1"Ichiraku's Ramen
You and Lee spend some time talking about the recent dwarf tossing competition. Not wanting to linger around another man for too long, so no one "wonders", you decide you should find something else to do."
maybe you could change this into something more "shinobi like" like...
shuriken tossing competition (or something else)
(better)...shuriken dart competition...
2
"Chuunin Mithras defeated Genin kimara while they were sleeping in their Dwelling."
could this be changed into:
<assulterr> defeated,(the) in a dwelling sleeping <victim>? (maybe something else, but you know what I mean)
3 Mericks stable
what about changing the dwarf into:
"a burly looking dwarf" -->a skinned figure... (or sth else like I said before...)