ignore for now. :)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on March 19, 2007, 08:15:44 AM
You eat the cabage and...

You have been healed for 5 points.

Shouldn't it be Cabbage?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 19, 2007, 09:45:02 AM
fixed  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on March 19, 2007, 08:13:41 PM
"Aye, tha' be a foyne beastie indeed!" comments the dwarf.
 
 Creature: Kuromaru
 Description: This large burly dog is grey in white in color. He has a patch over his eye and has the ability to talk.
 Cost: 500 gold, 30 gems

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

"Aye, tha' be a foyne beastie indeed!" comments the dwarf.
 
 Creature: Kuromaru
 Description: This large burly dog is grey in and white in color. He has a patch over his eye and has the ability to talk.
 Cost: 500 gold, 30 gems
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 19, 2007, 08:30:38 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 19, 2007, 11:34:15 PM
when you get an avatar it still says J.C. Peterson.

Is it shikamaru?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 20, 2007, 01:03:20 PM
where exactly? yes, it's shikamaru
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on March 20, 2007, 01:11:55 PM
        
   
Something Special!
You run into an old wife... older than you ever have seen and more ugly than you could imagine an old woman could be.
It takes all your willpower not to run away from this ghastly sight. Slowly, you continue your steps...





shouldent it be woman?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 20, 2007, 03:09:52 PM
true, fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 20, 2007, 11:08:21 PM
Please note that there are regulations concerning the size.
You may not have an avatar that has a width of more than 260 pixels or a height of more than 260 pixels.

Any larger picture will be scaled to a smaller size. "Oh... I forgot... the local gods don't allow these sets to be used in public, sorry... choose a personal one if you like.", states J.C. Petersen.

when you click the bio picture icon in the Mission Headquarters.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 20, 2007, 11:26:53 PM
thanks, fixed  :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on March 21, 2007, 08:14:26 PM
On that note, here's two more with the infamous Mr. Petersen:

"J. C. Petersen turns to you. "A bottle of Fairy Dust costs 100 points, and a gem for our suppliers," he says. "Will this suit you?"

"J. C. Petersen reaches behind a painting and hands you a tiny vial of shimmering fairy dust. In return you grudgingly give him one of your precious gems."

Come to think of it, we should probably change "Fairy dust" to something else as well...erm, I'm drawing a blank at the moment.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 21, 2007, 08:41:03 PM
I am thinking of removing it completely... it's not really necessary and well...

it's a small thing to buy if you only have few points, though...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 21, 2007, 11:08:36 PM
a good luck charm like those given out?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 21, 2007, 11:40:03 PM
A charm you pay for?

hm, with a small thing, that would exactly be the faerie dust...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 21, 2007, 11:45:15 PM
yes but you said you need to replace fairie dust and im pretty sure good luck charms are very popular in ancient japan
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 22, 2007, 12:04:24 AM
 :twisted: :twisted:

I'll think about it. I can simply rename all the faerie dust to good luck charm....
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on March 22, 2007, 04:49:54 PM
I can simply rename all the faerie dust to good luck charm....

Perfect, sounds much better than Faerie Dust.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 22, 2007, 07:48:45 PM
Done.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on March 23, 2007, 10:41:36 AM
Moonlight Blade Deathgod claimed gold and gems gems from... Leprechaun.

The word gems is doubled.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 24, 2007, 12:55:18 AM
Kabuto strikes you down with his Poisoned Needles, and your body is crushed. He begins to cackle, and smiles softly. Charon comes forth, and whisks your body off to Shinigami.

Who?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 24, 2007, 02:21:43 PM
@Shinigami99

fixed

@Raikiri

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Charon_%28mythology%29
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on March 27, 2007, 10:04:31 PM
In the battle arena.
You have encountered Itachi Bunshin which lunges at you with Mangeky� Sharingan!

It's Mangekyō
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 27, 2007, 10:15:13 PM
 :eek:

a minor thing as I encoded the file ASCII, not UTF-8 ^^ and therefore the table was incorrect.

fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 28, 2007, 12:36:08 AM
Im not sure if you can change this but if you have fists as a weapon and challenge your master without enough exp, he/she takes away your fists -_- and then you get them back.

Painful...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 28, 2007, 12:43:30 AM
 :twisted: *hrhr*

yes, I know, but it's just like "you head out for adventure and strap your fists to your back" ^^

kind of a running gag...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on March 28, 2007, 01:12:12 AM
Tsunade smiles at you, "Because this will be your first name color change, it will cost you 1000 points. Future name changes will only cost 250 points."

He consults his book silently for a moment and then turns to you. "I'm terribly sorry, but you only have 575 points available and a name color change would cost you 1000."

She

The top still says hunter's lodge. And the buttons still say return to lodge.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 28, 2007, 10:19:46 AM
fixed =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on March 30, 2007, 08:33:00 AM
JCP takes his time, in walking over to the fire, next to which you are standing. He smiles wryly, "So, I hear that you are in the market for a Mount Name. I hope you realize, that this will cost 100 Points."

Isn't it Shikamaru?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 30, 2007, 11:17:03 AM
fixed  :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on March 31, 2007, 12:35:31 AM
J. C. Petersen opens a small, pewter box. Inside are a few small amulets with strange runes upon them..

These are very rare, and mysterious. Known as Amulet of Ru, they are a bit unpredictable but are known to strengthen the wearer. You might wake up one day and find it gone though, they seem to have a mind of their own.. anyway, do you wish to purchase one?

Shikamaru?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: AlexDB on March 31, 2007, 06:55:19 AM
J. C. Petersen turns to you. "Ten free nights in Ichiraku's Ramen will cost 50 points," he says. "Will this suit you?"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on March 31, 2007, 09:38:19 AM
You look upon your skin as it turns a different color. You feel your body begin to re-graft itself. You can feel your face changing... You gain 3 Charm!

Re craft maybe? >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 31, 2007, 02:39:27 PM
fixed

fixed

fixed

 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on March 31, 2007, 11:35:02 PM
For each $1 donated, the account which makes the donation will receive 100 contributor points in the game. "But what are points," you ask? Points can be redeemed for various advantages in the game. You'll find access to these advantages in the Hunter's Lodge. As time goes on, more advantages will likely be added, which can be purchased when they are made available.

Donating even one dollar will gain you a membership card to the Hunter's Lodge, an area reserved exclusively for contributors. Donations are accepted in whole dollar increments only.

"But I don't have access to a PayPal account, or I otherwise can't donate to your very wonderful project!"
Well, there is another way that you can obtain points: by referring other people to our site! You'll get 100 points for each person whom you've referred who makes it to level 10. Even one person making it to level 10 will gain you access to the Hunter's Lodge.

You can also gain contributor points for contributing in other ways that the administration may specify. So, don't despair if you cannot send cash, there will always be non-cash ways of gaining contributor points.

Purchases that are currently available:
• An Amulet of Ru, which has random effects on the wearer. This costs 100 points.
• For 500 points, you will get an avatar picture to display on your bio page. You can change it to a different avatar at a later time for 25 additional points.
• If you want to blog you can buy the permission for 400 points
• A custom weapon costs 300 points for the first change and 100 points for subsequent changes.
• A custom armor costs 300 points for the first change and 100 points for subsequent changes.
• One extra forest fight per day for 30 days costs 100 points. You may have up to 5 of these active at a time. The extra fights start the game day after you purchase them.
• A bottle of Fairy Dust costs 100 points as well as a gem, and can be a little unpredictable.
• Get a discount for healing of 20 percent for 5 days.
• The cost for ten free stays at the inn is 50 points
• The ability to choose a custom mount title for 500 and 100 points for each change thereafter.
• A colored name costs 1000 points for the first change and 250 points for subsequent changes.
• The ability to choose a custom in-game title upon reaching 1000 and every 200 points thereafter. (this doesn't use up those points) [NOTE: A title is the prefix on your name like Farmboy or Page]

I highlighted the errors in Red.
It should be Mission HQ, Good Luck Charm and Academy Student or Genin.


Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on March 31, 2007, 11:51:11 PM
In the massage place in the Fire Country in one of the outcomes it says booger no jiraiya
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 01, 2007, 12:04:05 AM
All fixed  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on April 01, 2007, 12:10:29 AM
All fixed  :roll:
Did you get that mightyE in the iraku ramen
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 01, 2007, 12:28:42 AM
yep  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on April 01, 2007, 12:31:28 AM
yep  :roll:
i WON'T STOP FINDING THEM lol

In the FaQ in the first section pvp its says Legend of green dragon




"You have ignored that user, they can no longer send you mails. " mails ?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on April 03, 2007, 12:52:04 AM
"You have ignored that user, they can no longer send you mails. " mails ?
I don't see a problem with it. My parents say it like that.

But if you want to fix it, might as well put it as mail(s)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Satehi on April 03, 2007, 02:46:01 AM
Once, accepting a mission at jounin rank, it said sensai after I accepted
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 03, 2007, 02:55:10 AM
Jounin Satehi defeated a Manticore on the trails! The victims have been avenged!

I thought this was changed to maurading ninja?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Twilight on April 03, 2007, 03:30:34 AM
*After picking the right egg hiding spot.*

that must you you...    


Is this messed up?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 04, 2007, 06:29:30 PM
Once, accepting a mission at jounin rank, it said sensai after I accepted

a bit preciser, I found nothing.

@Raikiri
fixed.

@Twilight
should be one "be you". fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Sacrifar on April 04, 2007, 09:18:56 PM
You have encountered Sasori which lunges at you with Sandaime Hokage Puppet!

i think it should be Sandaime Kazekage Puppet,Neji!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 04, 2007, 09:59:23 PM
 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 05, 2007, 02:32:00 AM
eh the weapon for Kages,  says :"Iron Knuckle "  10  5040

is tehre supposed to be quotes around it?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 05, 2007, 03:27:24 AM
    
Orochimaru's Hideout


You enter the Abandoned Castle, as you do the door slams behind you. Try as you may the door won't budge! Looks like you are going to have to find another way out of this place!
You look around, and in the dim light you see that the castle's narrow passage is littered with junk and remains of past visitors.
Too bad your Gamabunta couldn't come in with you, now you are all alone.
This place feels strangely draining any buffs you have are unusable



makes no sense
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 05, 2007, 02:20:01 PM
@gyu
fixed

@proto
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on April 05, 2007, 05:42:43 PM
1"Ichiraku's Ramen
You and Lee spend some time talking about the recent dwarf tossing competition. Not wanting to linger around another man for too long, so no one "wonders", you decide you should find something else to do."
maybe you could change this into something more "shinobi like" like...
shuriken tossing competition (or something else)
(better)...shuriken dart competition...

2
"Chuunin Mithras defeated Genin kimara while they were sleeping in their Dwelling."
could this be changed into:
<assulterr> defeated,(the) in a dwelling sleeping <victim>? (maybe something else, but you know what I mean)

3  Mericks stable
what about changing the dwarf into:
"a burly looking dwarf" -->a skinned figure... (or sth else like I said before...)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 06, 2007, 12:36:44 AM
erm neji, i dont think gyu posted here recently... what did you fix?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 06, 2007, 02:01:31 AM
You carefully approach the little white rat. It doesn't seem to be very shy, and you offer her some food in your hand. As she approaches, you suddenly realize that this rat might be  Lady Erwin, spoken of in many legends.

Lady Erwin doesn't look pleased at all ... you've just tried to give her some old food you wouldn't eat anymore, don't you?




mabye didnt you?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 06, 2007, 02:11:30 AM
You encounter a fairy in the forest. "Give me a gem!" she demands. What do you do? ]

Didnt we decide to change this into female ninja or what not?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 06, 2007, 12:40:31 PM
@Mithras
the dwarf tossing should already be fixed, I translated to Academy Student tossing

the "they were" comes from a Canadian author that knows his language well, so it might be a good quote. (Lebis, if you see this, your opinion?)

Merick will be replaced sooner or later, don't mind. I won't change much there.

@Proto
"would" is it, correct.

@Raikiri
the female nin was the alignment nin.
I made up something.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Satehi on April 06, 2007, 04:07:59 PM
I know that this ain't a text issue, but there is no picture issue so here:


Ninja Academy

You stroll into the battle grounds. Younger warriors huddle together and point as you pass by. You know this place well. Several nin hail to you, and you grasp their hands firmly as you walk by, inspiring them to become a great person like yourself. There is nothing left for you here but memories. You remain a moment longer, and look at the warriors in training before you turn to return to the village

There is still a picture of urahara Kisuke up there instead of jiraiya
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 06, 2007, 04:35:03 PM
clear your browser cache ;) there is not.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: AlexDB on April 10, 2007, 08:43:02 PM
J. C. Petersen smiles at you, "So, you're interested in purchasing custom equipment."

He consults his book silently for a moment and then turns to you. "I'm terribly sorry, but you only have 50 points available."

"A custom armor costs 300 points."

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

J. C. Petersen smiles at you, "So, you're interested in purchasing custom equipment."

He consults his book silently for a moment and then turns to you. "I'm terribly sorry, but you only have 50 points available."

"A custom weapon costs 300 points."

________________________________________________________________________________________________________

JShikamaru turns to you. "Ten free nights in Ichiraku's Ramen will cost 50 points," he says. "Will this suit you?"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 10, 2007, 08:46:53 PM
WHOA! Alex, did you just TRIPLE post?

2 of them were teh same -_-
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: AlexDB on April 10, 2007, 08:47:24 PM
one is whit weapon and one is with armor
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 10, 2007, 09:11:48 PM
All fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 11, 2007, 05:38:32 AM
You don't know? There are rumours that there will soon be war between Fire Country and Rice Field Country!! Already some weapons nd armours got sold out as they have to produce for their kages..



should be and

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 12, 2007, 11:58:42 PM
Dag Durnick's  Table
You stroll over to your Sensei, who notices your presence. He takes a long pull on his pipe.
"Ye probably be wantin' to know if there's a price on yer head, ain't ye."

"Ye don't have no bounty on ya. I suggest ye be keepin' it that way."

sensei's table? dunno...

Dag Durnick's Table
Dag Durnick glances up at you and adjusts the pipe in his mouth with his teeth.
"So, who ye be wantin' to place a hit on? Just so ye be knowing, they got to be legal to be killin', they got to be at least level 3, and they can't be having too much outstandin' bounty nor be getting hit too frequent like, so if they ain't be listed, they can't be contracted on! We don't run no slaughterhouse here, we run a.....business. Also, there be a 10% listin' fee fer any hit ye be placin'."




Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 13, 2007, 09:12:18 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on April 14, 2007, 04:27:29 PM
Don't believe anyone else claiming to be an admin, they arent
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 15, 2007, 04:32:25 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Satehi on April 15, 2007, 04:35:19 PM
In return, she hands you a shiny new Rusty Steel Wakizashi which you swoosh around the room, nearly taking off `!Shizune's head, which she deftly ducks; you're not the first person to exuberantly try out a new weapon.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on April 16, 2007, 02:19:15 AM
•Naruto FAQ extension(with Spoilers

in the last sectio purposal is wrong
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 16, 2007, 11:35:10 AM
fixed
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on April 17, 2007, 02:51:08 AM
You don't know? There are rumours that there will soon be war between Fire Country and Rice Field Country!! Already some weapons nd armours got sold out as they have to produce for their kages..



should be and



I have gotten this the last few times in Konoha, and two other countries (I think Wind & Rice, but not sure).
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 17, 2007, 03:00:41 AM
You hit Haruno Sakura Groupie for 63 points of damage!
Sasuke! I want him for me alone!




shouldent it be: sakura and her
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 17, 2007, 03:04:29 AM
I dont know... i think its correct. What i understand is taht these peopel like sasuke.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 17, 2007, 03:06:47 AM
but the picture was a bunch of narutos
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on April 17, 2007, 03:41:36 AM
You hit Haruno Sakura Groupie for 63 points of damage!
Sasuke! I want him for me alone!




shouldent it be: sakura and her

There is no problem with that specific text... even if the picture is a bunch of "narutos". O.o
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on April 17, 2007, 05:05:10 PM
"Gamakichi charges into battle, whipping his tounge at Masked Mushroom Shinobi for 1 points of damage."

Shouldn't that be tongue ?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 17, 2007, 06:24:41 PM
all fixed.

*soon, the mounts will be gone*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 17, 2007, 11:13:35 PM
i found this at the end of the cave mission


You lop off the b*stards's head, and stash the bloody thing in your backpack.




should be b*stard's i think
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 18, 2007, 12:39:17 AM
Hokage patthebat defeated Shinigami AkuKitsune while they were sleeping in their Dwelling.
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
Hokage patthebat defeated Shinigami AkuKitsune in fair combat near the campfire in Inside dwelling.

in an inside dwelling?

also, not sure if this is possible but these two events happened oen after another in sequence..so patthebat defeated Aku twice in a row..

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 18, 2007, 07:59:43 AM
Fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 18, 2007, 04:01:58 PM
Shady though he is, you decide to take up the salesman on his offer.

The salesman reaches into one of his deep pockets and pulls out a vial. He hands you the vial and explains that it is a salve that he got from Crazy Audrey herself, and a wise purchase. He then slinks off into the shadows as you apply the salve to your toes.

Your toes soon smell as bad as Mireraband's!
You lose a turn!



? ? ? ?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 18, 2007, 04:29:15 PM
Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 18, 2007, 11:55:43 PM
 
 Ichiraku's Ramen
You and Lee spend some time talking about the recent dwarf tossing competition. Not wanting to linger around another man for too long, so no one "wonders", you decide you should find something else to do. 

Genin tossing
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 19, 2007, 08:49:28 PM
 :evil: I want to know why this appears ... I fixed it, it shows correctly to me ---argh---
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on April 19, 2007, 10:54:50 PM
This may just be semantics, but:

Quote
Sannin eyecue stands with prepared Longbow of the Daimyo guard at the coffers.

Shouldn't that read:

Sannin eyecue stands guard at the coffers, prepared with his/her Longbow of the Daimyo.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on April 19, 2007, 11:37:44 PM
This may just be semantics, but:

Quote
Sannin eyecue stands with prepared Longbow of the Daimyo guard at the coffers.

Shouldn't that read:

Sannin eyecue stands guard at the coffers, prepared with his/her Longbow of the Daimyo.

Instead of his/her, just "their". I sometimes get tired of the his/her thing and it lessens the mood of the text.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on April 21, 2007, 01:46:24 AM
"When I am known I am nothing
When Im unknown I am something what am I."

I am something, what am i?
or
...I am something.

What am I?


or just get rid of the what am i, most riddles i encountered dont have them
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 21, 2007, 08:04:32 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on April 24, 2007, 10:54:48 PM
When defeating someone with a bounty on their head:

"When you turn around, Dag Durnick is standing there. "*edited out name* had a bounty of 2000 on th' head", he says as he tosses you a leather purse which clinks with the sounds of your new fortune."

Your Sensei.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on April 26, 2007, 05:12:08 PM
You don't have enough gold with you to pay for the food. Merick refuses to feed your creature and advises you to look for somewhere else to let your Pakkun graze for free, such as in the Forest.



it makes no sense
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on April 26, 2007, 05:15:57 PM
You don't have enough gold with you to pay for the food. Merick refuses to feed your creature and advises you to look for somewhere else to let your Pakkun graze for free, such as in the Forest.



it makes no sense

To one who has a firm grasp on the english language, it does. Next!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on April 29, 2007, 07:43:44 AM
Baa-san's Curry
You duck out of the tavern, and wander into the thick foliage around you. That strange mist revisits you, making your mind buzz. The mist clears, and you find yourself again where you were before the mist first covered you.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 29, 2007, 09:53:31 AM
done
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on April 29, 2007, 12:30:37 PM
"Uh, um. How much?" you ask.

Sakura thumps your ribs with her finger for a sec. "For you... 415 gold pieces for a complete heal!!" She says as it bends over and pulls a clay vial from a stack of them in the corner. . "I also have some, erm... 'bargain' potions available," she says as she gestures at a pile of dusty, cracked vials. "They'll heal a certain percent of your damage."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 29, 2007, 01:03:27 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SharinganNaruto on May 01, 2007, 06:16:06 AM
Well I didn't know where else to put this but, the Horrible Blob thing is still in the Hall Of Fame. Yea, it should be Missing Nin I believe.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 01, 2007, 12:11:25 PM
Where exactly in the HOF, which section.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on May 01, 2007, 11:02:47 PM
When giving up your membership to the Akatsuki...

Itachi nods, and rolls up your shirt sleeve. He tears a tattoo that had been put on their from you initiation, and tosses your 0 gems to you. He also takes all of the souls that you have, and uses them to spare you the pain of death.

there and your
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on May 01, 2007, 11:19:33 PM
in the personal info it says




home city       fire country





dosent that seem wrong due to the fact that a city cant be a country

   
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 02, 2007, 10:02:29 AM
all fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on May 07, 2007, 07:28:07 AM
Another minor one:

Quote
Shikamaru looks at you carefully, "One extra travel each game day will cost you 100 points and will provide you with one extra travel each game day that you log in for the next 30 game days. You may only purchase up to 5 additional forest fights at a time."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 07, 2007, 07:44:24 AM
thanks, fixed.
Title: Am I missing something?
Post by: UchihaHitane on May 08, 2007, 09:13:41 PM
I got this in part of the text during an event


Fortunately Sensatsu no Gyururu is so absorbed in telling you, what HE will do after taking over the world that HE does not notice your escape.


I know we live in a patriarchal society, there are a lot of gender issues and junk or so the feminists  *cough*lesbians  say, but this is a bit much.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on May 09, 2007, 01:25:13 AM
That's because it was an event for one person in the past. But now it's a whole staff event and randomized.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: UchihaHitane on May 09, 2007, 10:25:49 AM
Ahhhhhh I see! That makes sense now, I figured making the same typo twice would have been a bit odd.

Can a code be made or something that makes it change to "She" or gives an alternate text (which is really a second version of the text with "she" in it) whenever Gyururu or a female staff member is picked?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 09, 2007, 03:05:02 PM
 :o I maybe can.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on May 09, 2007, 04:30:58 PM
Missed this one...

When travelling between countrys: "Continue on trail."

"Dragons wait for no man.
You continue on your way down the trail without another thought."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 09, 2007, 05:48:05 PM
fix0rated.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on May 11, 2007, 01:37:18 AM
You walk along a peaceful road... after you walked a few minutes, you see a little bath house built near a hot spring right beside the road. You decide to get a bit closer... since it's on your way though



shouldent it be through
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 11, 2007, 06:10:12 PM
Not really =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on May 13, 2007, 06:39:44 PM
When Choosing a race...    

As a Sand, being used to walking with the devilish sand in your face, and being no longer hindered by it at the momment, you tire much less quickly than usual.

moment
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 13, 2007, 07:03:17 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on May 14, 2007, 12:34:06 AM
In the Shinobi Mail...



Mail Box
Old    (Aucun Aujet)    Chaos Emperor HiroHyuuga    May 14, 12:29 am



it went from No Subject to Aucun Aujet.....
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on May 14, 2007, 12:50:23 AM
Seems to be fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on May 14, 2007, 01:06:00 AM
changed to something else but the server outtage happened so  i cant put what the new text says for me...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SolAlwyn on May 16, 2007, 04:46:30 PM
    
—Heal—
Healer's Hut
—Fight—
Look for Something to Kill
Go Slumming
Go Thrillseeking
(*) Search Suicidally
Seek Out the Green Dragon
—Other—
Return to Fire Country
Take your Kyuubi to Baa-san's Curry
The Outhouse
—Actions—
Slumber (till the end)
Seek out (till the end)
Thrillseeking (till the end)


The * was an e, and of course Orochimaru is missing. 

Edit: Oh, and the Healer's Hut is wrong as well.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on May 16, 2007, 05:41:14 PM
The asterik is intentional, most likely to slow down the clickage. ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on May 16, 2007, 05:45:54 PM
The asterik is intentional, most likely to slow down the clickage. ;)

I think he meant "The green dragon" part. :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 16, 2007, 06:33:31 PM
seems somebody deleted stuff from the translations  :evil:

I hate it when people simply do that. I blocked off those options now.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on May 16, 2007, 07:59:48 PM
seems somebody deleted stuff from the translations  :evil:

I hate it when people simply do that. I blocked off those options now.

So that's probably why it's back to "Ye Olde Mailbox" instead of "Shinobi Mail"?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on May 16, 2007, 08:01:04 PM
The thrilseeking hotkey changed to "i" ....
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 16, 2007, 11:02:08 PM
—Heal—
Ninja Hospital—Fight—
Look for Something to Kill
Go Slumming
Go Thrillseeking
Search Suicidally
—Other—
Return to Water Country
Take your Shukaku to Baa-san's Curry
The Outhouse
—Actions—
Slumber (till the end)
Seek out (till the end)
Thrillseeking (till the end)

Maybe thats why its Ninja hospital now ratehr than Sakura
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on May 16, 2007, 11:30:47 PM
seems somebody deleted stuff from the translations  :evil:

I hate it when people simply do that. I blocked off those options now.

Thought you said no one had access to the english translations but you? >> << >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on May 17, 2007, 12:12:02 AM
The bank is now called ye old bank.... and i just saw Le banque for some seconds...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on May 17, 2007, 01:38:38 AM
The shinobi mailbox is the same... it's Ye Olde Mailbox now for some reason. >>

and also... the masked shinobi event:


The masked shinobi release some kind of powerful energy which seals your chakra.

releases
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on May 17, 2007, 01:41:08 AM
Why did this hapend? did the texts returned to the past or something? ...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on May 17, 2007, 04:40:24 AM
Why did this hapend? did the texts returned to the past or something? ...

One of the translators must have accidentally done something wrong...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 17, 2007, 10:47:59 AM
nobody *SHOULD* have.

but the translation system is not designed to limit people to one language, that's something I  tried to hack in.

obviously not right, as the translations I made to make i.e. "Shinobi Mailbox"  are gone.

*argH*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on May 17, 2007, 11:56:49 PM
The fair and beautiful Kurenai greets you with a warm smile as you stroll over to her brightly colored gypsy wagon, which is placed, not out of coincidence, right next to Shizune's weapon shop.

Her outfit is as brightly colored and outrageous as her hair, and it is almost (but not quite) enough to make you look away from her huge gray eyes and flashes of skin. She glances towards you every now and then, checking to see if you have made a final decision.


if i remember correctly kurenai has red eyes
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 17, 2007, 11:59:59 PM
I don't know if this is connected to the Orochimaru text getting deleted or not, but in the spoiler FAQs it says--

"4. Does that have something to do with the titles that people have?
But of course!
Indeed, every time you kill the dragon, you return to level one. If you kill the dragon  enough times, you get a new title. So low level players with titles have had opportunities to embiggen themselves. (see Hall of Fame)"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on May 18, 2007, 12:52:19 AM
~ ~ ~ Fight ~ ~ ~
You have encountered The Green Dragon which lunges at you with Great Flaming Maw!

Level: 18
Start of round:
The Green Dragon's Hitpoints: XXXX
(fight was here)


With a mighty final blow, The Green Dragon lets out a tremendous bellow and falls at your feet, dead at last.


it Green Dragon this for everything after you hit seek out oro.....
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on May 18, 2007, 03:27:51 AM
I also saw "xxx has earned the title xxx for defeating the Green Dragon xxx times" in the news at least once.  Well, that is if the "Recent Clan News" draws from the same feed as the regular news.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 18, 2007, 07:03:33 AM
Mmm, I was just wondering.. is this supposed to be a balloon in the inventory?

"Description of Ballon:
A ballon...what could you use this for?"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 18, 2007, 08:13:17 AM
fixed.

now I only need to know *why* it changes back...

@fiyona yes, it should be a balloon.
(baluski? could you change that here+on the testserver?)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on May 18, 2007, 04:47:40 PM
Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on May 18, 2007, 04:51:18 PM
I know this isn't a text issue, but some pictures are missing for me, such as pictures of masters, orochimaru, even the new day picture and countrys.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on May 18, 2007, 05:00:08 PM
I know this isn't a text issue, but some pictures are missing for me, such as pictures of masters, orochimaru, even the new day picture and countrys.
Did you turn off the images in your Preferences?
If not I would check.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on May 18, 2007, 05:11:20 PM
No i didn't , i have pictures in the forest, and i tested it in another computer and the same hapend. i don't see other images, besides the forest ones.

Edit: it's fixed now, i just made a mistake ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 18, 2007, 08:18:08 PM
 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 18, 2007, 11:56:59 PM
Behind the inn, and a little to the left of Ye Olde Bank, is as fine a stable as one might expect to find in any village. In it, Merick, a burly looking dwarf tends to various beasts.

EDIT:

Description of Ballon:
A balloon...what could you use this for?

I dont think Neji spelled ballon wrong, i think he meant it like that but the secodn "balloon" is spelled differently

EDIT2:LoneStrider stole 1 gems!!

EDIT3:   you discover one of your gempouchs   are missing

 not sure but is "are" supposed to be is?


and gempouchs should be gempouches
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Xaos on May 19, 2007, 03:36:46 AM
Behind the inn, and a little to the left of Ye Olde Bank, is as fine a stable as one might expect to find in any village. In it, Merick, a burly looking dwarf tends to various beasts.

EDIT:

Description of Ballon:
A balloon...what could you use this for?

I dont think Neji spelled ballon wrong, i think he meant it like that but the secodn "balloon" is spelled differently

EDIT2:LoneStrider stole 1 gems!!

EDIT3:   you discover one of your gempouchs   are missing

 not sure but is "are" supposed to be is?


and gempouchs should be gempouches

Since Gem Pouches is plural it's are ^.^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on May 19, 2007, 01:54:04 PM
and gempouchs should be gempouches

I think there should be a space between gem and pouches. >> Gem pouches

EDIT3:   you discover one of your gempouchs   are missing

 not sure but is "are" supposed to be is?

and gempouchs should be gempouches
Since Gem Pouches is plural it's are ^.^

I really thought it was 'is'. After all, only one was lost.
I'm not sure  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 20, 2007, 06:25:58 AM
and gempouchs should be gempouches

I think there should be a space between gem and pouches. >> Gem pouches

EDIT3:   you discover one of your gempouchs   are missing

 not sure but is "are" supposed to be is?

and gempouchs should be gempouches
Since Gem Pouches is plural it's are ^.^

I really thought it was 'is'. After all, only one was lost.
I'm not sure  :roll:

Yes tahts what threw me off../
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 20, 2007, 09:50:28 AM
don't debate things here in full please...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 20, 2007, 07:57:47 PM
He looks deep in your eyes, then whacks you hard across the side of your head. And  gives you a sip of the infamos Akimichi brew. When

He looks deep in your eyes, then whacks you hard across teh side of your head and gives you a sip of the infamous Akimichi Brew?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 20, 2007, 09:18:36 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on May 21, 2007, 01:19:00 PM
Pegasus Armor
The fair and beautiful Kurenai greets you with a warm smile as you stroll over to her brightly colored gypsy wagon, which is placed, not out of coincidence, right next to Shizune's weapon shop.
MightyE's Weapons
Shizune stands behind a counter and appears to pay little attention to you as you enter, but you know from experience that she has her eye on every move you make. The massive hilt of a claymore protrudes above her shoulder; its gleam in the torch light not much brighter than the gleam off of TonTon bald forehead, who is right next to her.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 21, 2007, 04:41:26 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 22, 2007, 01:55:04 AM
You have encountered Midori (Grass) which lunges at you with Scarf!

Level: 3
Start of round:
Midori (Grass)'s Hitpoints: 42
YOUR Hitpoints: X
Midori (Grass) surprises you and gets the first round of attack!

Shukaku rampages into battle, stomping on everything in his path.
Shukaku hits Midori (Grass) for 10 points of damage.
Shukaku hits Midori (Grass) for 5 points of damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 27 damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 25 damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 15 damage.
Midori (Grass) could not attack for one round!
Midori (Grass) tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 7 points of damage!
The Ninja ceases the throwing of shurikens.Next round:


How is it taht Shurikan from Shinobazu could follow you?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on May 22, 2007, 02:13:39 AM
You have encountered Midori (Grass) which lunges at you with Scarf!

Level: 3
Start of round:
Midori (Grass)'s Hitpoints: 42
YOUR Hitpoints: X
Midori (Grass) surprises you and gets the first round of attack!

Shukaku rampages into battle, stomping on everything in his path.
Shukaku hits Midori (Grass) for 10 points of damage.
Shukaku hits Midori (Grass) for 5 points of damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 27 damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 25 damage.
A shuriken hits you you for 15 damage.
Midori (Grass) could not attack for one round!
Midori (Grass) tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 7 points of damage!
The Ninja ceases the throwing of shurikens.Next round:


How is it taht Shurikan from Shinobazu could follow you?

Huh? O.o

*brain explodes*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 22, 2007, 10:43:18 AM
 :D you have to bear it until the new game version.

if you kill shinobazu before he could hit you, his buff stays.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 23, 2007, 06:38:13 PM
When gazing upon Hinata in the woods.... (she's so sexy, I couldn't resist her...  :oops: )

You try to take a deeper look... well, everything might happen now (missing a period (.))

She is aware of your presence... but feels no need to hide herself. Instead, she offers you a friendly smile... like a childhoodfriends would. (singular-plural conflict)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 23, 2007, 08:08:37 PM
Fixed.

No need to be shy ;)
I could not resist neither.

Though there is my admin outcome  :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on May 23, 2007, 09:48:58 PM
Though there is my admin outcome  :twisted:

Why don't I get this?  :evil: I just get lame snuggling and pillow talk...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: UchihaHitane on May 23, 2007, 09:52:37 PM
I think this counts as text issue: In the graveyard, there was a picture of naruto and kage bunshins, but the name was Haruno Sakura Groupie.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 23, 2007, 11:43:51 PM
Quote
Though there is my admin outcome

^^

@pic

Let's says those guys are after Haruno Sakura ;) which in fact is: Naruto likes Sakura.

(I prefer her mature self much more... she ranks second after Hinata - once she is really shown in Shippuuden)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on May 27, 2007, 08:03:54 PM
Dimly you remember that you are a new warrior, and something of a dangerous Green Dragon  that is plaguing the area.  You decide you would like to earn a name for yourself by perhaps some day confronting this vile creature.

This is in the chinese translations
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on May 27, 2007, 10:05:17 PM
Smexy♥Baby LiLcutiePaThas been found badly wounded on a road murmering something about a Sphinx...

there is an space missing...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 27, 2007, 11:34:20 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on May 28, 2007, 12:53:32 AM
<Roots>Hunter Nin Mithras  says egarly, "hihi"
-->I thought it must be eagerly
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 28, 2007, 01:56:58 AM
erm, this could be a
/me says aegerly,


I don't remember putting an "eagerly" in a chat. if you don't state the location ;) ...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on May 28, 2007, 01:57:55 AM
Location: in a dwelling when you want to post something

(?? aegerly ??)
Edit: Do you want a screenshot?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 28, 2007, 04:26:34 PM
you can set your own talkline in a dwelling.

that is the problem.... somebody was not able to write there ;) it's no bug.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on May 28, 2007, 04:58:28 PM
Oh yeah ok then sorry
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 28, 2007, 05:26:57 PM
 :D no big deal.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mioku on May 29, 2007, 01:24:12 AM
Look: You find the strength to open your eyes, and find yourself staring at a tiny fairy who, flying just above your face is inadvertently sprinkling its fairy dust all over you, granting you the power to crawl once again to your feet

arnt you getting rid of the fairys?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 29, 2007, 08:49:39 AM
Now, where might you have encountered this...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mioku on May 30, 2007, 02:55:38 AM
The forest event when you drink the spring and lose almost all your hp because your lucks horrible ><
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on May 30, 2007, 10:01:24 AM
Quote
Your final thought is that although you defeated the Orochimaru, you reflect on the irony that it defeated you.

I know he is a villain and all, but it reads a bit awkward to me.  Of course, it might just be me.

Perhaps:
Quote
Your final thought is that although you defeated Orochimaru, you reflect on the irony that he defeated you.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 30, 2007, 10:04:10 AM
fix0rated
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 30, 2007, 06:55:07 PM
The Lady of the Lake--

You gaze upon the surface of the pool, uncertain of what you appearance may tempt.

(your)


Expecting some Faerie Goddess to jump out of the lake, only to find nothing make you feel rather silly.

(makes) (Actually this whole sentence is kind of awkward.. maybe "Expecting some Faerie Goddess to jump out of the lake, only finding nothing makes you feel rather silly.")
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 30, 2007, 09:45:18 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 31, 2007, 04:40:34 AM
THE LADY OF THE LAKE (again)


The wind rages, whipping the trees surrounding the lake into a frenzy for falling leaves. You stumble backwards as waves of water begin to swell and the howling wind bites your cheeks you with depreciation she says:"You hideous thing! How dare you gaze into these sacred waters! Begone!".


(I'm not really sure what was going on in that sentence, but.. "you" doesn't fit there. Perhaps "You stumble.......and the howling wind bites your cheeks. With depreciation she says......")
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 31, 2007, 03:05:46 PM
fix0rated.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 31, 2007, 09:46:55 PM
THE STOP THE VILLAN'S EVIL PLANS EVENT


You walk through the forest, cutting away the underbrush with your Bloody Rǿse Thorn. You are in the right mood to kill any of those vicious creatures lurking near the road, ready to attack any traveller nearby. Your are  quickly moving on your way so you don't recognize the shadow appearing from behind a tree and slowly approaching you from your blindside.

(You are)

(Also... do you care about inappropriate use of punctuation such as commas? I see them everywhere, but don't post them because I'm pretty sure the majority of users don't know how to use them properly since they are younger. Caring about punctuation was hammered into my brain violently because of Honors and AP English classes. >_<; Just wondering... because the comma problem is really bad. If you don't care, that's fine too. I'll just keep ignoring them.)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on May 31, 2007, 10:38:18 PM
THE OLD MAN

You turn to look and see one of the bodyguards from the Inn walking through the woods heading your direction. You turn back to the old man, but he seems to have vanished.

(heading IN your direction)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: protofusion on May 31, 2007, 11:18:51 PM
the handsome Jounin continues to walk with you through the city. "A long time ago, we have been paid a visit by Orochimaru. With him he brought his right hand, Kabuto. He searched in a nearby cave and found a radioactive crystal. The crystal proofed to be very powerful.




maybe proved
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on June 01, 2007, 02:50:02 AM
Neji, could you check the chinese translations hQ?

every now and then, J.C. Peterson and Fairy Dust pops up
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on June 01, 2007, 04:41:03 PM
The inhabitants of Konoha Gakure are busy erecting a statue for their newest hero, Charater's name on the only statue pedestal around. The remains of the statue that had stood there before lie in such ruins around the pedestal that it is no longer recognizable.

Isn't there supposed to be a comma after and before the Character's name? Small thing, but I felt like complaining about it. >> << >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 01, 2007, 05:20:31 PM
I changed it as I would have written it your way, but ... any native speaker here that can confirm that too?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on June 01, 2007, 06:19:48 PM
I changed it as I would have written it your way, but ... any native speaker here that can confirm that too?

In my english classes, you're supposed to put a comma after and before stating someone's name in a sentence, so I just went with that. And also, it sounds right to add a pause, or comma there in my own opinion.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 01, 2007, 06:46:04 PM
Leaftoad is right about having a second comma after the name. When you say "the newest hero, <name>" you are actually naming the subject twice, just clarifying specifically by using the character name. That is when you need a second comma, because the character name is actually a side note to the statement.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 01, 2007, 09:48:58 PM
THE LADY OF THE LAKE >_>;

You squint your eyes and stick out your tongue, watching your reflection mimick  your own playful antics.

(mimic)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: kboogi on June 01, 2007, 10:57:14 PM
*ARRGGHH*
Double-Poster!

So would you prefer a semicolon instead?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 02, 2007, 11:05:13 AM
fixed & thanks for the input =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on June 02, 2007, 01:36:57 PM
buzkill has been destroyed by the Penguin Overlord.

Saw this in the Daily News.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 02, 2007, 03:44:36 PM
Another sentence who got deleted...

most likely by some translator who "just clicked buttons" -_-
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 03, 2007, 11:12:03 PM
LADY OF THE LAKE (what else did you expect from me? >_<)


She fixes her gaze intently upon you and whispers, "You have pleased us this day, May the elements grace shine upon you.".


(lowercase m) (element's grace {or elements' if that was what you were going for..}) (delete extra period)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 03, 2007, 11:23:11 PM
fixed, thanks.

you *do* like that event ...  :oops:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 03, 2007, 11:41:57 PM
*smiles*

Yes, I do.... it IS my name after all.. she's like family to me!

And I don't think you ever answered my question about if you cared about random punctuation errors like commas.. like this in the gardens--



From the flowerbeds that bloom even in darkest winter, to the hedges whose shadows promise forbidden secrets, these gardens provide a refuge for those seeking out Orochimaru and his gang; a place where they can forget their troubles for a while and just relax.


No comma belongs there.. I only ask if you care because I know these things are very minor compared to other text issues.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 04, 2007, 12:40:57 PM
even minor errors are errors ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 04, 2007, 02:48:39 PM
Ok, you'll be hearing from me often, then. ^_^ Hope you don't get sick of me...  :oops:



HINATA IN THE FOREST

There before you is a beautiful maiden... it is Hinata!.


(double punctuation)



LADY OF THE LAKE

You listen carefully then watch as LoneStrider brush past and stealthily takes his leave of you. Once the rogue is gone, you realize one of your gempouchs are missing!

(brushes) (gem pouches)



THE FERRYMAN

The figure points to a cup. You see a sign that reads, "25 gold to cross".

(period belongs inside quotation mark)



KONOHA GAKURE INTRO

No one seems to pay much attention to you as they all seem absorbed in their own lives and problems.

(needs a comma in between the words)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 04, 2007, 03:07:59 PM
I'm sorry I didn't mean to double post, I had accidentally clicked quote instead of modify on my last post. T_T




WATER COUNTRY FOUNTAIN

Walking over to the large, circular fountain in the center of the town, you take a moment to gaze upon it's calm, reflective waters and the ornate font within it's center.

Near you, villagers are gathered around the fountain engaged in conversation while small children sit along it's edge, dangling their feet into it's chilled waters.

(no apostrophes when talking about possessions)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on June 04, 2007, 03:08:54 PM
You've been reading the whole game haven't you ?  :roll:
good work =p
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 04, 2007, 03:15:28 PM
You've been reading the whole game haven't you ?  :roll:
good work =p


Heh. Neji is a good influence on me... he makes me want to read! My parents would be so proud... *sheds tears of joy*

And it gives me something to do while my packing slips print out on the slowest printer ever found in any workplace ever. T_T
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 04, 2007, 04:15:30 PM
 :shock:

all fixed.

well, thanks for the effort.
(also it does happen often that somebody says  I have a good influence...)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on June 04, 2007, 05:07:57 PM
Lady of the lake

Tis just a moment of fun to

Well looks wrong but I´m not a native so...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 04, 2007, 05:21:32 PM
I say "tis" all the time... ^^ It's just a short way to say "it is."

And.. I'm going to stop posting today because.. um.. yeah. >_>; *flees*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 04, 2007, 06:02:35 PM
 :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 04, 2007, 09:13:58 PM
I... couldn't resist. Sorry.  :oops:



THE FOREST MERCHANT

He opens his coat and you see quite a few stuff arranged in rows on the inside of his coat.

(redundancy makes it awkward… it sounds better if you just leave it at “in rows on the inside.”)


"Well, that's what I can do for you... See you later!

(missing end quotation mark)



WATER COUNTRY INTRO

Water Country, Water country, is home to heavy mist. Profoundly run by the infamous Gatoh. This town seems rather poor.

(Water Country is doubled)


As you walk past one of the poorest looking old women you've ever seen you ask the time
and she tells you that it is 11:19 am before walking away.

(Need comma after time and delete line break)



MISSION HEADQUARTERS

The wood-panelled walls are covered with anime wall scrolls and weapons.

(Paneled)

In the chair closest to the fire sits Shikamaru, reading a book called 'Come Come Paradise'. You wonder about that as he is too young for an R rated book...

(period belongs inside apostrophe mark)



BATTLE ARENA

If you lose against an fighter here, you will also lose battlepoints.
(a)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 04, 2007, 10:46:56 PM
fixed.

yet: wood-panelled is right, the "l" gets reduplicated, I looked it up.

Also, are you sure that the quotation marks belong *in* the apostrophes once a new sentence is attached?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 05, 2007, 12:46:02 AM
My apologies, I was mistaken. The punctuation only belongs in the quote if it is a part of the quote, it doesn't apply to book titles.

As to panelled, I've always spelled it paneled, I just looked it up too.. apparently you can use either. @_@
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on June 05, 2007, 04:05:00 AM
Leon crosses you, "So, you  really wish to leave the Guild?"

Leon should be itachi...
its when asking you second through last time time for when you wish to leave akatsuki

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 05, 2007, 12:38:31 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on June 06, 2007, 03:21:44 AM
I am not sure if this is one but when I go to my outbox in the upper area it says "Ye Olde Poste Office"...............is that right??
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SharinganNaruto on June 06, 2007, 03:41:31 PM
Leon crosses you, "So, you  really wish to leave the Guild?"

Leon should be itachi...
its when asking you second through last time time for when you wish to leave akatsuki




Third time as well. Fourth, and so on I believe. <<;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on June 06, 2007, 05:21:16 PM
Jounin taichi has been destroyed by the Penguin Overlord.

Saw this again on the daily news.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 06, 2007, 07:41:38 PM
did you change your language?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on June 06, 2007, 09:39:56 PM
Nope, I always play in English. o_o
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on June 08, 2007, 03:24:45 AM
Leon crosses you, "So, you  really wish to leave the Guild?"

Leon should be itachi...
its when asking you second through last time time for when you wish to leave akatsuki




Third time as well. Fourth, and so on I believe. <<;

i said second THROUGH last time...
as in all included  ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on June 08, 2007, 05:56:52 PM
"Some fully armed ANBU are patrolling around the city... kind of tense mood... something is not right here... you see the local weaponry and armoury kind of heavily frequented as people arm theirselves... "

How about, "you see the local weaponry and armoury are heavily frequented as people arm themselves"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 08, 2007, 08:31:29 PM
fixed.  :roll:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on June 10, 2007, 03:28:37 PM
When you say the word "lol" it changes to Laughs heartily, shouldn't it be laughs heartly ??? without the " i ".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on June 10, 2007, 05:49:54 PM
heartily is correctly spelled >.>;

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: SharinganNaruto on June 10, 2007, 06:04:18 PM
I'd just like to report that I saw the, Penguin Overlord thing, change back to Kabuto earlier. Maybe an hour or so is when I saw it. So I think Neji got it without really trying? <<;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on June 10, 2007, 08:32:26 PM
Welcome to Shinobi Legends, a browser based role playing game featuring Naruto, based on Seth Able's Legend of the Red Dragon.


Green dragon?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on June 11, 2007, 01:53:36 PM
Leon crosses you, "So, you  really wish to leave the Guild?"

Leon should be itachi...
its when asking you second through last time time for when you wish to leave akatsuki




Third time as well. Fourth, and so on I believe. <<;

Yep.

Got this today.  Leon crosses you from 2 until the end.  Thanks Shukaku!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 11, 2007, 03:09:46 PM
Welcome to Shinobi Legends, a browser based role playing game featuring Naruto, based on Seth Able's Legend of the Red Dragon.


Green dragon?

No, the ancient game it was created from was the Red Dragon. The Green Dragon came after it, so the text is correct.
Seth Able was the creator of the Red Dragon, Eric Stevens of the Green Dragon. ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 12, 2007, 03:21:22 AM
SWORD IN THE STONE

You step up the few stairs to the stone. Both your hand take a firm grip at the hilt of the sword.

(hands)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 12, 2007, 09:41:50 AM
 :eek: fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on June 15, 2007, 11:53:56 PM
PERVY PEEPING ON HINATA


You try to take a deeper look... well, everything might happen now.

(Wouldnt "anything" make more sense here?)



Instead, she offers you a friendly smile... like a childhoodfriend would. Your jealousy if wiped away... the only thing left is a GREAT warm feeling in your heart.

(is)

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: LeafToad on June 16, 2007, 06:57:14 AM
In the forest, at the start of the Sasuke fight(not sure if it is just for suicidally or not), he says "I will avenge my parents". It should be clan, as he always says that... Not meaning to nit-pick. >>

No, I don't have a direct quote, sorry.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 16, 2007, 09:59:28 AM
=) we'll keep that in mind

@fiyona
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on June 16, 2007, 10:08:34 AM
Sasuke shouts: "I will avenge my parents..."!

I think the exclamation point should be inside the quotation marks.
Maybe like this:
Sasuke shouts: "I will avenge my parents!"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 16, 2007, 11:31:14 AM
ok.  :eek:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 19, 2007, 04:19:19 AM
Its the Dark Horse  one

http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p16/ramenboy88/untitled-13.jpg
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on June 19, 2007, 05:43:03 PM
Its the Dark Horse  one

http://i124.photobucket.com/albums/p16/ramenboy88/untitled-13.jpg

There's no grammatical or spelling errors, please only post here when it's an actual problem. =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 19, 2007, 06:12:19 PM
Sorry i meant isn't it supposed to be Ba-sans curry
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on June 19, 2007, 06:15:45 PM
Ah, that explains it. Yes, yes it is. *smacks his forehead*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 19, 2007, 06:29:02 PM
Doesn't know if he is being sarcastic. *Runs far away while watching  Obey the Moderator
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 19, 2007, 08:04:17 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Kotomi on June 20, 2007, 04:31:16 PM
You ask him: 'And what is your name?'... and it takes a few moments... then he says: 'Thank your asking! I am the Gama-Sennin from the Myouboku Mountain! You ponder about him... and realize you have heard of him before:  'You are no Gama-Sennin (frog hermit)! You are the legendary Ero-Sennin!!!'

Shouldn't it be?:

You ask him: 'And what is your name?'... and it takes a few moments... then he says: 'Thank your asking! I am the Gama-Sennin from the Myouboku Mountain!' You ponder about him... and realize you have heard of him before: 'You are no Gama-Sennin (frog hermit)! You are the legendary Ero-Sennin!!!'
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 20, 2007, 08:21:13 PM
colours fixed, thanks.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on June 22, 2007, 04:43:30 AM
Erm, im not sure since i didnt get this event but in Kotomi's post, shouldnt "Thank your asking" be Thank you for asking?

Also,

But with you being so focussed on caring for your safety it is no problem for this shadow to appear behind you and send you to the vale of dreams.

Shouldn't it be Focused and a comma after safety?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 23, 2007, 08:40:52 PM
Erm, im not sure since i didnt get this event but in Kotomi's post, shouldnt "Thank your asking" be Thank you for asking?

Also,

But with you being so focussed on caring for your safety it is no problem for this shadow to appear behind you and send you to the vale of dreams.

Shouldn't it be Focused and a comma after safety?
Something Special!
Baa-san's Curry
"Well... letsh shee what I know about Genin itachiclone," she says...

Name: Genin itachiclone
Race: Leaf
Level: 5
Hitpoints: 63
Gold: 0
Weapon: Genin's All-out War Wakizashi
Armor: Tabi Boots and Socks
Attack: 20
Defense: 10

Genin itachiclone ish alsho much uglier shan you!

--------------------



W00tee Scribe Opop ish alsho ash ugly ash you are.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 23, 2007, 09:17:49 PM
Opop, that was correct... =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 24, 2007, 12:01:34 AM
Opop, that was correct... =)

ಠ_ಠ

Maybe 1000 years ago....If you say so
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 24, 2007, 07:29:38 AM
is much uglier than you

<->

is as ugly as you are


<---- I still don't get where an error should lie there
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on June 24, 2007, 09:09:38 AM
`iDoton - Doryuudan!
-----
Doton - Doryuudan!

am I wrong?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 24, 2007, 01:16:27 PM
can you drop a few more words?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 24, 2007, 06:44:57 PM
is much uglier than you

<->

is as ugly as you are



ish alsho much uglier shan you!

--------------------

is as ugly as you are

 ish alsho ash ugly ash you are

The second one is a spammers post. >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 24, 2007, 08:23:58 PM
Forgive me, but I don't get what you want to say here
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on June 24, 2007, 09:21:25 PM
Forgive me, but I don't get what you want to say here

i think hes saying that it should be "is as ugly as you are"

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 24, 2007, 10:22:19 PM
does the additional also hurt?

I don't know ...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on June 24, 2007, 10:27:27 PM
Its naruto. Not hic mc hic hic show  :-?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on June 25, 2007, 05:39:29 PM
I believe he's trying to say that the old english speak is outdated and doesn't belong in a Naruto game.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: kboogi on June 25, 2007, 09:26:49 PM
*KB dentures falls out*

I remember back in my hay day good ole-english!

That is what wrong with you kids = phOOey!
 :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 25, 2007, 10:04:12 PM
Well, Baa-san is quite old, so it doth fit...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on June 26, 2007, 07:47:41 PM
Okay, I'll give a little more info...

When I use this move it comes out as:

`iDoton - Doryuudan!
You create a likeness of a dragon's head that launches mud balls from its mouth at Sasuke.
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 330 damage!
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 320 damage!
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 336 damage!
Psft, someone needs to learn how to use their bloodline limit!
You have defeated Sasuke!
You receive 798 gold!
***Because of the difficult nature of this fight, you are awarded an additional 105 experience!
(420 + 105 = 525) You receive 525 total experience!

~~ Flawless Fight! ~~
You receive an extra turn!


------

But it should be like this:

Doton - Doryuudan!
You create a likeness of a dragon's head that launches mud balls from its mouth at Sasuke.
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 330 damage!
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 320 damage!
The mud ball impact Sasuke for 336 damage!
Psft, someone needs to learn how to use their bloodline limit!
You have defeated Sasuke!
You receive 798 gold!
***Because of the difficult nature of this fight, you are awarded an additional 105 experience!
(420 + 105 = 525) You receive 525 total experience!

~~ Flawless Fight! ~~
You receive an extra turn!

The itaclized is wrong.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 26, 2007, 08:14:40 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on July 01, 2007, 09:00:13 PM
I have this in the buffs :

`r Hinata's Haunting Charm!
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: PyroPrinny on July 02, 2007, 01:39:27 AM
I know that this feature is new...But I just want to point out a few things. All things that might need to be changed in bold and will have examples for changes at the bottom in order. Things that might be added (such as commas) will be in bold in the quote.

Quote
You step out of the gates of the village and stand for a moment to take a look around. A slight breeze in the air stirs the pennants mounted above your head before it touches your skin. Sounds of dogs barking draws your attention to the makeshift camp which is set slightly apart from the village. You walk towards the encampment, trying to avoid muddy puddles left from the rainfall the prior night. The odor of cooking fires permeates the air.

As you approach, you notice two men seated on rough hewn logs in front of a tent. Propped against one of the logs are a pair of long handled battle axes and a bastard sword. One of the men turns his weatherbeaten face towards you. You try to suppress a shudder as you recoil from the sight of his face. A ragged scar marks his face from forehead to jaw, crossing an empty hole where his eye should be. He spits into the campfire before him.

"Are you looking for someone?", he asks in a gravelly voice that comes from deep within.

At that moment a slender elfin woman with her golden hair pulled back in a warrior's braid brushes past you. Strapped across her back is a long bow and a leather quiver full of arrows fletched with turkey feathers. She gives you a smirk as she passes.You turn as the elfin archer continues on her way. That is when you notice a large mangy dog in a tug-of-war with a troll. Clenched in the dog's teeth is a very large bone with bits of flesh still clinging to it. You can't tell if the troll is growling louder than the dog as it tries to wrest the bone from its jaw. Hanging from the troll's wide belt a gnarled club hangs against filthy breeches of animal skins. The sound of the man's voice brings your attention back to the matter at hand.

"Yes. As a matter of fact I am looking for someone." you reply. "I have gold in my purse to pay for the best fighter willing to join me in ridding this realm of vermin."

I know that pennants are flags, but maybe it could be changed to something more Naruto-ish...Maybe lanterns? But it could stay as is.
Wouldn't it be "is" instead of "are"?
Maybe change it to something more ninja-ish. All I can think of is Katana and caltrops for some reason...
Female Ninja possibly?
Same as above.
Troll? Maybe a feral child? o.O That's all that I think that can replace it.
Same as above.

That's all...Hope it's easy to understand.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 02, 2007, 05:38:37 PM
@shukaku fixed
(seen for new buffs)

@pyro
yes, I know, I'll fix it up once the test is over =)
I am not sure if you'll see that camp even or if I am writing something for it.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on July 04, 2007, 06:28:37 PM
in the bar when you drink ale
"Turning around, you take a big chug of the erarty draught, and give Tenten an ale-foam mustache smile."
-->Why is Tenten here and not in the ramen O.o
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on July 04, 2007, 08:39:50 PM
in the bar when you drink ale
"Turning around, you take a big chug of the erarty draught, and give Tenten an ale-foam mustache smile."
-->Why is Tenten here and not in the ramen O.o

eh also for the erathy part

shouldnt it be Hearty? .-.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on July 05, 2007, 03:56:17 PM
Can we do something about this? I can rewrite and edit the text. It's been bothering me. >.>

Erupting and labeled are spelled wrong anyways. <___<; And there are some female staff now. >>;

~~~~

You open your eyes, the pain errupting in your head is almost overwhelming. You try to lift your hands to your head, when you realize that you are tied to a table and feel yourself unable to move.

Looking around you find that you are within a cave. Torchlight is dancing on the walls and strange noises can be heard coming from the dark corners. You tilt your head to the side to take a glimpse of what is going on in here, when you see a small creature appearing. It is definitely too ugly for a troll, too small for a dwarf and too strange for an elf, but what it is you cannot tell.
As this thing notices that you are awake, it turns to you and begins to speak.

"I am <name> The Great. I will be the ruler of this world. Soon!" With a really annoying giggling he continues, "But for this to come to fruition, it takes only a little sacrifice. And that where my plans involve... YOU!"

You cannot believe what you are hearing. This squabbly little thing is going to succeed in taking over the entire world. And you have no chance to stop him.
But he continues, "But before I can continue the Codex of the Villain, Annex B Chapter 6 tells me, I have to introduce you to my evil plan. So, let's get this nonsense behind us."

And so it starts his liturgy about his almighty evilness and after a while... hit finishes talking about its plans. You have looked for every single opportunity to escape but found nothing. Then, you see your last chance. Raising your voice you yell at <name>, "Hey, evil overlord, ruler of the world to-be! If you are so smart and almighty, why not battle me in a hand to hand contest?"

You would have never thought, <name> would ever consider your suggestion but he seems rather willing to let you contest him. So magically your bonds are loosed and you prepare to fight the thing. Then you see some sort of device, <name> seems to use for its plans. Some levers and buttons are used to operate this device. And one is labelled in big red letters: DO NOT PRESS. This must be the self-destruct button! You start circling around <name> and slowly advance to his machine, ready to set this to an end. Aiming for a heavy blow, <name> loses its balance and this is the perfect moment for you to push the button. "Noooooooooooooo....", you hear <name> screaming and almost instantly after you release the button a deep grumbling sound can be heard. You head for the exit of this cave and with a last jump make it out of it closely followed by a cloud of dust. Where once was the entrance to <name>'s cave, is now only debris and dirt. It will surely take some time for you to forget this experience.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on July 06, 2007, 05:23:29 PM
"someone" skill allows them to get the first round of attack!
 why them?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on July 07, 2007, 04:01:47 AM
`Shikamaru gives you an odd lock.

"I'm sorry, but I don't know anyone by that name. Perhaps you should try again?"

Shouldn't lock be look?
Also The colour code is messed up for Shikamaru.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on July 07, 2007, 12:49:21 PM
"Ancient Demon which lunges at you with Ancient Knowledge!"
Could we change it into something else, like:
Wandering Sensei..............................Powers of the wise
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on July 08, 2007, 12:23:35 AM
@Mithras

I asked Neji for the same thing, I'm pretty sure he said that the code for the bar and Ichiraku's is very messy and he couldnt do anything.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on July 10, 2007, 01:04:25 PM
ah ok thx RAIKIRI
but...
Looking around you find that you are within a cave. Torchlight is dancing on the walls and strange noises can be heard coming from the dark corners. You tilt your head to the side to take a glimpse of what is going on in here, when you see a small creature appearing. It is definitely too ugly for a troll, too small for a dwarf and too strange for an elf, but what it is you cannot tell.
As this thing notices that you are awake, it turns to you and begins to speak.
-->This doesn´t sound very much like SL we could add real Naruto figure names in it...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 10, 2007, 06:31:10 PM
@lock
fixed.


@mithras
ancient knowledge...where?

also for the cave, I thought I fixed that =) is it English?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mithras on July 11, 2007, 09:01:52 AM
Yes it is in the english version (i just post things from the english version because I know that the german part is LoGD)

-> The ancient thing is in the forest, a monster
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on July 15, 2007, 02:22:42 PM
*spoiler* still says you are missing *spoiler* and a ballon when you don't have the items required.

The module itself is fixed, just that there's still a text error in the event.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on July 15, 2007, 02:36:36 PM
and Ehm... Mando? Aint Orochimarus Snake Called manda? >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 20, 2007, 10:05:02 PM
mounts will be renamed either way...

rest fixed due to my own creativity... :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: opop on July 21, 2007, 05:24:34 PM
and Ehm... Mando? Aint Orochimarus Snake Called manda? >>

I found that Long Long Long time ago reported it and got the samea answer :-?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on July 23, 2007, 01:47:35 AM
You're a little more relaxed about this infamous rogue, but you tell Hanzaki that you're fine and quickly take your leave. He doesn't say a word, but his puckish smile never leaves his face as you hear a dozen hidden elves begin to sing songs in the forest behind you.

Elves O_o?!

One more thing, Oliver, can't you give Hanzaki a better color? Like deep blue or something.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on July 23, 2007, 05:18:00 PM
"Orochimaru uses a forbidden jutsu to activate a human clone of him!"

himself
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on July 23, 2007, 07:08:40 PM
When fighting...


The Gods shield you from your foe.
Stone C`shellect`sher KBoogi  watches over you
Naruto's Academy Final Double tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 8 points of damage!


My hubby's name is Stone Collector KBoogi (black with the 3 o's in purple), not.. um.. that. lol.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on July 24, 2007, 04:43:52 AM
Not happy, AT ALL about finding this one:

Quote

Beautiful blacknes... Only interrupted by a shattering sound. Like glas being hit by a stone. You slowly open your eyes, just to find your 天沼矛 Ame-no-nuboko, lies there - broken into myriads of tiny pieces.

BlacknesS - glasS

just to find your 天沼矛 Ame-no-nuboko, lyING there
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 24, 2007, 03:23:40 PM
I'll fix it at home.

@atomkai
*lol*
that's sad.... poor Ame-no-nuboko...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 24, 2007, 05:56:30 PM
sorry for the double post.

all fixed.

except:
I have a hunch where this occurs, it is a *rare* case... =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on July 25, 2007, 01:02:00 AM
Yes, yes . . . my poor Heavenly Spear  :cry:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on July 25, 2007, 07:23:13 PM
*stumbles back from slaying Kabuto, feeling very violated and dirty* T_T


Kabuto grabs you in a indecent way and...!

(an)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 25, 2007, 08:09:12 PM
sorry  :roll:

fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on July 26, 2007, 05:55:53 AM
Camelicious Camel KamuiKachi has been slain in the forest by Deadly Ukon.
Deadly Ukon was overheard saying, "{hisher}Mangekyō was no match for my Sakon!"

An text error?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shinigami99 on July 26, 2007, 10:56:33 AM
Camelicious Camel KamuiKachi has been slain in the forest by Deadly Ukon.
Deadly Ukon was overheard saying, "{hisher}Mangekyō was no match for my Sakon!"

An text error?

^Same thing with the "you know, [Insert Name here] had it coming after what I said about {hisher} mom," commented [Insert Name here].



Edit: Another one:
"Player fights" is now back to "Player Kills"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: RAIKIRI on July 30, 2007, 04:53:54 AM
My mom used to use those when she is sewing.

The is should be was..

one of the new forest creatures..the one that uses a giant scissor./
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on July 30, 2007, 11:26:21 PM
He just acts tought.

tought should be tough

It's for zori

How did it managed to move around with all these weight?

managed should be manage

For heavily armored soldier
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on July 31, 2007, 02:13:01 AM
Creature's death messages fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on July 31, 2007, 04:08:52 AM
Not so tought without your sharingan now are you?
You have defeated Elite Sasuke!

Tough. And shouldn't you capitalize Sharingan? >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on July 31, 2007, 05:35:58 PM
How did it managed to move around with all these weight?

managed should be manage

For heavily armored soldier

Also, it should probably be he or she depending on the picture, no? And these should be that: How did he/she manage to move around with all that weight?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 01, 2007, 12:17:19 AM
Sasuke - fixed

As for the heavily armored soldier, besides being used as a pronoun for things or animals, isn't "it" can also be used for something or someone that you are unsure of its gender? But I changed it  to he anyway.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 01, 2007, 01:17:20 AM
Viewing Friend's Location on Friends List--


2Ichiraku`0's Ramen

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Slaying Chouji in the Forest--


Wow, I never notice he was this good-looking.

(noticed)

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Slaying First Hokage / Second Hokage in the Forest--


Where did all those water came from?

(that)

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Slaying Inari in the Forest--


did you point that at me?

(Capitalize letter D)


----------------------------------------------------------------------

Slaying Giant Hawk in the Forest--


A hawk this size exist?!

(exists)

----------------------------------------------------------------------

Slaying Shikaku in the Forest--


It really tickles when his shadow was moving up my body.

(tickled)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on August 01, 2007, 02:14:31 AM
Slaying Sand Shinobi

The sand ninjas that I knew weren't this weak.
You have defeated Sand Shinobi!


The Sand ninjas...?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 01, 2007, 12:55:38 PM
Death Messages Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 01, 2007, 02:56:29 PM
In Lilah's Water Country Cityhouse--

Death Defiant Parkzy stands guard at the coffers, prepared with her 草薙の剣 Kusanagi-no-tsurugi.

(Parkzy is most definately of the male gender.. ._.)

------------------------------------------------

Defeating Heavily Armored Soldier in Forest--

How did he manage to move around with all these  weight?

(that)

------------------------------------------------

Defearting Menma in Forest--

Ops...I think I broke his ocarina.

(Oops)

------------------------------------------------

Defeating Zaku in Forest--

Doesn't it hurt when they inserted those air tubes into his arms?

(Didn't)

------------------------------------------------

Defeating Yuuhi Kurenai in Forest--

What sexy ninja... such a shame...

(What a sexy ninja..)

------------------------------------------------

Defeating Temari in Forest--

So that's how she fan off the heat of the desert

(fanned)

------------------------------------------------

Defeating Hisame in Forest--

Not even a chain can hold me still. You stupid rope of water didn't stand a chance.

(Your)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 01, 2007, 08:59:25 PM
dwellings + friendlist fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 02, 2007, 01:27:46 AM
Death Messages fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 04, 2007, 02:41:48 AM
Hikaru tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 7 points of damage!
You feel vulnerable again function.
End of Round:
Hikaru's Hitpoints (Level 1): DEAD

(I don't even know what that sentence means, it makes no sense to me. Vulnerable again function? Ehh?)


Death Message-- Hikaru
Was that suppose  to hurt me?

(supposed)


Death Message-- Second Hokage
Where did all that water came from?

(come)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 04, 2007, 01:01:08 PM
Death Messages Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 04, 2007, 10:30:06 PM
Sorry.. one day I'll stop reading the game, I promise...


Death Message-- Golem Soldier
Did some kind of spirit just flew out of it?!

(fly)
--------
Death Message-- Tobio
yeah, yeah, come back again

(Capitalize Y, needs period at end)
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Death Message-- Hyuuga Hiashi
You saw right through him

(needs period at end)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 05, 2007, 12:43:44 PM
Quote
Death Message-- Golem Soldier
Did some kind of spirit just flew out of it?!
I don't think there's anything wrong with the message.

--------
Quote
Death Message-- Tobio
yeah, yeah, come back again

This is an old creature created by someone else. Thus, not my mistake. No one saw the mistake until now?! [Fixed]
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Quote
Death Message-- Hyuuga Hiashi
You saw right through him
Not one of my creation either. [Fixed]
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 05, 2007, 04:33:04 PM
It's kind of hard to explain gramatically why it's fly instead of flew.. especially since I haven't had an english class in 3 years. It's just one of those things that I just know. Flew does not sound right at all to me. Also, I double checked the sentence with Microsoft Word just now, and they also say that the word should be fly.

As for the old forest creatures, I'm pretty sure there are a few more that have missing punctuation and capitalization, but it just seems too minor to drag myself all the way over to the forums to post everytime. If no one else has posted the mistakes, then it probably doesn't matter to them either, or they are mindless clickers, like I am guilty of being a great deal of the time..

But yeah.. I'm not trying to nit-pick.. just here to help..
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: deadkat on August 05, 2007, 06:43:18 PM
Fly is present tense, flew is past tense.

Rearrange the sentence into a statement: 

Quote
Some kind of spirit did just fly out of it.

Quote
Some kind of spirit did just flew out of it.

Quote from: Race Selection
Fire country, where the Leaf shinobi are from theres a little town called Konoha.

From the race selection page, where you chose your race after a DK.

Either "Fire country, where the Leaf shinobi are from a little town called Konoha." or "Fire country, where there's a little town called Konoha."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on August 05, 2007, 10:16:03 PM
Fire Country news section:

2409 has earned the title %s has earned the title %s for having slain the Green Dragon %s times! for having slain the Orochimaru Baluski times!

Unless I missed something intentional.

More:

 79233 has slain Kabuto, and saved the entire Earth Country from death and destruction.
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
12092 has been slain %s has been slain %s by %s.
%s by Silly Bunny jamanta.
in the forest
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: cmage on August 05, 2007, 10:21:40 PM
Fire Country news section:

2409 has earned the title %s has earned the title %s for having slain the Green Dragon %s times! for having slain the Orochimaru Baluski times!

Unless I missed something intentional.

More:

 79233 has slain Kabuto, and saved the entire Earth Country from death and destruction.
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
12092 has been slain %s has been slain %s by %s.
%s by Silly Bunny jamanta.
in the forest
and this

 36658 has been slain when he encountered Orochimaru!!! His bones now litter the cave entrance, just like the bones of those who came before.
%s has been slain when he encountered The Green Dragon!!! His bones now litter the cave entrance, just like the bones of those who came before.
%s
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
89086 defeated %s defeated %s in fair combat in the fields of %s. in fair combat in the fields of Genin BlkOpsJoker.
-=-=-=-=-=-=-=-
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shukaku on August 05, 2007, 10:31:50 PM
xO in the shades, everytime i make a torment, my hp gets higher

Name Supreme Bijuu Shukaku
Level 15
Soulpoints 385/125
 
 
Torments 0
Psyche 31
Spirit 31
Spirits DEAD
Born as Sound
Alignment Lawful Evil 
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 07, 2007, 09:02:46 PM
Hard?

Quote
Did some kind of spirit just flew out of it?!

<--- Did is past tense. Flew too.

You do not use two times past tense with 2 verbs in the same sentence, do you?

I wonder what is hard on that. Sure, it happens by accident, but why is it hard to explain? Oo

@fiyona
the "again function"
was from a buff.
which one did you activate?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on August 08, 2007, 05:16:18 PM
@Gyu

You have encountered Dangerous Sasori which lunges at you with Third Kazakage Puppet!

Kazekage is spelled wrong.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hyuugakage on August 09, 2007, 06:03:44 AM
Quote:
   
Something Special!
As you're walking around, you have the tingling sensation you know from killing many good guys for your organisation.

You suck them in as they are floating around you... you get 4 souls!



Organization has a z
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 09, 2007, 02:02:54 PM
@Gyu

You have encountered Dangerous Sasori which lunges at you with Third Kazakage Puppet!

Kazekage is spelled wrong.

Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 09, 2007, 06:10:52 PM
Quote
Organization has a z

And organisation a s

check wikipedia...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/American_and_British_English_spelling_differences#-ise_.2F_-ize
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on August 09, 2007, 06:44:12 PM
"American spelling accepts only -ize endings in most cases, such as organize, recognize, and realize."

I figure more americans play, so that'd be the better choice.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 09, 2007, 09:31:10 PM
so, you mean I have to remove the honour, neighbour, and stuff too  :shock:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on August 10, 2007, 03:20:07 PM
I don't think those words need to be changed. Oliver uses Euro-English then the server should be in Euro-English, not US-English.

If players want US-English then put it in the lauguage selection.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on August 10, 2007, 05:30:04 PM
so, you mean I have to remove the honour, neighbour, and stuff too  :shock:

Nah, I like those. =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on August 11, 2007, 09:06:26 PM
This appers when im gonna change title!

<input id='input' name='newname' width='25' maxlength='25' value='`)Bla`~ck `7Cat`)'s `~Eve'>

?? O.o
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on August 12, 2007, 01:21:02 AM
i just noticed this <<;

As Gai nods at you, you reach for Sushi Addict Kitsuneko and kiss Sushi Addict Kitsuneko lucious lips!!
Your points increase with Sushi Addict Kitsuneko by 3.

____________'s luscious lips?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 12, 2007, 10:37:03 AM
I'll fix it, but I will rework the marriage system.

a) it is not really fast

b) I am not fond of having a positive reaction if the other player does not even know about you ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on August 12, 2007, 06:15:46 PM
I'll fix it, but I will rework the marriage system.

a) it is not really fast

b) I am not fond of having a positive reaction if the other player does not even know about you ;)

Ahah, indeed. :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on August 13, 2007, 08:59:16 AM
Something Special!

Shady though he is, you decide to take up the salesman on his offer.

The salesman searches his deep pockets, then looking slightly embarrassed, he picks up a mug from the table behind him. He says to you, "You've purchased one of the best things there are around here, an ale from this very inn!" He hands you the mug and slinks off into the shadows as you start to drink it down.

You make an ugly face, as it turned out to be one of Cedrick's beers, instead!
You feel sick!
You feel tipsy!

Shouldn't it be Ichiraku's?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Fiyona on August 13, 2007, 05:30:10 PM
Fighting Djinn in Konoha--

The Onbaa retreats in a dazzling display speed  and agility! You have attained the artifact!

(missing of)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on August 13, 2007, 06:58:04 PM
Something Special!

Shady though he is, you decide to take up the salesman on his offer.

The salesman searches his deep pockets, then looking slightly embarrassed, he picks up a mug from the table behind him. He says to you, "You've purchased one of the best things there are around here, an ale from this very inn!" He hands you the mug and slinks off into the shadows as you start to drink it down.

You make an ugly face, as it turned out to be one of Cedrick's beers, instead!
You feel sick!
You feel tipsy!

Shouldn't it be Ichiraku's?
No, Lee talks about how another bar's drinks are bad and I think that it was that bar >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: klaymank on August 13, 2007, 07:18:49 PM
Cedrick is the original name of the barkeep.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on August 14, 2007, 01:09:24 AM
"You've purchased one of the best things there are around here, an ale from this very inn!"

Read the highlighted part carefully Doom...
I am pretty sure I am right.  :)

I mean instead of Cedrick it could be Ten Ten's Beers or Tsunade's
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 14, 2007, 09:00:49 AM
a small hint what you did at that time?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on August 14, 2007, 11:15:31 AM
Bribing the Inn and checking the Bingo Book on my alt Enishi when I received the event I accepted the salesman offer.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 14, 2007, 07:02:06 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on August 19, 2007, 03:25:57 PM
While checking Bertold's I came across this.

Just outside the outskirts of the village, a training area and riding range has been set up. Many people from all across the land mingle as Bertold, a strapping man with a wind-weathered face, extols the virtues of each of the creatures in his care. As you approach, Bertold smiles broadly, "Ahh! how can I help you today, my %s?" he asks in a booming voice.
If you don't see something you like today, perhaps you should check again tomorrow.

Bertold strokes your creature's flank and offers you 667 gold and 20 gems for your Gamabushi.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 21, 2007, 08:44:46 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Lebis on August 23, 2007, 06:03:30 PM
Three...Two...One...
Reaching one, he pulls the arm holding the rock from behind his back. You quickly block the incoming blow with the paper, which is much stronger than you expected. "It's magic paper! ...if you wondered," the genin explains.

"Well, I guess that's your point then..." the genin admits.

You now have 2 points while the weird genin has 1 point.

"Seems like we have a winner!" the weird genin says, not quite as happy as before. "Now you want a prize, right... oh well..."

He reaches into the bag on his belt and hands you 20 gold.

"Next time we meet, I won't be this easy to beat." With these words he heads into the forest, depression written all over his face.

~~~~~

I picked paper, he picked rock. So why did I block the paper I chose?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on August 23, 2007, 06:22:17 PM
thats weird..

Ehum : "You have no. entries"

whats with the .
? its in the Bingo book.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on August 23, 2007, 08:16:22 PM
Three...Two...One...
Reaching one, he pulls the arm holding the rock from behind his back. You quickly block the incoming blow with the paper, which is much stronger than you expected. "It's magic paper! ...if you wondered," the genin explains.

"Well, I guess that's your point then..." the genin admits.

You now have 2 points while the weird genin has 1 point.

"Seems like we have a winner!" the weird genin says, not quite as happy as before. "Now you want a prize, right... oh well..."

He reaches into the bag on his belt and hands you 20 gold.

"Next time we meet, I won't be this easy to beat." With these words he heads into the forest, depression written all over his face.

~~~~~

I picked paper, he picked rock. So why did I block the paper I chose?

You block the blow With the paper. You dont block the paper itself, then you become amazed it can withstand the rock.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 26, 2007, 09:49:28 AM
thats weird..

Ehum : "You have no. entries"

whats with the .
? its in the Bingo book.

In the original sentence, there is no such point.
where did you get that one? which action did you do?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on August 26, 2007, 03:19:22 PM
thats weird..

Ehum : "You have no. entries"

whats with the .
? its in the Bingo book.

In the original sentence, there is no such point.
where did you get that one? which action did you do?

I went from the mailbox and deleted a entry in it.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on August 27, 2007, 09:08:36 AM
hm,
exactly at that location, I see no "." in between the words.

if your list is now empty or you have only few on it and can delete them, try to reproduce that and take a screenshot please.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on August 30, 2007, 08:28:17 PM
Using the "List Warriors" feature, Homestar Rower asdfjkl is listed as "Missing Nin".

Looking in the Hall of Fame, he is a "Horrible Gelatinous Blob".

Are these supposed to be synced, or are those entries correct?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on August 31, 2007, 07:44:54 AM
"You have encountered Malignant The Demon Within Yakumo which lunges at you with Demon Flare!"

should there be a comma after "yakumo"? >.> and another comma after "malignant"?

edit: ooh... forget about the first problem... that's there for a reason isn't it? >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mirei on September 10, 2007, 01:17:43 AM
In the couple paragraphs you are shown when you first login it says
"Well then, you should know three places... the forest, Shizune's Weaponshop and Kurenai's Armor. You can only access them at your home city...so don't stroll around too much if you want to buy new equipment. "

This is false as all three of these places can be accessed anywhere but Konoha Gakure
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 10, 2007, 09:12:01 PM
Really?

When I am Sand, I find them ONLY in the sand village.

And so forth.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on September 10, 2007, 10:27:49 PM
im leaf and i buy armor in Rice. >>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mirei on September 10, 2007, 11:44:33 PM
I definitly can find them in every town and frequently go to the forest in other towns along with buying weapons and armor
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on September 11, 2007, 12:54:31 AM
I can get into the forest in any village that has the ability to, and same for weapons and armors....
what game are you playing neji? o.O
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: klaymank on September 11, 2007, 01:00:40 AM
I'm sand and I can but armor and weapons in leaf, mist, sound, and sand.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 11, 2007, 07:23:08 PM
fixed  :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on September 12, 2007, 10:07:08 PM
When you get your hp restored in some random events it says

You hitpoints are restored to full

Wouldn't make more sense is it was your hitpoints are fully restored?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 16, 2007, 03:25:51 PM
could you give me a bit more of a hint? =)
I don't remember *all* texts in the game.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on September 17, 2007, 12:54:24 AM
Quote
Zone 10(Sleepy Hollow) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. This zone seems to be all in a dark grey hue many dead trees making small forests all through the zone with small winding paths going through them, though you notice that many of the trees have weapons sticking out of them and instead of sap blood comes out of the trees instead.
...though you notice that many of the trees have weapons sticking out of them and instead of sap, blood comes out of the trees instead.


Quote
Undead Zone 6- Your soul floats in, perhaps seeking vengeance? The zone is being rained upon by a heavy rain that seems to burn to the touch, then upon further inspection of a rock you notice the rain is literally eating away at the rock slowly. The rain seems to be going on and off, leaving just enough of you so you won?t rot away.
wouldn't
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on September 17, 2007, 12:57:09 AM
Would it make more sense if it was....

Zone 1(Desert) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. You look around and notice that this zone is completely  barren and covered entirely in sand with large gusts of wind frequently passing through.

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Shouldn't you add a semicolon.

Zone 3(Lightning Plains) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. You walk in and look up at the cloudy sky; you can see flashes of  lightning high up in the clouds and you can hear the rumbling of thunder rather close by.

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Needs a period at the end of the sentence, and I believe it needs a semicolon instead of the comma.

Zone 4(Fire Valley) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. In the distance you can see that there are several volcanoes a long distance away; several of them are spewing out large amounts of ash and lava littering the zone with hot fire and many tall trees are ablaze in this zone.

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Present tense no? Commas also need to be added. If someone can think of a better sentence to put here it would be better...The word blowing is used too many times and the sentense need to sound just a little better if you know what I mean.

Zone 6(Plains) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. You walk in and notice you're in an almost empty field, filled with tall grass with large gusts of wind blowing through the zone, shifting through the grass, and blowing past you.

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One very long sentence...needs semicolons or periods. In this zone description I have changes many things because the original one did not make sense. If you like it you can use it.

Zone 8(Death Valley) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. Steep canyons and gigantic boulders adorn this zone; at the bottom of the canyons there are vast amountsof dead bodies. Also in the zone there lies a dark looking cave that within its depths you see nothing, but many treasures await you. Many have lost their way and never returned with stalagmite rocks covering the cave floor.

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Zone 9(Empty Town...) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. The zone is enshrouded in darkness. A full moon hangs in the sky giving the zone some slight amount of light. Around are several building awnings and water towers; it seems to resemble the streets of a deserted city.

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Edited the sentence a little, and deleted one or two words.

Zone 10(Sleepy Hollow) - You walk in with your Shinobi tools and weapons ready and looking for a fight. This zone seems to be all in a dark grey hue. You see many dead trees making small forests all through the zone with small winding paths going through them, though you notice that many of the trees have weapons sticking out of them and instead of sap, blood comes out.

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I hope I didn't make wrong mistakes myself xD.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on September 17, 2007, 05:57:18 AM
Game text:
You have encountered Hanzaki's Kobun which lunges at you with Stabbing Knive!

Knife - singular

Knives - plural

Unless I am missing something else.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: klaymank on September 17, 2007, 01:30:58 PM
Or stabbing Knives. Somebody might of put in the wrong one or forgot a letter
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on September 19, 2007, 11:36:34 PM
Ummm....Neji...you will fix the text issues right...no rush...I just wanted to make sure you didn't forget =D.

I know how busy you can get.

By the way...nice job with the pirate talk lines =D.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 21, 2007, 07:40:10 PM
Sorry, fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on September 30, 2007, 06:03:40 AM
You follow a narrow path away from the stables and come across a rustic looking large meeting hall. A guard stops you at the door and asks to see your nin registration card. Upon showing it to him, he says, "Welcome to the Mission Headquater's reward system. You have earned 5625 points and have 1225 points available to spend," and admits you in.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 30, 2007, 10:03:02 AM
thanks ,fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on October 17, 2007, 02:10:47 AM
Petition:

From: Genin Rudeolph
Subject: One minor error
Sent: 2007-10-16 19:40:35

After I killed oro today the next screen talks about "Waiting for him to make his next move, but IT does not". Either it is portraying he is not only human, or it should say HE!......
Not a big deal really.... Just thought I would mention it.

From: Genin Rudeolph
Subject: Wait here it is!
Sent: 2007-10-16 19:43:20

Visiting the Veterans Memorial above the curious rock it says, "While YOUR there" when it should be "While YOU'RE there" or you are.. Way minor errors though...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on October 18, 2007, 01:59:02 AM
Welcome to the Legend of the Green Dragon New Player Primer

Your first day
Your first day in the world can be very confusing! You're presented with a lot of information, and you don't need almost any of it! It's true! One thing you should probably keep an eye on though, are your hit points. This is found under "Vital Info." No matter what profession you choose, in the end, you are some kind of warrior or fighter, and so you need to learn how to do battle.

 General Questions
9. What if all I have to say is 'yo - sup?'?
If you don't have something nice (or useful, or interesting, or creative that adds to the general revelry of the game) to say, don't say anything.
But if you do want to converse with someone, send them an email through the Shinobi Mailbox.

One question.. is the FAQ still based off of the Legend of Green Dragon? I am asking this because in one of the statements it says, "Bluspring's Warrior Training," and since SL includes the name Ninja Academy instead, new members could get a little confused no?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on October 19, 2007, 04:08:41 PM
I'm not sure if this stuff couldn't be changed because of the code or whatever, but here it is...

"Fight the Djinn!"

"You have encountered Djinn which lunges at you with The elements!"

"The Djinn summons forth the four elements to rain down on you!"

Onbaa, and he should probably use a different attack, no?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 21, 2007, 12:07:14 AM
done.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on October 25, 2007, 10:15:36 AM
The new titles has alot of Mistakes.
Example!

Mizuk`%ge
 and
$Hok`%ge


Please check all the titles over, Neji? ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 25, 2007, 10:40:15 AM
the first one I can't really track down, the second one is fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on October 25, 2007, 10:43:50 AM
Otukage is spelled wrong.

Its Otokage.

o.O
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 25, 2007, 11:30:14 AM
Erm, it is Oto.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Uchihabeast on October 25, 2007, 01:00:17 PM
"Grand Otoukage"
Its Otokage. ._.;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 25, 2007, 03:24:21 PM
 :P
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on October 25, 2007, 09:05:26 PM
As for colors (the thread got closed before I could post this), just use Isai's, Abyss's, and Shikki's old one.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on October 25, 2007, 09:19:47 PM
As for colors (the thread got closed before I could post this), just use Isai's, Abyss's, and Shikki's old one.

But then it wouldn't be original.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Maria on October 27, 2007, 12:16:05 AM
Fire Country has no special relations to Fire Country

Shouldn't it be the water country? :-?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on October 27, 2007, 12:36:08 AM
Fire Country has no special relations to Fire Country

Shouldn't it be the water country? :-?



Rice Field Country has no special relations to Rice Field Country.

Yay =D

KB already said something ingame about the module doing that and it not being fixable or something... .-.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 27, 2007, 02:49:23 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on October 28, 2007, 03:10:57 AM
I know this was just implemented, so the exact wording will take time, however . . .

Quote
You remind yourself that this is a place of quiet piece and romance.

"Piece" should be "peace".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on October 28, 2007, 03:40:01 AM
As for colors (the thread got closed before I could post this), just use Isai's, Abyss's, and Shikki's old one.

But then it wouldn't be original.

I dont mind putting teh combomation up for my old one.... it looked much better than this one...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 28, 2007, 10:09:34 AM
Sorry for  the "piece".


I seem not to be able to produce code AND think in a language to bring it down at the same time.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on October 28, 2007, 10:53:40 PM
You were tracking at least three different languages for the same operation, it's understandable.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on October 29, 2007, 05:09:31 PM
Sorry for  the "piece".


I seem not to be able to produce code AND think in a language to bring it down at the same time.


Sorry I didn't see it before, but all of the Meadows should probably be "You remind yourself that this a place of peace, quite, and budding romance. This is not a place to harbor fights, rude language, or anything more then flirting." as well.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 29, 2007, 07:04:47 PM
I think I'll buy that for a dollar =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on November 06, 2007, 04:27:54 PM
Konohamaru has now finally done enough pranks for now and settles down for a while.
You see him on the right hand side of the road with his sidekicks, hiding in hiding.

"hiding in hiding" doesn't make any sense. It should be "trying to hide."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 06, 2007, 05:42:56 PM
to hide

to be in hiding.

hiding in hiding sounded...interesting.


but I guess my playfulness crossed the magic language border?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 11, 2007, 03:33:07 PM
I went to buy a new armor but I think I tried stealing (new module I didn't know about?)MightyE stopped me, Pegasus was also involved somehow. I didn't know what all happened because at my grandma's house the browser only scrolls down so far. Anyways these are characters from LotGD and need to be replaced with Kurenai and Shizune.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 11, 2007, 04:06:27 PM
stealing is not new =)

but it should have been changed :(
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on November 11, 2007, 10:47:34 PM
Um, the entire Fire Country description was reset during the maintenence.
It now talks about faires and crap.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 11, 2007, 11:03:34 PM
done, if this is the only thing ... then the upgrade worked great :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ryushi on November 12, 2007, 02:38:28 AM
stealing is not new =)

but it should have been changed :(

Like I said I could only see a fourth of the page and couldn't stay on it long.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on November 12, 2007, 07:14:38 PM
Minor text issue - Fire Country Main Page:

Quote

nAnother nin whispers in your ear, "Today is Pentiori 12, 543. It is Erstedaei."


Extra 'n' at the beginning.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on November 14, 2007, 05:33:49 PM
merick's stables..


"Och, this beastie will serve ye well indeed," says the dwarf.

tattoo parlor

"The elf gets back to his drawing as you gaze about and try to decide."


and .. the text at the sandcastle building contest says "guy".. you mean Maito Gai, right?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 14, 2007, 08:10:53 PM
the sand is not "naruto-themed" currently, I saw no issues with it.
Title: Inuzuki Hana
Post by: AkatsukiUchihaStrife on November 16, 2007, 05:47:26 AM
The sensei.. it reads Inuzuki Hana last I checked, but it should be Inuzuka Hana
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Kureaa on November 16, 2007, 08:44:29 AM
Not sure if I post this here.  Just a minor spelling mistake I noticed a few days ago but forgot to mention it.

When you choose a Specialty, (Taijutsu) Punching is spelled puching.  Or something like that.

Unless I was dreaming  :-?  Not sure, but you should check it out anyways  :)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 16, 2007, 01:28:10 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on November 19, 2007, 03:14:37 AM
Kirigakure is also located here, protected by a dense forest of tall snowy pine trees. The village earned the nickname, "the Village Hidden in the Bloody Mist", because of its gruesome graduation exam in the past.

The comma should be before the quotes.

Also should the "t" in "the" be capitalized since it the the beginning letter of the quote?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gaara_Sand_burial on November 19, 2007, 10:01:09 AM
Shukaku in the Grassy fields.

The beast gives out a load cackle, his eyes widen once again.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on November 19, 2007, 10:07:08 PM
Shukaku in the Grassy fields.

The beast gives out a load cackle, his eyes widen once again.
Widen is right.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gaara_Sand_burial on November 20, 2007, 12:53:25 AM
Shukaku in the Grassy fields.

The beast gives out a load cackle, his eyes widen once again.
Widen is right.
Shouldn't it be wide? >_>
Anyway the load bit isn't.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on November 20, 2007, 01:02:26 AM
it could be widen, but then the word "and" would be needed <<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 20, 2007, 09:28:17 AM
fixed. :twisted:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Maria on November 21, 2007, 12:19:52 AM
Then you see some sort of device, Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx seems to use for its plans. Some levers and buttons are used to operate this device. And one is labelled in big red letters: DO NOT PRESS. This must be the self-destruct button! You start circling around Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx and slowly advance to his machine, ready to set this to an end. Aiming for a heavy blow, Higeki 蒼い月 xXKyuubiXx loses its balance and this is the perfect moment for you to push the button.

The two "its" should be "his"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on November 21, 2007, 12:41:04 AM
Well, "its" is general and if I recall the event talks about some creature, so gender isn't mentioned. Of course, you'd know their gender if you knew them in-game, but I think it's meant to be that way. Or it IS a typo <<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 21, 2007, 09:12:30 AM
no typo, it formerly was "the creature", and I think it's ok to be genderless and not too associated with the event=)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on November 21, 2007, 08:20:20 PM
There are different rings. Each ring emphasizes a different aspect. Your true love should get the appropriate ring that fits to your relationsship. Else, the chance of refusal is quite high, so pay attention to your spouse-to-be and the future of you both."

(Ino in gardens)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 22, 2007, 09:53:27 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on December 03, 2007, 02:00:50 PM
Minor:

You have encountered Hanzaki's Kobun which lunges at you with Stabbing Knive!

Should either be Knife (singular) or Knives (plural).
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on December 04, 2007, 11:22:24 AM
I think, You have encountered Hanzaki's Kobun which lunge at you with Stabbing Knives!, would be the correct text.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 04, 2007, 08:46:33 PM
right.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on December 19, 2007, 01:16:05 AM
Travelling the world can be a dangerous occupation.

Traveling
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on December 19, 2007, 01:18:51 AM
I think both forms can be used
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on December 19, 2007, 02:24:57 AM
I think both forms can be used

If I am not mistaken, yes you are correct  :D.

Sorry for that guys.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on December 20, 2007, 01:25:42 AM
At the training for increasing attack with Hachimon, it says "Juuken Training".
Shouldn't it be "Goken Training"?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 20, 2007, 10:07:40 PM
my wrong.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on December 24, 2007, 12:20:31 AM
In the clan halls.

Just outside you can see a Christmas Elf offering trees - it could be good for morale to get one for your members!

The addition of the a would be better.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on December 25, 2007, 11:10:43 AM
Hakke Rokujyonshō! - You deal tremendous damage to the enemies chakra system by performing an insane number of hits!

its rokujûyon (roku 6, jû 10 and yon 4). or is it just another transcription?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Rokudaime on December 27, 2007, 08:39:05 AM
You have encountered Akatsuki Leader which lunges at you with Rin'engan!
Akatsuki Leader's Hitpoints (Level 15)

It is spelled Rin'negan instead of Rin'engan.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on December 27, 2007, 11:30:33 PM
You have encountered Akatsuki Leader which lunges at you with Rin'engan!
Akatsuki Leader's Hitpoints (Level 15)

It is spelled Rin'negan instead of Rin'engan.
Fixed.

Some call it Rin'engan while others call it Rin'negan. In the end, I had to use a Kanji to Romanji converter.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on December 28, 2007, 11:36:06 AM
Hakke Rokujyonshō! - You deal tremendous damage to the enemies chakra system by performing an insane number of hits!

its rokujûyon (roku 6, jû 10 and yon 4). or is it just another transcription?

jyuu = juu = jû = jyû

you may leave out the y, same thing.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on December 28, 2007, 12:38:08 PM
Hakke Rokujyonshō! - You deal tremendous damage to the enemies chakra system by performing an insane number of hits!

its rokujûyon (roku 6, jû 10 and yon 4). or is it just another transcription?

jyuu = juu = jû = jyû

you may leave out the y, same thing.

huh? i was pretty sure its wrong.  ジュウ. ジュ-> contracted its "ju" (hepburn-system). seen as two basic kana it would be jiyu. well, i dont know every single rule and transcription, so im going to believe you. sorry.


EDIT:
Quote
Now, was that really necessary?

i just wanted to help. =( excuse my lack of knowledge. again, im sorry for causing trouble.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Maria on December 29, 2007, 07:58:43 PM
He should have stick with Sakon.

It should be stuck


You have encountered Malevolent Kunihisa which lunges at you with Kane Bunshin no Jutsu!

Correct me if I'm wrong (because I haven't seen the movie yet) but isn't it supposed to be Kage Bunshin?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on December 30, 2007, 12:21:25 AM
the second one is reffering to one of the fillers where he says "Kane bunshin" and throws money out and had his guards come
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: AkatsukiUchihaStrife on December 30, 2007, 11:36:44 AM
Hakke Rokujyonshō! - You deal tremendous damage to the enemies chakra system by performing an insane number of hits!

its rokujûyon (roku 6, jû 10 and yon 4). or is it just another transcription?

jyuu = juu = jû = jyû

you may leave out the y, same thing.

huh? i was pretty sure its worng.  ジュウ. ジュ-> contracted its "ju" (hepburn-system). seen as two basic kana it would be jiyu. well, i dont know every single rule and transcription, so im going to believe you. sorry.

10 is Ju or Jyu. :/ And, yeah, if it was two basic kana, it would be Jiyu.. but it shouldn't be It should be a big Ji, and a small yu next to it, I think.

Now, was that really necessary?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on December 30, 2007, 04:44:52 PM
He should have stick with Sakon.

It should be stuck


You have encountered Malevolent Kunihisa which lunges at you with Kane Bunshin no Jutsu!

Correct me if I'm wrong (because I haven't seen the movie yet) but isn't it supposed to be Kage Bunshin?


I see no problem with the text.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on December 30, 2007, 05:29:54 PM
He should have stick with Sakon.

It should be stuck


You have encountered Malevolent Kunihisa which lunges at you with Kane Bunshin no Jutsu!

Correct me if I'm wrong (because I haven't seen the movie yet) but isn't it supposed to be Kage Bunshin?

The Kane thing is right.
It was some rich kid who used money to get servants do things.
Money in Japanese is Kane.
Hence, Kane Bushin.
It is a pun on Kage Bushin.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on December 31, 2007, 09:19:44 PM
He should have stick with Sakon.

It should be stuck


You have encountered Malevolent Kunihisa which lunges at you with Kane Bunshin no Jutsu!

Correct me if I'm wrong (because I haven't seen the movie yet) but isn't it supposed to be Kage Bunshin?


I see no problem with the text.

Maria is correct on the first part, it's 'stuck' not 'stick'.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on January 01, 2008, 12:47:41 AM
Stuck sounds...well...stuck! XD

Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 01, 2008, 06:22:05 PM
present perfect I believe.

have + 3rd form of past I believe

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shigeo on January 01, 2008, 07:36:06 PM
You have encountered Kabuki Naruto which lunges at you with Kabuki Dance!


*Laughes* That's the silliest thing I have ever seen!
You have defeated Kabuki Naruto!

Red bit should be 'laughs'.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on January 02, 2008, 04:01:25 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on January 15, 2008, 05:12:53 PM
Find a flirt


Whom are you looking for?
Try to enter the name without the title, or completely to narrow down the search (results limited to 50 hits).

At the HOF Collectibles when you search this appears after you type in a character name.
Shouldn't it be Find a player?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on January 15, 2008, 05:19:14 PM
Or "Find a potential partner"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 15, 2008, 09:39:09 PM
nah, you can choose to find a random one or directly a player.

that's in the submenues there.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on January 18, 2008, 01:57:35 AM
You currently have 1 messages in your Mail Archive.
The limit is 200 messages.

It should be message(s) or message.

EDIT: You currently have messages 5 in your Mail Archive.
The limit is 200 messages.

That doesn't make much sense to me.

5 messages?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on January 21, 2008, 12:42:42 AM
You have encountered Dangerous Loneliness which lunges at you with Silence!

Dangerous Loneliness's Hitpoints (Level 17): 221
YOUR Hitpoints: 344
Pakkun charges into battle.
Pakkun races into battle, hitting Dangerous Loneliness for 2 points of damage.
Pakkun races into battle, hitting Dangerous Loneliness for 1 points of damage.
Pakkun races into battle, hitting Dangerous Loneliness for 1 points of damage.
Your weapon hums to life as you swing it at Dangerous Loneliness!
You are protected by Mr. Black!
You execute a minor power move!
You hit Dangerous Loneliness for 347 points of damage!
You feel vulnerable again function.
End of Round:
Dangerous Loneliness's Hitpoints (Level 17): DEAD
YOUR Hitpoints: 344
What is the sound of one hand clapping?
You have defeated Dangerous Loneliness!
You receive 672 gold!
***Because of the difficult nature of this fight, you are awarded an additional 175 experience!
(349 + 175 = 524) You receive 524 total experience!

The 'text issue' lies with the "end of buff" message.  Function seems unnecessary.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on January 21, 2008, 10:07:57 AM
@ace
fine, shoot the prisoner

rest fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on January 23, 2008, 02:12:27 PM
Something Special!
You open your eyes, the pain errupting in your head is almost overwhelming. You try to lift your hands to your head, when you realize that you are tied to a table and feel yourself unable to move.

Looking around you find that you are within a cave. Torchlight is dancing on the walls and strange noises can be heard coming from the dark corners. You tilt your head to the side to take a glimpse of what is going on in here, when you see a small creature appearing. It is definitely too ugly for Orochimaru, too small for Kakashi and too strange for Hinata, but what it is you cannot tell.
As this thing notices that you are awake, it turns to you and begins to speak.

"I am Pǿisǿnǿus KBoogi The Great. I will be the ruler of this world. Soon!" With a really annoying giggling he continues, "But for this to come to fruition, it takes only a little sacrifice. And that where my plans involve... YOU!"

You cannot believe what you are hearing. This squabbly little thing is going to succeed in taking over the entire world. And you have no chance to stop him.
But he continues, "But before I can continue the Codex of the Villain, Annex B Chapter 6 tells me, I have to introduce you to my evil plan. So, let's get this nonsense behind us."

And so it starts his liturgy about his almighty evilness and after a while... he finishes talking about its plans. You have looked for every single opportunity to escape but found nothing. Then, you see your last chance. Raising your voice you yell at Pǿisǿnǿus KBoogi, "Hey, evil overlord, ruler of the world to-be! If you are so smart and almighty, why not battle me in a hand to hand contest?"

*continues*...

It should have been "he" or "she".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on February 01, 2008, 12:10:45 AM
You have encountered Malevolent Itachi which lunges at you with Sharingan!

Malevolent Itachi's Hitpoints (Level 14): 594
YOUR Hitpoints: 1911
Kyuubi rages into battle.
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Malevolent Itachi for 2 points of damage.
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Malevolent Itachi for 4 points of damage.
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Malevolent Itachi for 3 points of damage.
You try to hit Malevolent Itachi but are RIPOSTED for 140 points of damage!
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Malevolent Itachi for 14 points of damage.
You try to hit Malevolent Itachi but are RIPOSTED for 137 points of damage!
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Malevolent Itachi for 14 points of damage.
You execute a minor power move!
You hit Malevolent Itachi for 1 points of damage!

point?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 01, 2008, 06:55:26 PM
sadly, that will stay ;)
I can't pick that with the current system, and making an addon takes too much load (imagine these hit *every single fightround*) Oo
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on February 11, 2008, 06:15:24 PM
@Gyu

Dangerous Lee shouts: "Feel the full power of youth..."! End of Round:

Might want to remove that. =)

Edit: Also

"The flying ninja healer"

Why is he flying? Maybe "The Traveling Medical Nin" would be a better name?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on February 18, 2008, 11:27:23 PM
Shadowy Meadows


You enter a small hidden place in the gardens called the Shadowy Meadows.

You see many other all over the place, engaged in talks - especially romantic ones - but also a game corner where discussions are going on during games of the mind.

In a more distant part, there is also some sort of picknick taking place.



Isn't it spelled "picnic"
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on February 21, 2008, 04:25:23 PM
When Daibakufu no Jutsu (16) (Suiton) runs out:

The massice blast of water washes everything away.

massive  ?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 21, 2008, 05:10:51 PM
done
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on March 02, 2008, 08:31:39 PM
when tayuya activates her cs:

Curse Seal! Tayuya becomes stronger as the curse seal spread across his body!

tayuya is a girl
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on March 02, 2008, 10:37:23 PM
when tayuya activates her cs:

Curse Seal! Tayuya becomes stronger as the curse seal spread across his body!

tayuya is a girl

Should be spreads.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on March 04, 2008, 03:50:16 PM
merchant.
"Ahh, sadly I have nothing today in the category Recipes.... okay, maybe tomorrow is a better day ^^." says the strange dealer."

thats annoying, seriously.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 04, 2008, 04:28:50 PM
@ace
fixed

@Gi
that much?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on March 04, 2008, 09:46:10 PM
merchant.
"Ahh, sadly I have nothing today in the category Recipes.... okay, maybe tomorrow is a better day ^^." says the strange dealer."

thats annoying, seriously.

I posted a similar thing on LoB, but what is the problem is the period. It should be a comma.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 05, 2008, 12:46:40 PM
fixed here too.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on March 05, 2008, 04:36:46 PM
's Hitpoints (Level ): 40's Hitpoints (Level ): 40
Kin's Hitpoints (Level 4): 306
Tsurugi Misumi's Hitpoints (Level 19): 188
Tayuya's Hitpoints (Level 19): 265
Ukon's Hitpoints (Level 19): 275
Kidoumaru's Hitpoints (Level 19): 210
Kimimaro's Hitpoints (Level 19): 225
Midare (Rain)'s Hitpoints (Level 19): 209
Oboro (Rain)'s Hitpoints (Level 19): 492
*Orochimaru's Hitpoints (Level 17): 498
YOUR Hitpoints: 1009
Kyuubi rages into battle.
was swallowed by the sand and suffers 300 damage!
Suna Shuriken!
You throw shuriken made from sand.
Kin was swallowed by the sand and suffers 324 damage!
Tsurugi Misumi was swallowed by the sand and suffers 295 damage!
Tayuya was swallowed by the sand and suffers 303 damage!

There is no names in those two spot
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 05, 2008, 04:41:49 PM
this is not a text issue but a bug basically... (wrong variable)

I'll check.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on March 07, 2008, 03:11:18 AM
"Ahh, sadly I have nothing today in the category Recipes.... okay, maybe tomorrow is a better day ^^", says the strange dealer.

Comma before the quote please.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 07, 2008, 02:57:22 PM
?

Never seen that one. Comma always after the quote?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on March 07, 2008, 10:00:41 PM
http://www.guilford.edu/about_guilford/services_and_administration/college_relations/style.html

"Commas are always placed inside quotation marks."

Judy said, "Hey there," before she fled like a speeding bullet.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 07, 2008, 11:44:03 PM
that's funny...

ok
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on March 08, 2008, 02:50:32 PM
Would just like to point out this is why The English language is hardest to write of all languages, we have have too many rules

So not to spam this topic

To neji down below

I did for 3 years, and went to germany for a month wasnt that bad. I learned you guys can break dance over there pretty good lol

Oh also if look up chinese and english are voted hardest to learn in most searches and surveys etc. English for grammer and rules, Chinese for characters and tones
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 08, 2008, 05:03:47 PM
Glad you have no clue about German. =)
Then you'd know a harder language...
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: doomstar on March 08, 2008, 05:59:29 PM
and you have no clue about chinese/japanese >.>
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 08, 2008, 06:05:03 PM
Japanese grammar is not that hard.
Words are (ok, you need to learn them) pretty easy.

It's the damn ton of symbols that comes along with it -_-
Along with two 50+ symbol alphabets that represent the same chars (Hiragana and Katakana)

Chinese is difficult because of the speech, too.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on March 18, 2008, 08:47:33 PM
So...is this supposed to left the way it is?

"Ahh, sadly I have nothing today in the category Recipes.... okay, maybe tomorrow is a better day ^^", says the strange dealer.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 18, 2008, 10:58:35 PM
Shoot the prisoner...  :oops:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on March 19, 2008, 01:21:25 AM
It is the same thing as earlier.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on March 22, 2008, 01:34:09 PM
Quote
Ichiraku's Ramen
You and Lee spend some time talking about the recent dwarf tossing competition. Not wanting to linger around another man for too long, so no one "wonders", you decide you should find something else to do.

sounds lotgd'ish to me.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on March 22, 2008, 02:50:01 PM
Change it to, um, Shuriken throwing?
Or maybe "the last Chunin exams"?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 23, 2008, 11:46:53 AM
that bugger sentence keeps coming back :(
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on March 29, 2008, 06:07:34 PM
I noticed that all the 'idle chitchat' you have with your ....KG master (I guess you could call them that) has a few problems. Here's an example.

Right now it says: Sasuke thinks a bit and then says: "No, your underwear has no style at all.".

Shouldn't it say: Sasuke thinks a bit and then says, "No, your underwear has no style at all."
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 30, 2008, 12:40:49 AM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on March 31, 2008, 12:23:03 PM
When you lose to your KG master (trying to gain attack), the same problem as above occurs.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 31, 2008, 05:04:53 PM
ok
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: caquricon on March 31, 2008, 06:37:22 PM
In the secret cave after choosing a KG to reset to it says:
There is not turning back! No "undo" to this! Only hit "Yes" if you are absolutely sure!

Should be no
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 01, 2008, 10:27:19 AM
my wrong.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Baluski on April 01, 2008, 08:00:59 PM
my wrong.

Bad.

Why? That's just how the saying is here... <.<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 01, 2008, 10:12:16 PM
hm, where did I fetch that phrase.
I was sure it was authentic.

my bad then.

<--n00bi
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KingCyrus on April 03, 2008, 12:51:12 AM
http://www.guilford.edu/about_guilford/services_and_administration/college_relations/style.html

"Commas are always placed inside quotation marks."

Judy said, "Hey there," before she fled like a speeding bullet.


Wow. O.o

You learn things every day, heh.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 07, 2008, 01:35:58 AM
The event where that you get every so often while traveling and where you pray says
"Dragons wait for no man."

Orochimaru waits for no shinobi?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on April 07, 2008, 10:55:27 AM
"Player Kills: xx(xx won|xx lost)"

shouldn't it be "Player Fights"? i never heard "i lost a kill" or something.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 07, 2008, 12:29:13 PM
That does make a lot more senese...


Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Makoto on April 08, 2008, 12:18:00 AM
"Tsubaki no Mai - You create a sword with the humerus if your arm."

'if' -->> 'of'.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on April 09, 2008, 12:03:02 AM
%s's Sympathy Shop
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 09, 2008, 02:09:50 AM
It doesn't show up like that for me O_o

It shows up as "Kitty's Sympathy Shop."


Edit: Wait, nevermind.

Chaoskin is right, in the Sympathy Shop it shows up as "%s's Sympathy Shop."

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 09, 2008, 03:02:49 AM
When you go to face Kabuto (description of him before you enter the cave), in the left hand corner of the screen it says "Earth Country: The City of Penguins."


City of Rock Nin?
Something like that?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 09, 2008, 10:34:22 AM
all done.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on April 09, 2008, 08:45:38 PM
Sympathy shop:

Result:

Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "AwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"

doesn't "text-wrap" - can it be shortened a bit?

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 09, 2008, 10:32:28 PM
My monitor is too wide -_-

give a suggestion =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 09, 2008, 10:41:04 PM
"Awwww"

^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on April 09, 2008, 11:24:34 PM
My monitor is too wide -_-

give a suggestion =)

I know what you are saying, some of my monitors are unaffected, others are.  But most people, I would think, browse with 1024 x 768 as their setting.

Because of this, I think it should be shortened.  Take out 10 "w" from the first set, 7 "W" from the second (capitalized) and 7 "w" from the last.

Just a guess.

Also, if you use FireFox, they have a plug-in called "web developer" which allows you to resize your viewing window to custom sizes to view how a page will look at a given display resolution, despite your need & utilization of a wider display for ease of programming.

https://addons.mozilla.org/en-US/firefox/addon/60
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on April 10, 2008, 02:24:16 AM
Secret Cave

Your mind wents blank and you close your eyes... sleep, thicker and blacker than any you experienced conquers you... is forcing himself into your head.

Goes?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: thecrazyanbu on April 12, 2008, 01:46:10 AM
The crowd gets into the action!
A few of them fall into the arena, only to drug off by an arena guard.


the drug should be dragged
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: sevilon on April 12, 2008, 03:10:46 AM
Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "That can't be you... you should be a illustrous figure in the world..."

should be 'an'
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 12, 2008, 03:23:34 AM
Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "That can't be you... you should be a illustrious figure in the world..."

should be 'an'

Also:
illustrous should be illustrious
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on April 13, 2008, 05:53:57 PM
Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "Cheer up... poor you... the world is mean, I feel like give her a beating!"

I think its susposed to be giving
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Satake on April 16, 2008, 02:33:17 AM
Quote
Someone Disguise As Noroimusha

Should be "disguised".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 20, 2008, 11:05:24 PM
Kimimaro says: "Good. Training will help you use your Shikotsumyaku powers more effectively. A strong bone can thrust right through an opponent, but it is unlikely you can do that. Yet working on your Shikotsumyaku powers will make your bones stronger. Are your ready to train?"

That should be a comma
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Chaoskin on April 22, 2008, 02:44:49 AM
Are you fixing text issues anymore?

Kitty looks you deep in the eyes, and says with a look full of sorrow and care, "That can't be you... you should be a illustrous figure in the world..."

Its still wrong
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on April 22, 2008, 02:51:20 AM
And illustrious is wrong too.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ReiseiKosame on May 17, 2008, 03:57:42 PM
...The Bride Of The VampireLord Baluski anishes somehow, turning into dust and, like the morning mist, dissipating into the woods.... You have not seen the last of her, you are sure of that... but for now, you live...

It should be vanishes. :3
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on May 19, 2008, 03:17:07 AM
In the Help Me, I'm Lost! section

Legend of Naruto started out small, but with time it has collected many new things to explore.

To a newcomer, it can be a little bit daunting.

To help new players, the Central staff created Eibwen, the imp. He's the little blue guy who told you to buy weapons when you first joined, and helped you choose a race. But what happens next, where should you go, and what are all the doors, alleys, and shops for?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 22, 2008, 05:50:21 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on May 23, 2008, 12:47:51 PM
Kimimaro says: "Good. Training will help you use your Shikotsumyaku powers more effectively. A strong bone can thrust right through an opponent, but it is unlikely you can do that. Yet working on your Shikotsumyaku powers will make your bones stronger. Are your ready to train?" 

That should be a comma.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on May 25, 2008, 10:23:07 AM
done
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ReiseiKosame on June 07, 2008, 06:29:50 PM
The handsome Jounin continues to walk with you through the city. "A long time ago, we have been paid a visit by Orochimaru. With him he brought his right hand, Kabuto. He searched in a nearby cave and found a radioactive crystal. The crystal proofed to be very powerful. This crystal was taken by Orochimaru, and it gave Kabuto supernatural powers. It is pertinent that someone destroys him soon... So, will you help us, and eradicate our problem?" One small girl walks over to you, and places a necklace around your neck.

Shouldn't it be proved? :3
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihamaru on June 11, 2008, 07:34:59 PM
The new Kiba skin says "Legend of Naruto".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on July 05, 2008, 03:31:52 AM
I used Nijuu Kokoni Arazu no Jutsu and it said the following upon activation:


You disappear into the surroundings and creates an illusion around the area.
That should be 'create.'


Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 11, 2008, 07:02:56 AM
done
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on October 06, 2008, 09:58:25 PM
Malignant Sasori laughs and says to Pǿisǿnǿus KBoogi,"I recommend you go back to the academy"

There is no period or exclamation mark at the end in the second sentence.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinoAburame on November 01, 2008, 04:10:52 PM
You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

The Wedgie Man walks up to you, he seems to be afraid of you. "Hey, made you'd like to share some... things... I have obtained in my travels?"

Wedgie Man shows you his goods, and askes if you would like to do some dealing with him. So after much agruement you finally walk away, though something doesn't quite feel right.

For some reason you you realise you have 800 less gold then when you first saw the Wedgie Man.


Askes should be asks, and realise should be realize.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on November 14, 2008, 03:33:51 PM
Cane has earned the title Chuunin for having slain Orochimaru 5 mal!

Didn't it used to be times? Did someone mess with the translation? D=
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 14, 2008, 04:03:18 PM
@Shino
fixed, however realise is also possible. (british english)

@gyu
translation thingy, it's German, and he had German as language.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on November 18, 2008, 11:11:27 PM
If we're doing changes with the "realises" to "realizes"...then there are A LOT more to be made (or as far as I've seen). I think it should just be left in British English.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on November 29, 2008, 12:44:25 AM
Something Special!
You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

Wedgie Man backs away from you slowly and you think you must have frightened him somehow. Just then he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You run around screaming, and frantically try to fling them off, in the process you loss one item.

You lose one ... <- doesn't say what I lost.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gi on January 13, 2009, 07:13:10 AM
http://wiki.shinobilegends.com/index.php/Ninja_Central



Ninja Central
From ShinobiWiki

Original Ninja Central

Ninja Central is a general place that does not take part in the anime/manga.
Konoha Gakure in SL

Ninja Central is the capital city of SL. It is a place where no races reside, but holds many important buildings and places such as the Hall of Fame. Konoha is usually full of talkative high rankers, talking about well...nothing. Ninja Central is a fun and important place that is a must-visit for most characters.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Raifudo Oppa on February 14, 2009, 08:41:54 PM
valentines event spelling:
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Something Special!
You are approached by a figure cloaked in red - you can't even see the face under a very long hood.

As you grow suspicios, you hear a voice like golden honey flowing down a waterfall of milk:

"Will you be my valentine?"

Puzzled, you realize he/she/it wants an answer.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Suspicious?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 14, 2009, 11:14:34 PM
my bad.  not enough sleep =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on February 19, 2009, 01:37:04 AM
http://wiki.shinobilegends.com/index.php/Ninja_Central



Ninja Central
From ShinobiWiki

Original Ninja Central

Ninja Central is a general place that does not take part in the anime/manga.
Konoha Gakure in SL


Ninja Central is the capital city of SL. It is a place where no races reside, but holds many important buildings and places such as the Hall of Fame. Konoha is usually full of talkative high rankers, talking about well...nothing. Ninja Central is a fun and important place that is a must-visit for most characters.

Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Doshi on March 22, 2009, 03:21:30 AM
As an Mist ninja, you are keenly aware of your surroundings at all times; very little ever catches you by surprise and have lightning reflexes.


An should be changed to a.

Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

This problem occurs in all Races, as far as I know..

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You stand on the forest floor. Konohagakure rises about you, appearing to be one with the forest. Ancient frail-looking buildings appear to grow from the forest floor, the tree limbs, and on the very treetops. The faces of the Hokages are high above these homes of the leaf nin. Bright motes of fire swirl around you as you move about.

I might be wrong, but I believe that about should be changed to above.

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You stand on the hidden entrance of this village. Otogakure rises about you, appearing to be one with the surrounding. You sneak in silently... as all visitors do so in this forbidden Sound village..

Same issue as before(If I was right): ...about should be changed to above.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on March 22, 2009, 12:41:18 PM
Quote
Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

Yes, you are wrong. It's a single sentance, so "you" should not be repeated twice.

Quote
I might be wrong, but I believe that about should be changed to above.

Above: All around or on all sides. Above would mean that the city rises over your head...

Same thing about Otogakure.

You are correct about one thing thou, the "an <race> ninja".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on March 22, 2009, 08:52:01 PM
Quote
Also; there should be a you in between and & have(Correct me if I am wrong..)

Yes, you are wrong. It's a single sentance, so "you" should not be repeated twice.

In the sentence, "Little" acts as the noun, so "you," as a direct object within the predicate, needs to be repeated.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Gyu~ru~ru on March 23, 2009, 03:24:48 AM
We are learning English =D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ite on April 20, 2009, 01:53:42 AM
This is an overview of the Gardens(example):

Looking around the Gardens you see... Academy Student Example,Hunter Nin Example,Genin Example,Chuunin Example

This text issue always occurs in the gardens (the section in which it shows who else is there).

The Issue: between each comma and a name, there should be a space.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on May 06, 2009, 03:14:52 PM
You gain a level in Hyouton Ninjutsu. All in all, you have 11 skillpoints with this specialty and 12 all in all!

--------------------------------------------------------------

The above text is after challenging (and beating, of course) your master.

The "all in all" used twice seems a bit redundant to me.  Also, would changing "skillpoints" to " chakra points " be appropriate?

Perhaps something like this:

You gain a level in %s.  You now have a total of %s chakra points with this specialty and %s chakra points in all.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ite on May 10, 2009, 06:05:04 PM
~ ~ ~ Fight ~ ~ ~


You have encountered Orochimaru which lunges at you with Sword of Kusanagi!

Orochimaru (Level 17)
   Health:   (553/869)
 
Hontō 土 Kaito:
   Health:   (234/300)
 
You feel great and healthy!
Orochimaru suffers 44 damage from the sharp wings!
Orochimaru suffers 65 damage from the sharp wings!
Orochimaru suffers 73 damage from the sharp wings!
Orochimaru suffers 74 damage from the sharp wings!
Orochimaru suffers 74 damage from the sharp wings!
You are engulfed in Orochimaru's snakes and take 65 damage.
Hyouton - Souryuu Boufuusetsu!
You releases two dragons of black snow that merge into a massive tornado at Orochimaru.
Orochimaru suffers 97 damage from the freezing tornado!
Orochimaru suffers 122 damage from the freezing tornado!
Orochimaru suffers 118 damage from the freezing tornado!
End of Round:
Orochimaru (Level 17)
   Health:   (-114/869) DEFEATED

 
Hontō 土 Kaito:
   Health:   (182/300)
 
With a mighty final blow, Orochimaru lets out a tremendous bellow and falls at your feet, dead at last.

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Release

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ryo on June 09, 2009, 03:20:56 AM
[Regarding the forest ANBU event..I thought I copied the whole thing. >_> But anyway...]

Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninjas is going to treat you.

-----------------------------------

I believe it should be...

Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninjas are going to treat you.
Or..
Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninja is going to treat you.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on June 09, 2009, 05:06:10 AM
[Regarding the forest ANBU event..I thought I copied the whole thing. >_> But anyway...]

Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninjas is going to treat you.

-----------------------------------

I believe it should be...

Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninjas are going to treat you.
Or..
Oh, you're wounded. Our medical ninja is going to treat you.
So the correction is:

Our medical ninja is going to treat you.

or

Our medical ninja are going to treat you.

or

Our medical ninjas are going to treat you.


Anyone will work.^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Nagi on June 12, 2009, 06:04:40 PM
Academy Student Ayami has been bruised in the forest by Tayuya.
Tayuya was overheard saying, "her Finely Crafted Kama was no match for my Flute!"

The 'h' in 'her' needs to be capitalized.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on September 06, 2009, 07:55:05 PM
Without another word, she takes your head and presses herself against you, so much you nearly stumble.

The world begins to spin in bitter sweetness brought by her cold hot lips... you see only whit flakes dancing in front of you eyes... whatever good or evil you've done vanishes from your conscience, as you wake up several hours later on an empty clearing, you feel

----

cold hot -> cold, hot (add a comma?)
whit -> white
you -> your
on -> in?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on September 10, 2009, 01:48:57 PM
Something cold and hot? I'm pretty sure that's not really possible.. :p
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on September 10, 2009, 06:38:07 PM
Depends on how you define cold and hot.

Cold could be heat wise, but hot could be 'sexiness'. Vice versa.

Besides, then what does cold hot mean? :d
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Demon Bandit Taumaster on September 13, 2009, 12:23:16 AM
So cold that they burn, maybe? I don't know.<<
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on September 16, 2009, 09:06:48 PM
As you enter, you can see sealing symbols written in an ancient languages all over the place. This must be what hides this cave, but how were you now able to find it?

Your mind wents blank and you close your eyes... sleep, thicker and blacker than any you experienced conquers you... is forcing himself into your head.

-

an ancient language
or get rid of "an"

wents -> goes
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: sevilon on February 25, 2010, 06:22:51 PM
Behind you stands a large shinobi... larger than any shinobi you've ever seen.
" Well... you have some guts doing something like that... a lesson is not enough for you... you need some real punishment!"

Faster than you can look... you are entangled... and see the elf checking your equipment!

should be shinobi i think
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on March 11, 2010, 10:36:35 AM
Sorry for the late answers:


"cold hot lips" is an Anti-Thesis... hot meant in the sexual way, cold in the more physical way. I like to play with words =)

Rest should be fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Mihazi on June 03, 2010, 09:21:09 PM
You look ahead to see a huge Staircase that seems to a strange man wearing a hooded cloak, and a necklace of keys around his neck.

----

Why is the "s" in staircase capitalized?

seems -> leads
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on June 04, 2010, 09:22:02 AM
Fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on August 04, 2010, 08:07:02 PM
Also on the Keymaster event:

"Could you help me out of bed dear child?." He asks.

Double punctuation/fragment. I think switching the period for a comma would look awkward, but it'd fix it.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinobiIceSlayer on August 18, 2010, 02:07:36 PM
Baa-san's Curry, colour page/

She continues, "To do colorsh, here'sh what you need to do. Firsht, you ushe a ` mark (found right above the tab key) followed by 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, !, @, #, $, %, ^, &, ), q or Q. They are not written into shtone, you know, and may change at any time later on...."

Where the red ` is, it came up with characters and symbols.
Appears to be some sort of error more than a 'Text Issue' but here seemed the right place to post it.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinobiIceSlayer on August 21, 2010, 01:08:18 AM
Reminder PM when you join a clan.

a:4:{i:0;s:437:"Did you remember to read the description of the clan of your choice before applying? Note that some clans may have requirements that you have to fulfill before you can become a member. If you are not accepted into the clan of your choice anytime soon, it may be because you have not fulfilled these requirements. For your convenience, the description of the clan you are applying to is reproduced below.

%s <%s>

%s";i:1;s:19:"Shimagakure no Sato";i:2;s:3:"島";i:3;s:757:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on August 21, 2010, 03:33:32 AM
Aha, I saw that earlier when I applied an hour before you. >>;;

And I'm not seeing the Baa-san's one. >_>

Lady of the Lake:

Then, she fixes her gaze intently upon you and remarks,
"I've seen worst faces in my life, but those were all goblins. Stare no longer upon my waters, you horrid thing.".
She vanishes into the depths of the water and a swarm of biting faeries rush out of the trees to chase you away!

=> worse
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on October 18, 2010, 08:00:15 PM
Quote
You travel through the forest, when you hear something behind you, all of a sudden you find you are surrounded by three Shinobi, but they look different to any you have seen before in the way they dress and carry swords on their backs. You see in front of you two dark skinned Shinobi, a male and female, with a fair skinned female behind you.
The darker female runs at you shouting, "Tell us everything you know about Uchiha Sasuke!"
As she appoarches you the Male tries to stop her. "Wait a mintue Karui! You can't just charge up to them! You might make them angry, they could kill us, or maybe we could start a war with their village!"
The two start to argue when the fair female silences them, them askes you, "Do you have any knowledge of Uchiha Sasuke? We're are here on a mission from the Raikage to gather infoformation on said subject."
You notice their forehead protectors have what appear to be clouds on them, and wonder, could these be Shinobi from mysterous land of Kumogakure?

appoarches => approaches

mintue => minute

infofomation => information

them askes => they ask

mysterous => mysterious
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on October 24, 2010, 03:31:28 AM
Just saw in someone's bio:

"Born as Yamoto of the Forest" for Mokuton KG.

Should be Yamato
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 25, 2010, 09:59:22 AM
Fixed in Team Samui.

And about the "born as" -> I might think he put that in himself, misleading others.
I can't find "Yamoto" anywhere as text.

Name the player so I can check =)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on October 26, 2010, 01:13:59 AM
RaifudoMakashi:

Born as Gai of the Lotus
Born as Yamoto of the Forest
Born as Grand Master of the Uchiha Ichizoku
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Jinsei on October 26, 2010, 05:25:07 AM
In newday.php (on new days)

"You strap your Fists to your back and head out for some adventure."
(Obvious grammar issues)

Possibly:

"You prepare your Fists for the day and head out for some adventure."
(This text can work with any weapon)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: hiro on October 27, 2010, 03:07:44 AM
Personally, I always loved the strapping fists line. >>;;
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on October 27, 2010, 01:26:32 PM
@Hiro

fixed, darn color codes prevented me to search proporly :P

@fists

yes *cough*
I liked  that "bug" too, so I left it in. I can easily alter that, though it's somewhat nice.
I believe there was a picture made by a player with strapped-fists-on-your-back which I really liked.

2 years ago, or maybe 3. =)
Sheesh, we are getting old, 5 years o.O or is ist 6 already?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: darkshinobi on October 31, 2010, 02:41:46 AM
(http://i789.photobucket.com/albums/yy177/Darkshinobi000/SLError8.jpg)

I tried boxing the part that was errored, yet, to re-iterate:

Hyuugan just killed someone in the fair fields of "Nin Dwelling," aka a ninja dwelling.

I'm pretty sure that Ninja Dwellings don't have fair fields....>_>


This is a halloween text error.

I looked around, and I've found it in other bios, so it's not just Hyuugan's; his was just the first I noticed in.


Disclaimer: I know this is stupid, yet I do not own the name Hyuugan in any way, or any other name or object on that page, except the name Darkshinobi. I know it's stupid to add this, but I've seen people sued---and beaten---for less.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 03, 2010, 11:04:18 AM
Won't fix, it's something with the Voodoo stuff I had to do to make Halloween bloody as-is  :twisted:

Though thanks for the notice.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Shikki on November 13, 2010, 10:16:30 PM
Quote
Something Special!
You wander around the tree and find a big, bully like man. You stumble back gasping, it's the legendary Wedgie Man!

Wedgie Man back away from you slowly and you think you must have frightened somehow. Just then he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You around screaming, and frantically try to fling them off, in the process you loss one item.

You lose one ...

Probably:

Wedgie Man backs away from you slowly, and you think you must have frightened him somehow. Just then, he pulls on a chakra string and a bucket of bugs hidden in the tree falls all over you.

You run around screaming, frantically trying to fling them off, and in the process you lose one item.

You lose one item.



Or, get rid of the "You lose one item." since it's redundant.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinobiIceSlayer on November 13, 2010, 10:18:45 PM
I beleive for that case, the You lose one ... is meant to say what you lost.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ryo on November 17, 2010, 09:02:16 PM
Soo.. I was just checking my account info I discovered this:

You are Account Number:

It should be:

Your Account Number:

:3

Edit: Actually.. now I can see it either way.  :shock:
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on November 19, 2010, 11:25:04 AM
Fixed.

@Ryo --> Location pls :) the wedgie man is pretty easy to find, but I have no idea where you are looking currently.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Camel on February 04, 2011, 12:18:22 AM
Errrr...I ran into this nasty error while promoting a new applicant in a clan I am in.

It currently has me stuck at that error page and I can't do nothing currently.

Quote
INSERT INTO commentary (postdate,section,author,comment) VALUES ('2011-02-04 00:14:17','clanlog-1446',7703,"/me`3 changed rank of `%Minato Namikaze`3 to `^`~"`4N`$e`qik`Qi`~"`3 (`^4`3).")
You have an error in your SQL syntax; check the manual that corresponds to your MySQL server version for the right syntax to use near '`4N`$e`qik`Qi`~"`3 (`^4`3).")' at line 1
Call Stack:
1: db_query("INSERT INTO commentary (p...") called from /var/www/html/naruto/lib/commentary.php on line 108
2: injectrawcomment("clanlog-1446", "7703", "/me`3 changed rank of `%M...") called from /var/www/html/naruto/modules/clanlog.php on line 84
3: clanlog_insert("1446", "/me`3 changed rank of `%M...", "7703") called from /var/www/html/naruto/modules/clanlog.php on line 52
4: clanlog_dohook("footer-clan", Array()) called from /var/www/html/naruto/lib/modules.php on line 517
5: modulehook("footer-clan", Array()) called from /var/www/html/naruto/lib/pageparts.php on line 111
6: page_footer() called from /var/www/html/naruto/clan.php on line 52
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on February 08, 2011, 10:30:33 AM
Fixed.

I never thought of people putting ' in their clan ranks.... well.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: cmage on May 15, 2011, 10:06:33 AM
Kumo-nin event if you lose the fight

Quote
You fall to the ground, to weak to keep fighting, waiting for the minute you will pushed off this life to the next by the hands of these strangers.
"Samui, would it not be wiser to leave him alive? I mean we don't wanna start a war just yet do we."
"You have a point Osoi, the Raikage's orders are strictly to find the Uchiha kid then..." You pass out before you hear anymore.

You wake up not long after, only to find yourself alone, and with little strength, you try and seek for help.

It should be Omoi.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Zenaku on June 21, 2011, 01:40:08 AM
For the final rank of Mokuton Kekkei Genkai, it should be Senju of the forest, not Senji ^_^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Timothy on June 22, 2011, 11:34:07 PM
I agree, I petitioned this several times to Neji, but don't remember getting any kind of response or a confirmation that 'Senji' was the intended title. I've heard other people reporting it and supposedly getting it fixed, however I still see 'Senji of the Forest'.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinobiIceSlayer on June 23, 2011, 12:38:18 AM
Text issues aren't the most important thing to fix remember. ^^
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: ShinobiIceSlayer on September 16, 2011, 09:08:25 AM
Rinnegan, Preta path speciality.

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-餓鬼道, Gakidō (Preta Path)-
• Chakura Kyūin Jutsu) (5)

Extra Bracket.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ryumaru on September 17, 2011, 06:07:29 PM
(Deva Path)-
• Bansho Ten'in (3)
• Shinra Tensei(Attack) (3)
• Shinra Tensei(Defense) (4)
• Shinra Tensei(Grand) (13)
• Chibaku Tensei (15)

-Kekkei Genkai Uchiha-
Deactivate Sharingan
• Sharingan (3 Tomoe) (1)
49; Sofūshasen no Tachi (4)



Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 19, 2011, 05:36:17 PM
Can't see where sharingan breaks... o.O

can you make a screenshot?

Rest fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ryumaru on September 20, 2011, 04:30:44 PM
(http://i577.photobucket.com/albums/ss216/boomstick_bucket/screen.png)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Jinzo on September 26, 2011, 07:16:30 PM
Regarding a certain Seal Removal event, the word "delcare" is spelt "decleard".
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Raifudo Oppa on November 01, 2011, 10:10:00 PM
"Asuma Path open it's head, revealing a cannon which starts charging Chakra to fire at Kisame."

Asura* opens* its*
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on January 18, 2013, 09:25:39 AM
 Ōshō-Kiba has been slain while attacking Kenpachi Zaraki in the fields of Konohagakure.
"You know, Ōshō-Kiba really had it coming to him after all those things I said about his mom," commented Kenpachi Zaraki.

this phrasing has always bothered me. I should think this would make more sense.

 Ōshō-Kiba has been slain while attacking Kenpachi Zaraki in the fields of Konohagakure.
"You know, Ōshō-Kiba really had it coming to him after all those things he said about my mom." commented Kenpachi Zaraki.

Typically you go ahead and punctuate the quote inside the quotation marks like its own sentence; in this case. There are tons of rules and this instance would be as such.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Nathan on January 19, 2013, 06:53:26 PM
Myōbokuzan


You disappear in a puff of smoke, being reverse summoned to the secret Toad Mountain. You see your follow Toads around.
The Elder Toad Fukasaku is here. What do you want to talk to him about?

Your clone sits under the Toad Oil Fountain, Gathering Natural Chakra.

Should be fellow. Also, there are more I've seen but this is the only one I can remember.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: atomkai on March 27, 2013, 12:21:32 AM
Text (appears in bio page newsfeed, maybe other places as well):

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was killed and eaten as for challenging Mr. Black, companion of  Lady Erwin.


Suggested alternative:

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was killed and eaten for challenging Mr. Black, companion of  Lady Erwin.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on July 21, 2014, 02:53:02 PM
Misspelled Armor Item.

A White Shinobi Shozoko (9), available in Sunagakure for 74 DK warrior.

Should be Shinobi Shōzoku
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on September 23, 2014, 04:52:48 PM
fixed.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on November 17, 2014, 05:04:27 AM
Old man event...Something Special...generated in Jiseigakure..

Surprise is spelled wrong. So is apparent.

Feeling really generous, you hand the old man a bulging sack containing all of your gold! The old beggar's eyes go wide with suprise as he eyes the large amount of gold in his hands.

"Why, I..." he stutters, tears forming in his eyes. "I don't know what to say! In all my life, no one's ever been so kind! Why I...I..."

He suddenly drops the gold to the ground and clutches at his chest in pain. With one last gasp he falls over sideways, dead from an apparant heart attack.

Feeling really nervous, you decide it would be best to depart before someone sees you.

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Bocchiere on November 17, 2014, 09:17:03 AM
Well, that was depressing.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Eric on November 17, 2014, 02:04:12 PM
Well, that was depressing.

Yeah. Character should have taken their gold back. He won't need it where he's going. ;)

I don't think I've ever gotten that event now that I think about it.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Becquerel on April 11, 2015, 06:29:37 AM
Bumping an old topic, but this is why.

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You have encountered Poisonous Moth which lunges at you with Poisonous Powder!

Poisonous Moth's Hitpoints (Level 2): 30
Supernova Becquerel: 21
Kyuubi rages into battle.
Kyuubi swings his claws and hits Poisonous Moth for 9 points of damage.
You hit Poisonous Moth for 2 points of damage!
Poisonous Moth tries to hit you but you RIPOSTE for 7 points of damage!
Poisonous Moth bare its piercing fangs..."!

If the moth is using poison powder, why is it bearing it's fangs? I don't know if the poison module is just a blanket thing that makes them all say that...But maybe it can change to "spreads its poisonous powder." instead.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on April 15, 2015, 03:00:00 PM
Yes... the reason is a bit ... awkward.

"You have encountered {ENEMYNAME} which lungs at you with {WEAPON}!"

That's the base of the sentence, the two variables get filled in. So I can't (easily) change it for the one enemy.

The ".... beare its piercing fangs" is a default sentence for that enemy to start his/her/its round and attack sequence. Can be done per enemy.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Teostra on April 23, 2015, 04:35:16 AM
Problem with the text when killing Orochimaru.

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The Orochimaru pauses, breathing heavily before continuing, "I will tell you a secret. Behind me now are my successors. They will hatch, and the young will battle each other. Only one will survive, but he will be the strongest. He will quickly grow, and be as powerful as me and inherit my mind." Breath comes shorter and shallower for the Orochimaru.

Problem one. "The Orochimaru pauses..." and "shallower for the Orochimaru."
Could you get rid of those 'the's? They're kind of pointless. And about the hatching thing...I know that it was a green dragon we were originally killing, but could you change the text to something like..

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Orochimaru pauses, breathing heavily before continuing, "I will tell you a secret. Behind me now are my successors. The experiments will complete, and they  will battle each other. Only one will survive, but he will be the strongest. I will transfer my mind to his body, and be more powerful than before." Breath comes shorter and shallower for Orochimaru.

Just an idea. If you could think of something better to change it to, then do that. I figured that would be okay considering Oro swapped bodies every so often.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on June 22, 2015, 06:40:31 PM
Hakke Hyakunijyūhasshō! - You deal execute a lethal maneuver of hits!

Deal and execute are redundant of each other.

Taken from forest fighting and the use of Hyuuga Technique.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on July 09, 2015, 09:40:00 PM
So today I am forest fighting on Neala in the Iwagakure forest.

I need healing and go to Sakura for the bargain potions. You can see by this image that the potion I require for a complete healing is priced at 544 gp, a good 27 gp cheaper than the flying med nin healing priced at 571 gp.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj433/KayentaMoenkopi/complete%20heal%20potion_zpswxrdsjgj.jpg (http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj433/KayentaMoenkopi/complete%20heal%20potion_zpswxrdsjgj.jpg)

I go with Sakura's price and drink the potion. However,  after I receive my complete healing, the med nin price of a complete healing at 577 is still a clickable option. And I have, in the past, gone ahead and clicked that even though I was already completely healed and had the gp deducted from my purse. Which is shown here in the next photo, I am completely healed but can still pay for the med nin. That really should not be possible.

http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj433/KayentaMoenkopi/Complete%20heal%20after%20potion_zps6qgfbv3k.jpg (http://i554.photobucket.com/albums/jj433/KayentaMoenkopi/Complete%20heal%20after%20potion_zps6qgfbv3k.jpg)

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Neji on July 16, 2015, 09:11:11 PM
fixed
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on July 17, 2015, 04:51:11 AM
Thank you Neji. However a new error has appeared associated with the quick healing.

I can heal in the forest, and it takes my gold as usual. But the text reads:

"Sorry, you are already healed... my services are not needed. "

Could the fix have created a bug? or is something a miss with your Happy Birthday module? I did not notice if this was going on yesterday or not.

Sorry.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ѕhadow on August 01, 2015, 10:16:45 PM

Kihou's Hitpoints (Level 10): 99
Kaguya ° ° Shadow: 101
Kaiten! - You deal some damage to all enemies!
You hit Kihou for 27 damage with your Kaiten!
You hit Kihou for 30 damage with your Kaiten!
You hit Kihou for 25 damage with your Kaiten!
You hit Kihou for 21 damage with your Kaiten!
You receive 117 experience!
End of Round:
Kihou's Hitpoints (Level 10): DEFEATED
Kaguya ° ° Shadow: 101
Searching the lifeless body of Kihou you find a Mystical Knives.
Why don't he shoot something more explosive?
You have defeated Kihou!
You receive 227 gold!

Should be: doesn't

Or I'm just too picky with word choice.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on August 14, 2015, 07:12:21 PM
Emerald Flame TakahashiMariko posted a comment in Sunagakure 1 hour 54 minutes 2 seconds ago.
Supernova Becquerel posted a comment in Otogakure 2 hours 17 minutes 26 seconds ago.
黒 猫 Meyumi posted a comment in Kirigakure 2 hours 38 minutes 43 seconds ago.
神の紙 Styx posted a comment in Kumogakure 13 hours 20 minutes 58 seconds ago.
Jichou Raihana posted a comment in Iwagakure 21 hours 53 minutes 44 seconds ago.
Kyuubi Confidence posted a comment in Konohagakure 1 day 4 hours 29 minutes 31 seconds ago.
Wandering Asadi posted a comment in Jiseigakure 2 days 12 hours 3 minutes 42 seconds ago.
Academy Student Robin posted a comment in Hidden Otogakure 4 days 9 hours 51 minutes 10 seconds ago.

Please note the entry of Two Otogakure villages. Do we have two actual boards for Oto now? Regular and hidden?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Becquerel on August 14, 2015, 09:09:19 PM
Yeah, there's two Otos now lol Kind of confusing, I know.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on August 14, 2015, 09:17:00 PM
too funny. So which one are you Otokage of?
Is one above ground and the other the city beneath the old?
that wold be kind of cool...Hidden Oto underground.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Becquerel on August 14, 2015, 09:27:21 PM
Just the normal one. I don't think we have come to a complete conclusion on what will be done with the Hidden One. Especially considering it's supposed to have a 50 kill unlock amount. I've heard (just from rumors and grapevines) that it may one day be turned into another village. But I'm not sure what we're doing with it just yet lol It's just an OOC zone right now.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on September 03, 2015, 09:11:28 PM
SO I finally moved one of my characters back to Oto.
I know...but I get around to these book keeping issues after rp.

anyway, I am listed as Hokage rank, not Otokage rank. Any chance on getting the text fixed back with Oto specs? the character is high enough to get the village specific kage title, as she was a Raikage before she left Kumo.

And speaking of the Kumo title...those colors...might we not have something a little less pink and green there? Maybe in the yellow spectrum for lighting?

 :D
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Asadi on November 20, 2015, 05:33:29 AM
You head over to the bushes that Sakura is picking from.

You bend down to help, when Sakura thinks you try and look at her Inappropriately, making her start screaming her head off. You quickly leave before she gets her hands on you.

Change to:

You bend down to help, but Sakura thinks you try to look at her inappropriately, which makes her start to scream her head off.
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on December 25, 2015, 04:35:19 PM
Full Automated Chrismas Greetings

Christmas
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Becquerel on December 31, 2015, 12:30:06 PM
Found these two.
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Lethal Six Paths Sasuke's Hitpoints (Level 16):
That's not enough to kill you, is it?

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Dangerous Night Gai's Hitpoints (Level 16):
Looks like he is all burnout. (needs to be burnt out)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: KayentaMoenkopi on February 14, 2016, 01:44:04 PM
Your request has been processed on and is now done. If not, please petition again. (This is an automatic message).


The word 'on' should be omitted to instead read:

Your request has been processed and is now done. If not, please petition again. (This is an automatic message).

Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ѕhadow on September 26, 2016, 10:37:40 AM
This needs to be edited. Not at all grammatically correct. Might as well delete it since it's not in use?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ace on September 30, 2016, 04:15:50 AM
Thanks!
I simply "hid" the board. ;)
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Ѕhadow on December 27, 2016, 01:11:27 PM
(http://i65.tinypic.com/5ldnb5.jpg)

This is about the SST event.

Shouldn't it be:
You ask him about the special ink and whether he has some or not
and
Grow up to be a strong shinobi?
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Timothy on March 18, 2017, 08:55:04 AM
So is 'Senji' of the forest a typo or not? I can't find anyone confirming it or not o3o
Title: Re: Text Issues
Post by: Warren on March 18, 2017, 09:11:57 PM
I believe its a typo, since senju seems to be used for both plural and singular when talking of the clan.