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Neji

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #465 on: May 28, 2007, 01:56:58 AM »
erm, this could be a
* Neji says aegerly,


I don't remember putting an "eagerly" in a chat. if you don't state the location ;) ...
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #466 on: May 28, 2007, 01:57:55 AM »
Location: in a dwelling when you want to post something

(?? aegerly ??)
Edit: Do you want a screenshot?
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #467 on: May 28, 2007, 04:26:34 PM »
you can set your own talkline in a dwelling.

that is the problem.... somebody was not able to write there ;) it's no bug.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #468 on: May 28, 2007, 04:58:28 PM »
Oh yeah ok then sorry
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #469 on: May 28, 2007, 05:26:57 PM »
 :D no big deal.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #470 on: May 29, 2007, 01:24:12 AM »
Look: You find the strength to open your eyes, and find yourself staring at a tiny fairy who, flying just above your face is inadvertently sprinkling its fairy dust all over you, granting you the power to crawl once again to your feet

arnt you getting rid of the fairys?
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #471 on: May 29, 2007, 08:49:39 AM »
Now, where might you have encountered this...
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #472 on: May 30, 2007, 02:55:38 AM »
The forest event when you drink the spring and lose almost all your hp because your lucks horrible ><
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #473 on: May 30, 2007, 10:01:24 AM »
Quote
Your final thought is that although you defeated the Orochimaru, you reflect on the irony that it defeated you.

I know he is a villain and all, but it reads a bit awkward to me.  Of course, it might just be me.

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Your final thought is that although you defeated Orochimaru, you reflect on the irony that he defeated you.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #474 on: May 30, 2007, 10:04:10 AM »
fix0rated
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #475 on: May 30, 2007, 06:55:07 PM »
The Lady of the Lake--

You gaze upon the surface of the pool, uncertain of what you appearance may tempt.

(your)


Expecting some Faerie Goddess to jump out of the lake, only to find nothing make you feel rather silly.

(makes) (Actually this whole sentence is kind of awkward.. maybe "Expecting some Faerie Goddess to jump out of the lake, only finding nothing makes you feel rather silly.")
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #476 on: May 30, 2007, 09:45:18 PM »
fixed
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Fiyona

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« Reply #477 on: May 31, 2007, 04:40:34 AM »
THE LADY OF THE LAKE (again)


The wind rages, whipping the trees surrounding the lake into a frenzy for falling leaves. You stumble backwards as waves of water begin to swell and the howling wind bites your cheeks you with depreciation she says:"You hideous thing! How dare you gaze into these sacred waters! Begone!".


(I'm not really sure what was going on in that sentence, but.. "you" doesn't fit there. Perhaps "You stumble.......and the howling wind bites your cheeks. With depreciation she says......")
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #478 on: May 31, 2007, 03:05:46 PM »
fix0rated.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #479 on: May 31, 2007, 09:46:55 PM »
THE STOP THE VILLAN'S EVIL PLANS EVENT


You walk through the forest, cutting away the underbrush with your Bloody Rǿse Thorn. You are in the right mood to kill any of those vicious creatures lurking near the road, ready to attack any traveller nearby. Your are quickly moving on your way so you don't recognize the shadow appearing from behind a tree and slowly approaching you from your blindside.

(You are)

(Also... do you care about inappropriate use of punctuation such as commas? I see them everywhere, but don't post them because I'm pretty sure the majority of users don't know how to use them properly since they are younger. Caring about punctuation was hammered into my brain violently because of Honors and AP English classes. >_<; Just wondering... because the comma problem is really bad. If you don't care, that's fine too. I'll just keep ignoring them.)
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