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Bijuu Arena / Re: Student Versus Sensei; Round One.
« on: June 06, 2017, 10:28:09 PM »
I'm not even gonna read all that, I give up.

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Athos vs Jestar, Tank vs Magician!
« on: June 02, 2017, 01:51:31 AM »
Athos had been content with the results, given his state but...


*Will you get up?*

A voice rang out in Athos' head, as the Nine-Tails spoke to him, though he simply tried to sigh again,"Why? He should be dead, or at least unable to return to the battlefield."
There was a scoff from the Beast as the male replied to him, he shook his head from inside his cave, changing the position he had been resting in,*You are reckless, that is why you are like this. Over confidence has gotten you here.* He let out another long breath as the color started to leave his lips as his blood was slowly coming to a complete halt,"I'm in pain, Kurama. I'm not some Jashin-finatic... My lord is the Shinigami..." And as if by some divine intervention, he felt a cold presence begin to creep up and upon his form.

For a moment, as it got colder and the feeling of death began to close around him, Athos thought there was a chance that he was going to die before looking down at his chest. Even with the shroud of the Nine-Tails around his form, in pure black ink appeared the kanji for Death, as a new power began to flow into Athos.


|To leave yourself in such a vulnerable and weak state, what a mistake Athos.| The new power flowed into Athos and the shroud of Kurama turned from the rust colored slowly to a mixture of the red chakra of Kurama and a sickly purple color, with splotches of black throughout it. The Raikon slowly rose to his feet, causing the blood in his form to shift towards his stomach but slowly a thin layer of bone seemed to appear around his form, forming a mask that would cover his face as well. It was eerily similar to the face of the Shinigami, a tooth grin on the mask with Athos' golden bright eyes shining on a black background. |You were wrong to ever deny my power and for that you've been put in such a pathetic state.|


A type of fear had grasped Athos when the Shinigami gave him his power and, for a short time, taken control of his body. For sure he thought that it was the end of his life, even if he was going to live forever thanks to the Shinigami, he had no way to take back control unless the Lord of Death would give it back to him. So with that, he would speak back from behind the mask, as firmly as he usually had though there was obvious the hint of respect in his voice as he spoke to the lord, even if he had distaste for him,"So this is how I lose my body, due to my... Carelessness?"

|So it would seem.| Even as the Shinigami casually replied to his question, his voice boomed and echoed in Athos head, something that made him wince for the first several years he served the Shinigami. Athos' body moved over to the remaining parts of Jestar's body and would reach down, extending his right hand downwards and tearing off one of the man's legs. It was an easy feature with his inhuman strength, increased by both Kurama and the Shinigami's power. With that, he'd hold the leg in his left hand and move back over to where Athos had coughed up and lost a large amount of blood.

The mask's mouth opened, showing no signs of Athos' own mouth and instead just the creepy sharp teeth of the mouth and with a blow to the gut, blood would rush up from where it built up and joined the amount on the ground. With the blood on the ground, he'd then use his feet to easily draw a symbol of another God on the ground. While the Shinigami had the ways to gather his own Sacrifices, it was impossible for him to use them without direct contact with the target. However, there was on Technique the God of Death had inserted into Athos' arsenal when the Shinigami had forced Athos under the tutelage of Jashin and his studies for some time, while there had been no leader.

With the symbol of Jashin in his own blood complete in the grass, the Shinigami kept control of the redhead's form. |Your body is mine, and if the boy is not dead, I will instead take his soul.| The Shinigami was going to use the technique of Jashin to kill the boy and attempt to hijack it before it could get to the other lord, it didn't really matter if the Shinigami could do it but he had never had the chance to test it. Athos hatred for Bocchiere had stopped him from personally using the signature technique, but that meant little for the Shinigami, who only thrived on death.

So with the same sharp teeth, the Uzumaki would've taken a disgusting bite out of the flesh of Jestar Nara, chewed it into mush and then swallowed it. With Oken still active thanks to Kurama, there was no need to worry about the Shadows as the Shinigami preformed the ritual, the unseen skin of Athos turning a dark black color with white outlines, the obvious signs that someone was activating the technique. With that, both his hands raised upwards and sparked with fierce lightning as the Shinigami called forth the Hell Stab on both Techniques, each finger spread faintly to create a One Finger Nukite on each finger, leaving out the thumbs leaving a total of Eight.

With that, right at his waist line, where Jestar was intact, the Shinigami would drive the fingers up to the second knuckle on each of them before tearing them upwards in a violent motion, stopping as he'd past where the heart was located. It mattered little where Jestar was or what he was doing because the wounds that Athos would have inflicted on himself would appear on the Nara. The wounds would tear at all of his internal organs, hitting the important ones and shredding them, from his stomach and guts, to his lungs, to eventually his own heart. The blood would pour and spurt out of Athos and onto the ground but the wounds would be inflicted on the boy and take his life almost instantly, though it'd be painful until the very end.

With that, Jestar Nara's soul would leave this realm and ascend into the Heavens, Athos falling to his knees. This wouldn't be because he was weakened, in the state he was currently in, he was already essentially dead so even without other forms of immortality, the wounds he inflicted would not end his life. They would start to heal already from the overload of healing powers Athos currently had active, which currently totaled in four. The only action requiring chakra throughout all of that being the Hellstabs at the end, though it still mattered little seeing with the Shinigami's help he'd be fine regardless. The Shinigami had the man on his knees to see if the boy would die, assuming he would, and then to see if he could steal the soul before Jashin claimed it.

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Student Versus Sensei; Round One.
« on: June 02, 2017, 12:25:23 AM »
There were several parts of this that made very little sense, and it hadn't been the time jumping demons that had suddenly come out of no where to put Jay in a universe where the fight between the two giants had begun, instead the part that confused Athos was how Jay had managed to trick himself into thinking he could dodge Athos' punch. It wasn't because Athos was claiming to still trump over a full strength/speed Jay, though that would likely still be the case. No, what made no absolute sense was Jay's claim to suddenly gaining access to his restraints because Athos hadn't emoted his action, yet Athos hadn't emoted doing either of his Deadzones because, as Jay went through the trouble of jumping to a universe where Athos' moves had continued, and the Nara had made no comment about that. The first Deadzone, when Jay appeared, had been released as originally planned and then even the Second Deadzone, all of which had been done with Jay saying anything but the action that had been between those two, the second out of three actions, had been called out and confused with.

With that, Jay had used the one thing that stopped him from being killed by Athos, or he would have if what Jay had been trying to do made any sense. Like Athos was still skull crushed by a Jay who determined his path was right, the Jay that had thought he escaped Athos' grasp would be obliterated by his punch. Again, not because Jay was supremely outclassed in his 'awakened' state but because his logic, OOCly, failed to make sense. So while Jay saw a world where he had sidestepped a move that had an extended range and could carve away mountains, in reality the force of the blow met the back of Jay and the man's life was quickly brought to an end. All of the blood that had been stuck in Jay was stretched across the once white Canvas of the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, and with that Athos would've been decided the winner.

But then it happened, from somewhere in the endless chamber, a portal through time ripped open and in the process of this all, came forth a Yellow and Red Streak of lightning, Athos' eyes barely able to keep up as it all came into view.

How long had it been, how long had they been fighting? It was honestly too hard to say, but they had been fighting all over time. No place had been safe from their battle, as they once again exited the Speed Force and into a seemingly white oblivion, the man cloaked in red felt his feet almost lose traction behind him. If there were objects in this realm, anything that was moving, the man's eyes would see all of it as though it was happening in the slowest of motions, but there was nothing. What was this place? As they raced around, there was seemingly nothing in this white space... Except, what was that? It was clear that as they moved, there was towering figure that was more than hurt, with a splay of blood that stretched in front of him. What was up with that? It made no sen- But that was when a punch connected with his Jaw, smacking him out of his forward motion and sprawling him onto the ground.

As they left the Speed Force, there was a feeling of both anticipation and anger as they moved. This was it, it had to be, because both of them were starting to reach their ends. Even as a speedster, they had their limits and even as unreachable as they originally seemed, both of them were seeing their ends slowly coming up. This was just another universe throughout the Multi-verse that they would taint with their fight but already by entering, the man cloaked in yellow could tell there was something different about the place they had just entered... But they, for just a moment, he saw that The Flash had taken his eyes off of him for a moment but instead of worrying about what exactly his enemy had seen, he took the moment to connect a swift punch across his jaw,"You're a damned fool, Barry Allen. Keep taking your eyes of me and you-" Of course, that was when the man speaking had his eyes fall onto the odd figure of Athos. He wasn't intimidated but it was definitely once of the weirder sights that saw during their fight, then something hit his ribs, strong and hard.


Barry Allen refused to lose this fight, even as he came to a tumbling stop. His eyes found the infamous Reverse Flash, bearing the usual outfit that he did, and caught the moment that he was distracted by the same sight Barry had been. So that was when he moved as quickly as he could and tackled the man with his full force, bringing the two of them into a violent rumble and roll across the tiles,"Thawne, I'll end you! I won't, no, I can't let you win!"Perhaps it was desperation that flowed through his veins as his fists rained down on Eobard. He was angry, that was an understatement, but the feeling of anger had slowly started to fade. They rolled and tumbled before Thawne finally managed to get a leg between them and separate them, giving them both a second to finally get back on their feet.


Meanwhile, Athos who had just won a fight that his life had depended on, watched in amazement. Even with his eyes and enhancements, he was lucky to catch more than a few blurred afterimages as the two seemingly zoomed around. He saw the two streams of lighting that each person produced and the energy that flowed each time one of their punches connected. He felt the pressure starting to build up in the room around them as he watched them fly around in a battle of life and death. The feeling that was leaving them and building in this room, that was seemingly endless, was starting to build every second that seemed to pour out their power. He couldn't see it or even sense it, so it was clear that whatever it was that was giving them this power, and also filling the room, was not of this world. The pressure in the room caused Athos' ears to pop faintly before the crackling of lightning could be heard.

Small tears in what seemed to be reality started to form, showing Athos an amount of worlds he never thought possible. There was one where he saw Jay and himself getting much, much too friendly for two people who shared a bond almost equal to that of Father and Son, and another where Athos was sitting behind a desk. It wasn't a desk in a Kage office but some type of work block, where he adjusted glasses on his eyes and seemed to be typing away at, what Tobias had called, a computer. Endless possibilities began to form and blind the man, stunning and dazzling him.

After managing to get Barry off of him, the two of them had been at it again. The Speed Force flowed through them as they ran around the endless abyss, neither one able to find a way out. No matter how you looked at it, this room was completely sealed for the single building they could see. But neither one of them would let the other actually make it to the door, leading in them both being stuck here. As they connected blows, The Reverse Flash was planning his next escape into the Speed Force again. But the excess energy that was feeding off of two speedsters was starting to build in this room, which seemed to have a weird effect on time and space. Because of this, a lot of energy was being left behind as they moved and Thawne felt the tears in reality forming,"Do you feel that, Flash? Another world falling because of your greed!"


Of course Barry felt the way the Speed Force was seemingly starting to 'fill' this world, as well as the effects that it was having. But the man saw no other forms of life, just the extremely tall figure that seemed to be stupefied by their appearance. He may not be able to defeat Thawne by conventional means but if he could trap Thawne here, just long enough for whatever was happened to actually happen, then it would solve all of his issues,"This is your fault, and I'll make sure you burn in the hell you create Thawne!" Barry couldn't stop moving though because even a second and Thawne would escape and that was what he had to stop, no matter what. He couldn't simply allow the murderer of so many to escape again, but even if Thawne did leave, Barry would chase him until this was over.


It was actually the blood that Athos had turned Jay into that caused Thawne to think up a dastardly plan, the only one that would've made any sense, at least partially. With banter would he take Barry's attention as they closed in towards Athos, also hoping to give The Flash the impression that he was going to try and take the innocent bystander's life. With all of these distractions, he had hoped the man would follow,"Then I'll just make you watch me kill another innocent person!"

And Barry took the bait, pushing himself a bit further and faster as he tried to catch up to Thawne... Only catching wind of his dastardly plan as his feet stepped into the crimson that was left behind, causing the traction of his feet to fail for only half a second but that was the only wiggle room that the Reverse Flash needed.


And with that, Eobard Thawne would change his running path slightly and instead run past Athos, tearing open the Speed Force and entering it, leaving this realm to it's fate.


Barry Allen had only faltered for a small amount of time, not even a whole half second after his arch-enemy had left this realm, Barry had done the same and just as fast as they had come, they had come.


Athos was sure that he was going to die, seeing there was no way he was going to be able to keep up with the speed of these... These... Super.. Humans. With no way to actually counter this attack, or any idea what their powers even were, Athos was just going to die... But then he felt the pressure of something opening behind his back, but as that happened, he felt the pressure that had been increasing in the room come to a thunderous climax. The tears he saw before shattered and the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, a room that was meant to be separated from both Time and Space but had just been violated by both of them, would give way. The power that came from whatever had been fueling those two would cause the room to fall out of time.

Athos felt his body shift, then everything in the room, slowly as if it was starting to spiral in a sort of storm. He watched the lightning spark and flow, tearing up the white tiles of the room that had not even been chipped by either Athos nor Jay, as well as the only exit from the room. He was being absorbed upwards, it seemed, as though he was flying... Everything was white and this was it... He was dead.

.......

But then he was falling, falling downwards. Nothing was working except his eyes, not his chakra or any of his powers, but he fell towards the ground... At least he'd assume, because for awhile he would only see endless white, like he had before. But then he slowly saw things coming into view, first it would be the small visage of the dwelling that had let people enter the Hyperbolic Time Chamber, followed by two small specs that were... Him and Jay? What was happening? This didn't seem right but he watched as the fight slowly reached the same point where Athos had originally won, but in this realm Athos watched as Jay somehow managed to legally activate and release his restraints...

But as that happened, Athos fell into the battle. Originally, the man would've fallen in front of where Jay would've been obliterated but in this realm, Jay had been able to dodge and instead, for a single moment the Athos and Jay of this realm would see a second Athos... Before the force of this realm's Athos would punch forward and obliterate the Winning Athos and create a horrible blood splatter across the ground. With that, the original Athos had died and things pick up.

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What the hell had just happened? Right before Athos had activated his Deadzone, Jay had just barely managed to release his restraints and give him exactly what he needed to dodge the death blow. But in his place, Jay's that is, seemed to be Athos. And while the man would've loved to say that it was just an illusion but there was definitely blood there of the man, left behind... But that was no longer important because without even missing a beat, Athos would be back in the fight with Athos.

Now Jay had assumed that he had forced Athos to access his full power and that it should mean something but that made little sense, seeing as Saitama had no reason to show Genos his full power, besides simply letting his student see it. And showing his limits. Athos had been doing something like that, being honorable and deciding to let his student see some of the strength he never got to see, but to think his student would've tried to use such a detail against him was just silly. Though it mattered very little, seeing as even with both of their restraints now released, it was still clear who was in charge of this fight. Why was it obvious? Because despite what Jay had thought, he was still lacking both of his arms, especially his right seeing it had just been removed. It probably wasn't nearly as threatening as Jay wanted it to be, waving his stump of an arm around in a come hither motion, but it was still the same.

Seeing as Jay would only have his legs, this fight was about to become very one sided, but it also meant that the plan for fighting Jay was simple. Athos would've moved forward to close some distance between them, challenging Jay to dodge his attacks. Athos wasn't using his full speed or strength but he aimed to throw a set of 85% combos at Jay, but with Athos actually aware of Jay's speed, the Nara wouldn't be able to dodge them as easily as he had before. Of course, this didn't mean he'd suddenly hit Jay and the Nara have no chance but this definitely meant the man wouldn't hit any afterimages.

The first set of blows that would come would be that of the a simple combo, the old one, two, three. His right hand came first towards a blow for Jay's face, aiming to crash against the left side and blow his head away. There was no arguing that Jay had speed but also confirmed that this fight was to the death, especially by bringing Bocchiere's name into it, but he bit back that rage. He wasn't the first person to pull that card and many had been doing it for decades, his own first born son included. No, it stung coming from Jay maybe, but he was too into this fight to actually feel that. The second punch in the combo came from his right but his left came forward, like it was going to punch, before his right would've shot forward quickly for a jab. Now, the Jab wouldn't actually be enough to kill Jay but enough to shatter his nose, possibly cause a concussion and made Jay see stars. It would be followed up but a third, separate blow that would actually come from his left hand. This would've come from underneath, aiming to strike Jay clear in his chin, stunned or not, aiming to blow it upwards and cause a rain of crimson to come down, made of his head and coming from his neck. Something told Athos none of those would've killed him, but he wanted to test his student further, going at him with the full intent to kill him...


Of course, Athos had an actual plan, as well. At the end of the last one, he would've stepped forward strongly and slammed his foot down. He would've done was put about 85% of his strength into his foot and brought it down onto the ground roughly, with explosive force. As it's been stated before, though, the tiles in this room weren't able to be destroyed but it would also go to note that this wasn't because they absorbed force, they essentially just deflected it. This meant that all the force that Athos had put downwards would explode outwards inside, similar to how a Shinra Tensei worked but not in the same controlled way. The force that left Athos would only reach things four feet and below, though it still carried the force to rock and crush mountains as it did so. This, of course, meant that Jay would either have to jump over the force or take it full force, which would be enough force to bend both his knees back and break his legs, leaving him without a way to fight.

Of course, given that Jay was hopefully in combat with Athos, it would be likely that he was struck by the force and lost both of his legs. At the same time, if Jay was to managed to dodge, even with his speed, the force would strike him if he tried to move any other direction besides upwards.


[[One-Two]]
[[Three]]
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Village Square / Re: Using juts without a heart
« on: June 01, 2017, 11:30:42 PM »
If he still has a nervous system, he will still be able to move around for a time. As to whether he'll still be able to perform jutsu - his ability to do so will be severely diminished because as Shadow noted, the heart holds a large portion of the person's chakra. Depending on how the fight has gone thus far (I haven't been following), Athos may or may not have already used a significant portion of his chakra. If he has, then he'll be even worse off.

In the second Naruto Fanbook, Kishimoto stated that one thing that could kill Hidan was malnutrition. Well, using a little SCIENCE! we can see that without a heart, Athos will eventually lose the fight. Why? Cellular respiration.

Without a heart pumping blood through Athos' body, there's no way to transport oxygen to different parts of his body. The blood is just going to pool in his extremities. No blood circulation means no diffusion of new oxygen molecules across cell membranes throughout his body. No new oxygen molecules means no production of ATP (the "energy" source that the body uses for everything). No ATP means no movement, no speaking, no production of chakra, nothing.

In the case of malnutrition and starvation: The two things you need to  produce ATP (technically there's more things you need, but they're intermediate products in the entire cellular respiration process that are produced from oxygen and glucose) are glucose (the carbohydrate we get from foods) and oxygen. No glucose, you still can't produce ATP.

This is a grossly simplified explanation, but it serves its purpose. SCIENCE, BITCH!

To be fair, science can't really be applied to this situation :o Mainly due to the fact that Hidan was a severed head and still cursing up a storm. That should be impossible considering there's no lungs for air to go into and out of. And I don't remember exactly the damage done, but if he didn't have his larynx then it shouldn't be possible for him to make noise at all either. And the whole thing about blood could be thrown out the window too because in my personal experience, severed carotid arteries usually result in unresponsiveness in about 10-15 seconds. Because Hidan was still wide awake and angry the whole time when he should be unconscious, you can't really use blood as an argument. :P So in the end, it's a manga so it's all silly ninja magic.

Kishimoto said that malnutrition killed him. I provided a reasonable explanation as to why that is, given what we know about why we eat anyway.

But the same Kishimoto also still had him marked as alive come the time of the Fourth Shinobi War, with dialog from Kakuzu essentially confirming the Jashinist was still alive. So even if the science fits, the canon material still says otherwise. It's like going out of your way to argue how Goku deflecting bullets make no sense, or even Krillin since he is just a human. But the original content comes first before real life science o.o

Whichever way of Malnutrition killed Hidan, it isn't the type you talked about, obviously. Hell, Hidan when being buried even goes to say that even if Shikamaru destroyed his body entirely, so long as he still had a head he'd be fine. Not only does that rule out the need for any organs besides the brain, but it also shows that he didn't need to eat. Well, I mean obviously he'd need to eventually, but not right away o.o Hell, we know that by Boruto and all he's dead but as of the Fourth Shinobi War, he's still alive under there.

So that's from Asuma dying and Naruto learning the Rasengan*, to when Naruto is mastering the Nine Tails and goes to the war o.o I don't know how much time is between those two things, but I know it is a fucking lot xD We are talking about, the rest of the Akatsuki, all of the Itachi/Sasuke stuff, the Pain Attack on the village. Then the Five Kage Summit, and then so on and so forth o.o And not even a fourth of that much time will pass within a zone fight that lasts 20 posts, let along mine with Jestar that's only gone on for a few.

Learning the Rasenshuriken, not the Rasengan* Edit.

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Village Square / Re: Using juts without a heart
« on: June 01, 2017, 08:43:30 PM »
If he still has a nervous system, he will still be able to move around for a time. As to whether he'll still be able to perform jutsu - his ability to do so will be severely diminished because as Shadow noted, the heart holds a large portion of the person's chakra. Depending on how the fight has gone thus far (I haven't been following), Athos may or may not have already used a significant portion of his chakra. If he has, then he'll be even worse off.

In the second Naruto Fanbook, Kishimoto stated that one thing that could kill Hidan was malnutrition. Well, using a little SCIENCE! we can see that without a heart, Athos will eventually lose the fight. Why? Cellular respiration.

Without a heart pumping blood through Athos' body, there's no way to transport oxygen to different parts of his body. The blood is just going to pool in his extremities. No blood circulation means no diffusion of new oxygen molecules across cell membranes throughout his body. No new oxygen molecules means no production of ATP (the "energy" source that the body uses for everything). No ATP means no movement, no speaking, no production of chakra, nothing.

In the case of malnutrition and starvation: The two things you need to  produce ATP (technically there's more things you need, but they're intermediate products in the entire cellular respiration process that are produced from oxygen and glucose) are glucose (the carbohydrate we get from foods) and oxygen. No glucose, you still can't produce ATP.

This is a grossly simplified explanation, but it serves its purpose. SCIENCE, BITCH!

To be fair, science can't really be applied to this situation :o Mainly due to the fact that Hidan was a severed head and still cursing up a storm. That should be impossible considering there's no lungs for air to go into and out of. And I don't remember exactly the damage done, but if he didn't have his larynx then it shouldn't be possible for him to make noise at all either. And the whole thing about blood could be thrown out the window too because in my personal experience, severed carotid arteries usually result in unresponsiveness in about 10-15 seconds. Because Hidan was still wide awake and angry the whole time when he should be unconscious, you can't really use blood as an argument. :P So in the end, it's a manga so it's all silly ninja magic.
Ninja Magic! :D

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Village Square / Re: Using juts without a heart
« on: May 31, 2017, 02:13:08 AM »
Hidan was only a head and was marked still alive by, like, the start of the Shinobi war and stuff >> And he didn't die from his brain shutting down, or not breathing, or his heart not working. Because nothing was connected.

Even while still a head, he was alive until he died from starvation >>

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Student Versus Sensei; Round One.
« on: May 24, 2017, 05:04:56 PM »
Honestly, it was disheartening to see the level at which Jay didn't understand his own immortality, or the limits of it. This was where the two's forms of logic would start to take a split, but in two different and logical ways. Jay's logic had followed along the way the human body normally works and sure, he could go forth and argue just about how missing part of his spine and such would cause Athos to fall to a crippling pile... Except that it wouldn't do that to him, at all. Even if Jay wanted to claim that several parts of his organs and his spine was missing, and there was several reasons behind this... But they came back to his Jashinist Immortality, seeing Jay could've scooped out all of Athos' organs except for his brain and the man would've been just fine to keep living until malnutrition would take him over but other substitutes would've been able to been found by the time such a thing happened.

Had Jay taken the time to learn the Curse Technique: Death Controlling Possessed Blood, a move he hadn't learned the details of from Hazama, then he'd also be privy to the fact of how a Jashinist most usually kills their target. Obviously by digesting the blood of their opponent and then standing in a circle, but the most common method was to shove their weapon into their hearts. But it wasn't just something that stopped at the heart but usually an attack that would be thrust all the way through one's chest, that the exact area where Jay had thrust his hand. Now it would be silly for a Jashinist's own attack to cause him to become immobile but wounds to the chest and then out the other side was usually their preferred method.

That being said, while normally a body would crumble and lose their form, no such thing would happen to Athos. Like any Jashinist that had parts of their body blown off, he would still function as long as his body and head were connected. And for Jay, a man who fiended and clawed his way towards the Jashinist immortality, to be unaware of such a fact would lead to his downfall. No, as Jay would come towards Athos, he would not be jumping towards a lump of meat that was the Crimson Redhead but instead the same 6'7" figure of Athos. Hell, even if Jay wanted to say something crazy like Athos was shorter or something silly, it wouldn't stop him from being able to move and still being fully capable of being able to move.

That meant that, after his first Deadzone was released the second one would be cast and Jay, who now jumped towards Athos, would be throwing himself into it. With that, Jay would've just removed all of his own buffs from his body and give Athos the advantage against the Nara that he wanted originally. Athos would easily use his full powered speed to avoid Jay's seemingly slow motion curb stomp, disappearing as a literal blur before Jay's unenhanced eyes.



The above is what it would look like the second that Jay's feet touched the ground but unlike in the above, Jay would have no idea or feeling that Athos would be several feet behind him. There should be nothing that the armless and chakra-less figure of Jay should be able to do against such an attack, so assuming it went through, Athos would release a punch at, if given a percentage, would contain 85% of all of his raw strength, an amount he's never shown Jay before. And just like Genos had asked Saitama to show him just how strong he was, Jay had always done the same to Athos and today was the day that he showed him the limits and physics that Athos could shatter simply by existing. No attack that would be thrown at him from Jay would be able to rob him of any of his forward momentum, seeing the force that was behind his punch as it flew out was enough to do horrible damage.



In the time Jay's feet would touch the ground and that Athos would get behind him and release his punch wouldn't even be a whole second, closer only to a half of one. The force that was behind Athos' punch, not even the strength of it alone, was enough to carve away and destroy mountain ranges from just being near his arm when it swung. Being directly hit by the attack would resort in ranges and ranges, as wells villages, being blown away and demolished. If Jay had been able to access any of his skills, or anything, sure the man may have been able to do something against the force that was Athos but... Jay had jumped into Athos Long Term Deadzone, a move that had been played out last turn, and gave the Uzumaki his opening. As the punch would come in contact with Jay's back, assuming that it did, he'd have even less than half a second to know that this was the end. But the moment punch's force would meet Jay's body, all that would happen next is that Jay would stop existing and in his place would be a cloud of red paste and mist.

The force that traveled through his body would've bypassed his Strongest Shield and blown out all of his organs almost instantly, like a burnout in a race track and tires, also pulverizing and turning his bones to ash. The force that went through Jay's body would've caused even his Strongest Shield to be unable to handled it all, hence why the man would turn into a cloud of red, as well as the fact that the area in front of Athos for a good distance would be splattered with crimson red of Jay. There would be way living way for Jay to survive such a blow, or to still be alive even if he got caught by the attack and turned into paste.

With this, Athos would let out an annoyed breath through his nose and the fight that had went between the two of them for so long would have come to an abrupt end. Of course, if Jay somehow managed to try and dodge Athos' punch and the force that followed behind it, which also threatened to destroy and crippled Jay, then Athos would just follow through with two more devastating punches. Otherwise, the one punch would've been enough and Jay would be dead before he really even knew what had happened.


[[One Punch]]

If Jay somehow lived the first one;

[[Punch Two]]
[[Punch Three]]

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Council / Re: Motion for potential strip: 1 tails
« on: May 24, 2017, 03:55:28 AM »
I had been on but I had posted several days before that. I double checked since Rusaku's methods of telling time are tenuous at best but he's right I last posted some 15 days ago. Should be pretty apparent I'm busy right now so that's fine, Miyamoto can have Shukaku.

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Student Versus Sensei; Round One.
« on: May 21, 2017, 07:48:47 PM »
Acceptance? No, Jay would no better than that but there was definitely something else that started bubbling up inside of Athos as this fight took this expected turn. Well, expected OOCly more than ICly, though it definitely put the man into a weird position, but it really didn't matter. All this meant was that Athos was going to have to pull out all the stops, and give Jay exactly what he wanted of the man. Athos felt the foreign chakra that entered his body as Jay would start to place the seal and before it could be turned into a human cube, the man would show Jay his trump card in battle for the first time. From Athos, with only a thought of mind, would there come an invisible field that would flow from his body. Of course, Jay would've been able to see it if he had the Rinnegan, but neither of the men present had such abilities. In this zone he created, there would be no chakra that would actively or open exist and remove any that was active. Because of that, the chakra that was suddenly threatening to seal Athos, even inside of his own body, would be shut down. Of course, The Deadzone that Athos couldn't erase or undo the seal Jay had actually placed, otherwise all of Athos own Fuinjutsu would be undone every time he used it. But it saved the moment for a few seconds, and that was all he needed.

Assuming Jay's arm was still in his chest, seeing it had been removed from his body and not fully sealed, he'd use that to his advantage by bringing both of his hands violently towards his own chest. With this, the Nara's arm would be shoved through with great ease and explode out the other side of the large figure of Athos. And if Jay's arm wasn't there for some reason, he'd still slam his hands against his chest with enough force to get the same seal-removing effect. Most may think that such an act would be uncounted for and ridiculous but with this, Athos would have literally removed the seal that Jay had placed on him and also removing the threat of it once the short term Deadzone he had created would end. Of course, it went to note that when the Deadzone was activated Jay had narrowly escaped it's grasp and Athos' Seventh Gate was shut off as well.

As for what would happen as the Deadzone would come to an end, is exactly what Jay Nara had once asked as of Athos. With a single handseal, Athos would release the Restraint Seal that contained more than half his strength within it, allowing him to reach his full potential if he wanted. With this, calling on all of his strength and allowing Jay to notice it, even in his enhanced State Jay would most likely not be able to keep up with Athos. Perhaps the afterimages but Athos would show the man what the years of his training had turned him into, the redheaded man coming to be a foot or two behind Jay, having preformed three handseals as he moved.

As he got close to Jay, he'd release the jutsu he had cast, another Deadzone. This one, though, would be set to last for a total of five turns, and stretch for miles in each direction. It would be invisible to Jay and seeing Athos had already released the seal on his body, the speed his was using currently was nothing but natural, though as the Deadzone would come into contact with Jay, a variety of things would've come into effect. From the deactivation of any pesky Dojutsu, he'd find that all his healing factors and the Body Revival technique that he had activated would be shut down, possibly(most likely, I think) his Theta State as well. It'd also remove his defenses, such as his Natural armor and the likes, leaving him in the armless state that he was in.

Of course, the same would happen to Athos, only his golden hues to guide him and his natural strength. His healing factors would've also been stopped, but the hole in his side and chest would sadly not be enough to stop the man in his immortal state, hopefully allowing him to swing the tide of the fight easily in his direction, allowing him to be standing behind Jay with an... Arrogant(?) smirk on his face, though there was pride in Jay for the state of the fight and causing him to have to go to such levels to survive,"Boo!"


[Short Term Deadzone]
[Restraints Released]
[Long Term Deadzone, Five Rounds Left]

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Athos vs Jestar, Tank vs Magician!
« on: May 21, 2017, 07:29:15 PM »
It was an odd situation to be in, to say the least, especially for Athos. Even without having a heart in his body, he'd not fall victim to death. There was a plethora of reasons for this but all of them all came back to immortality. But even so, The man would take a resting seat before laying on his side, blood leaving his mouth as he tried to let out a sigh. It'd be weird to not have warm blood but still be alive... But for now he just wanted to recover, not worrying about the state that Jestar Nara currently. Athos' right hand would weave a few handseals and as he released a jutsu, he would wince and let out a long, slow groan. A space time barrier would stretch from around his form in two miles each direction, stopping Jestar from returning to the surrounding area assuming he'd even try such a thing.

But with Jestar unable to come back, that meant he'd have to appear outside the range and then attempt to land a death blow on Athos in his current state. At this point, it didn't matter if Jestar was alive or not, the redheaded man would not come after the man anymore. This would leave Athos the victor of this fight, even if the wounds Jestar suffered wouldn't kill him somehow in the end.

The bright light of Oken was still covering the immediate area, a chakra arm coming from Athos to hold the hilt of the weapon and keep the area bright and clear of any shadows, just in case. The Uzumaki's golden eyes would instead just watch the raging forest fire increase in size, letting out a pleased breath as he did.

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Student Versus Sensei; Round One.
« on: May 19, 2017, 11:55:39 PM »
Jay would indeed find his One Finger Nukite piercing through Athos' chest, but as he seemed to have suspected Athos was not a normal man. He had been given the body modifications of the Jashin religion and had been made an immortal. Thus, although Jay's arm would drive elbow deep into his torso and pierce his heart, he would not be affected by it.

As was also mentioned by Jay, suddenly appearing in front of the charging Athos would cause the man to crash into him and send them both into a tumble. However since Athos was able to keep his wits about himself even after being impaled he'd use this to his advantage. One hand would lash out lightning fast and attempt to grip Jay's remaining arm like an unbreakable vice while the other hand would again lash out with a One-Fingered Nukite and aim to again sever Jay's arm, this time at the shoulder, leaving the man quite disarmed (haw).

This all happened while they rolled and with Athos speed and strength increased by the 7th Gate on top of his absurd base levels this would hopefully leave Jay little recourse. An application of Added Weight Rock Technique on himself would cause their tumble to come to an abrupt end, Athos pinning Jay to the ground under his now increased weight. One final One Finger Nukite would lash out, this time at Jay's head, aiming to end the fight.


[One Finger Nukite]
[Added Weight Rock Technique]
[One Finger Nukite]

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Athos vs Jestar, Tank vs Magician!
« on: May 08, 2017, 08:14:40 PM »
There was a lot that people often missed about Athos and the way that he worked and fought, though one consistency was that he was constantly overestimating his power and underestimating the power of his opponents, another consistency was the fact that he never really prepared for Genjutsu... And he made a mental note to change something about that, or at least he would make if he managed to survive the next several moments. There was a lot to process, seeing as when Jestar would take over his shadow that not only Athos but Kyuubi would have been sucked up into a Genjutsu, though even if he hadn't captured Kyuubi in the attack, the Nine Tails couldn't have helped Athos escape since the Redhead hadn't mastered the Bijuu yet. But those were unimportant facts.

When Athos was placed into the genjutsu, the next thing that Jestar would have moved to done was remove the Uzuamki's heart from his chest. One could wonder how this type of thing would go about happening, seeing the man's skin was one of the hardest things in this realm and to teleport something it had to be in direct contact with it, i.e. a Hiraishin marker can only move a person and not their heart, unless specifically placed on their hearts. And no shadows had plunged into the depths of Athos' mouth to go and touch his heart, so he had to make sure he found out how the Nara managed to teleport his organs while never touching them but that was a question for another day. Now while Jestar claimed that the only way to get out of this Genjutsu would have been to break the shadow, anyone with the basic knowledge in Genjutsu knows that no matter the level of genjutsu that enough real physical pain is enough to shatter an illusion.

And like Jestar had so politely pointed out, while a wound like the one Athos suffered could prove fatal if he didn't have a chance to recover, it wouldn't be enough to instantly kill him... And if it needs to be said, having your heart suddenly ripped out of your chest is more than enough pain to shatter the illusion of most/all Genjutsu known in the realm. So while it was his own cleverness that would have gotten Jestar to this point, where Athos had no heart and the battle was turning in his favor, it'd be the actions of the same man that would free Athos from this bad set of circumstances. And that was when the battle would change, the blood from Athos' missing heart exploding out his mouth in a gurgle and then down his chin.

But then there'd be a flash of light as Athos would go to turn the battle, calling forth the infamous power of the Nine Tails Chakra Mode, where his form would be covered in a cloak of chakra that was a dark and almost musty red, like something with a bad case of rust. The color was because the red chakra of the Nine Tails mixing with Athos' own rust colored chakra but with this Athos didn't need to move, a hand coming from his hip made from the chakra construct that was the Nine Tails chakra Cloak and grasping the blade known as Oken and pulling it from it's sheath. The moment that the blade left the sheath there was an explosion, though not a literal one.

An unknown fact about Oken is, that while it gave Athos an edge against most physical fights, is that the redheaded man made sure to never use the weapons main ability. Because whether they saw this IC or OOC, people would never forget this simple trump card and so, being forced onto his last few legs right in the beginning of this fight, Athos had no choice but to show the secret Oken held. In an instant after his heart had been ripped from his chest all of the shadows from the area would be erased and what would be replaced was a blinding white light that would literally be seen from at least half a mile away, if not even a whole mile. The intensity that came from this explosion of light would have been enough to almost destroy Jestar's eyes and even though Athos had no idea he was using the Byakugan, this worked in the Uzumaki's Favor. Because Jestar had no way to know to deactivate his eyes and the man was literally able, as he said, to see everything including the back of his head... Even closing his eyes would do nothing to stop the man from, most likely, being effected by this blinding light and having his eyes almost destroyed to the point of uselessness, even with the infamous Byakugan.

But of course that wasn't all, though this didn't make it so that Jestar could no longer retreat into his Shadow Dimension or anything like this, seeing there would suddenly be no shadows for him to have taken over. But with the Nine Tails Chakra Cloak around his form and the shadows erased, Athos was moving on the same level as someone that had just entered Sage Mode so with an almost pained roar and not even a whole two seconds after his heart had been removed him his chest, Athos' right hand was drawing Oken fully from it's sheath and swiping in the area directly in front of him. But this wasn't just a swipe of his blade but instead Athos showing the last bit of Oken's features.

The weapon, still the source of the light, would been glowing an almost heavenly white as it would extend to nearly half of a football field's length, easily moving through the air and severing dozens upon dozens of trees that were in front of him and behind Jestar as he released this devastating attack. How was the blade able to reach these lengths? Well the blade had the ability to release a beam from it's tip that was capable of incinerating lesser things upon contact, meaning that each and every tree and stump that this blade touched would have caught on fire almost immediately and would have left to the large scale forest fire that'd take only a few seconds to encompass the whole forest.

But with this swing and Jestar hopefully being blinded by Athos' own sneak attack, the powerful Nara would hopefully find himself bisected at the stomach, where he would also lose both of his arms and then all of his internal organs as he would catch on fire and slide into several pieces. Of course these two overpowered attacks took a lot of chakra, though not actually a lot, it was definitely enough to cause the injured Athos to fall down onto a single knee. In less than a few moments Athos had hopefully escaped Jestar's jutsu and literally cut and lit the man on fire, ending his life and this fight.


[[Nine Tails Chakra Mode]]
[[Oken Blinding]]
[[Oken Slashing]]

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I dunno if this question goes for me, too >> But just don't turn me into a gag character. I am your father after all.

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Bijuu Arena / Re: Athos vs Jestar, Tank vs Magician!
« on: May 05, 2017, 03:20:50 AM »
Nara, that was a name that was familiar to him in many ways. Though many knew very little about the man that became known as Athos Uzumaki, the truth is that his mother was a Nara. And though he had been trained in it when he was younger, for awhile it was only his memories of her and what little skills he had to connect him to that part of his family. Until he met another esteemed Nara, one whose prowess was still talked about to this day. It was that same person that helped him notice his strength in the usage of shadows and helped him push to where he was now in regards to his control. But he didn't think this thought because he was going to challenge is opponent in the art, while it was a good skill Athos knew where his strengths were.

Nara. No, the reason that he thought about that was because it was a name that he respected and knew the strength behind. He knew not the man himself, at least not personally, but his last name alone was enough for Athos to regard him as a worthy opponent.

As Athos walked towards the forest, he did nothing to hide his terrifying chakra pool, or the presence of the Nine-Tailed Fox that rested inside of him. He was wary of the shadows that only got thick and more numerous as he proceeded deeper into the forest, but he showed no fear as he progressed. He had been to hell and back, there was little that could actually scare him, though there was something to always be wary about. Though many would call it a bad choice, Athos wore no shoes as he traversed through the forest, though as he moved it seemed he was unhindered by any small blockage and if someone saw the bottom of his feet, they would be completely clean.

He wore a dark black outfit with a dark red belt that was based around a tradition Karate outfit, though obviously it had been made to fit the towering six foot seven inch tall figure of Athos and made to cover his whole range of movement. His crimson hair flowed down his shoulders and to his waist, complimenting both his dark hair and tanned formed. The only visible markings on his body would be the tattoo that stretched from his wrist and up past his shoulder, though it also doubled as a Fuinjutsu, the Tattoo Design meant to hide the intricate seal. He carried two items on his form, a sword on his hip by the name of Oken and a scroll that rested just beneath the small of his back that contained his weapons and basic shinobi tools.

[/*He's close.*color]

The beast dwelling inside Athos uttered to him as they entered a part of the forest where the shadows seemed the darkest and there was almost no light breaking through. As Athos muttered his thanks to Kyuubi, they entered this area and it would become apparent that the strong golden hues of Athos would glow faintly in this darkness. Despite it, he could easily see his way around and he let out a soft grunt as he did, he knew he was in bad territory here.

But that didn't matter, Athos could feel the boy, too. He wasn't able to pick up on the emotions that Kyuubi was from the boy and even though they had worked on their bond, the Nine Tails didn't help him any further than that right now. But the man was a warrior through and through, something like feeling someone who had some strength to them became like another sense, almost. Regardless, he'd close in on the youth.. He had to be ready, he knew that the Nara would strike first now that he was in his den.

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Rules/Foundation / Re: Crazy Bijū Handling Idea
« on: May 02, 2017, 09:00:47 PM »
Sooo basically scrap the system we've all worked towards making better over the last year, even as this topic goes on people are aiming to make improvements... And then force everyone to make a new set of council rules, Bijuu rules, and so on just because you think this might work and that this might be slightly better than what we have going on?

I just... really can't with this topic.

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