Print

Please login or register.
1 Hour 1 Day 1 Week 1 Month Forever
Login with username, password and session length

[Sasuke X]

You have to code it....

[Asadi]

Code is in place...you just have to swap out the text that's already in place.

[Sasuke X]

Well i didn't know that >_>; in that case i dunno why neji's not doing it ..... but for right now i don't really think he's got the time .-.

[Asadi]

-pets- Just kill Kabuto and read the text. That's all that is being replaced. Nothing to big or hard for anyone.  Even if they have a life.

[Isaribi]

I also like the text. I think its great 

[Makoto]

`QWith a swift blow, `@Kabuto`Q falls to his knees. Looking upon you, he laughs weakly, "`$Seems I miscalculated.`Q" the broken man tries to stand, but fails as you grab your weapon, "`$Bah!`Q" he yelled, "`$You're still no match for Lord Orochimaru. He's slain many Shinobi like you!`Q" `@Kabuto`Q gasps for air as he falls to the ground. With his last labored breath he curses your name.

Nobunaga hears `@Kabuto's`Q curse, and runs to the mouth of the cave. Seeing the fallen Nin, he runs to your side, eager to shake your hand, "`%Thank you, so very much! Now we may live in peace...`Q"

Near the corner of the cave, you see a young `^Academy Student`Q walking inside. Thinking nothing bad can come of it, you let the youngster on their way. Next to the cave you etch another marking, bringing your `@Kabuto`Q kills to [kills #].

In order:
t -> T;
, -> .;
yelled -> yells;
breath -> breath,;
, -> .;
their -> his;
cave -> cave,;

Few things. .-. Good job on it. ^_^

[Asadi]

It's been a while since I looked over the draft since the topic seems to go no where. .-. Thank you for pointing out the errors. The changes have been made.

`QWith a swift blow, `@Kabuto`Q falls to his knees. Looking upon you, he laughs weakly, "`$Seems I miscalculated." `QThe broken man tries to stand, but fails as you grab your weapon. `$"Bah!"`Q he yells. `$"You're still no match for Lord Orochimaru. He's slain many Shinobi like you!" `@Kabuto`Q gasps for air as he falls to the ground. With his last labored breath, he curses your name.

Nobunaga hears `@Kabuto's`Q curse, and runs to the mouth of the cave. Seeing the fallen Nin, he runs to your side, eager to shake your hand. `%"Thank you, so very much! Now we may live in peace..."`Q

Near the corner of the cave, you see a young `^Academy Student`Q walking inside. Thinking nothing bad can come of it, you let the youngster on his way. Next to the cave, you etch another marking, bringing your `@Kabuto`Q kills to [kills #].