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Neji

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #495 on: June 04, 2007, 12:40:57 PM »
even minor errors are errors ;)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #496 on: June 04, 2007, 02:48:39 PM »
Ok, you'll be hearing from me often, then. ^_^ Hope you don't get sick of me...  :oops:



HINATA IN THE FOREST

There before you is a beautiful maiden... it is Hinata!.


(double punctuation)


LADY OF THE LAKE

You listen carefully then watch as LoneStrider brush past and stealthily takes his leave of you. Once the rogue is gone, you realize one of your gempouchs are missing!

(brushes) (gem pouches)


THE FERRYMAN

The figure points to a cup. You see a sign that reads, "25 gold to cross".

(period belongs inside quotation mark)


KONOHA GAKURE INTRO

No one seems to pay much attention to you as they all seem absorbed in their own lives and problems.

(needs a comma in between the words)
« Last Edit: June 04, 2007, 03:02:28 PM by Fiyona »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #497 on: June 04, 2007, 03:07:59 PM »
I'm sorry I didn't mean to double post, I had accidentally clicked quote instead of modify on my last post. T_T



WATER COUNTRY FOUNTAIN

Walking over to the large, circular fountain in the center of the town, you take a moment to gaze upon it's calm, reflective waters and the ornate font within it's center.

Near you, villagers are gathered around the fountain engaged in conversation while small children sit along it's edge, dangling their feet into it's chilled waters.

(no apostrophes when talking about possessions)
« Last Edit: June 04, 2007, 03:09:18 PM by Fiyona »
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #498 on: June 04, 2007, 03:08:54 PM »
You've been reading the whole game haven't you ?  :roll:
good work =p
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Fiyona

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #499 on: June 04, 2007, 03:15:28 PM »
Quote from: Shukaku on June 04, 2007, 03:08:54 PM
You've been reading the whole game haven't you ?  :roll:
good work =p


Heh. Neji is a good influence on me... he makes me want to read! My parents would be so proud... *sheds tears of joy*

And it gives me something to do while my packing slips print out on the slowest printer ever found in any workplace ever. T_T
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #500 on: June 04, 2007, 04:15:30 PM »
 :shock:

all fixed.

well, thanks for the effort.
(also it does happen often that somebody says  I have a good influence...)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #501 on: June 04, 2007, 05:07:57 PM »
Lady of the lake

Tis just a moment of fun to

Well looks wrong but I´m not a native so...
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Fiyona

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #502 on: June 04, 2007, 05:21:32 PM »
I say "tis" all the time... ^^ It's just a short way to say "it is."

And.. I'm going to stop posting today because.. um.. yeah. >_>; *flees*
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #503 on: June 04, 2007, 06:02:35 PM »
 :twisted:
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Fiyona

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #504 on: June 04, 2007, 09:13:58 PM »
I... couldn't resist. Sorry.  :oops:



THE FOREST MERCHANT

He opens his coat and you see quite a few stuff arranged in rows on the inside of his coat.

(redundancy makes it awkward… it sounds better if you just leave it at “in rows on the inside.”)


"Well, that's what I can do for you... See you later!

(missing end quotation mark)


WATER COUNTRY INTRO

Water Country, Water country, is home to heavy mist. Profoundly run by the infamous Gatoh. This town seems rather poor.

(Water Country is doubled)


As you walk past one of the poorest looking old women you've ever seen you ask the time
and she tells you that it is 11:19 am before walking away.

(Need comma after time and delete line break)


MISSION HEADQUARTERS

The wood-panelled walls are covered with anime wall scrolls and weapons.

(Paneled)

In the chair closest to the fire sits Shikamaru, reading a book called 'Come Come Paradise'. You wonder about that as he is too young for an R rated book...

(period belongs inside apostrophe mark)


BATTLE ARENA

If you lose against an fighter here, you will also lose battlepoints.
(a)
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #505 on: June 04, 2007, 10:46:56 PM »
fixed.

yet: wood-panelled is right, the "l" gets reduplicated, I looked it up.

Also, are you sure that the quotation marks belong *in* the apostrophes once a new sentence is attached?
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Fiyona

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #506 on: June 05, 2007, 12:46:02 AM »
My apologies, I was mistaken. The punctuation only belongs in the quote if it is a part of the quote, it doesn't apply to book titles.

As to panelled, I've always spelled it paneled, I just looked it up too.. apparently you can use either. @_@
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #507 on: June 05, 2007, 04:05:00 AM »
Leon crosses you, "So, you  really wish to leave the Guild?"

Leon should be itachi...
its when asking you second through last time time for when you wish to leave akatsuki

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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #508 on: June 05, 2007, 12:38:31 PM »
fixed.
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Re: Text Issues
« Reply #509 on: June 06, 2007, 03:21:44 AM »
I am not sure if this is one but when I go to my outbox in the upper area it says "Ye Olde Poste Office"...............is that right??
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